Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.
Secret Love chapter 5
I continue : ” You know where I live now And I’ll be waiting for you and I won’t disappear I promise ”
A strange look appears in her eyes Not fear, but something stronger than fear Something that is not giving me a good feeling about it Something like a I don’t know if my girl will approve or something stupid like it I really don’t want to know Why did I opened my mouth? I could’ve stayed right there and wait for her And never said a thing about leaving the party Which I think that is soon over What time is it anyway I take a look at my watch and notice that it’s 2 am Wow I’ve been here longer than I thought and I practically said nothing to the other guests What antisocial human being I make
Shane is popping me out of my moment of thinking when she says : ” I’ll go to the bathroom and I’ll see you tomorrow maybe If I have the time..,”
OUCH!
That really hurts She can’t be serious She cried when I said I was sorry. She kissed me. I just invited her to my place in the morning so we could talk The thing she just said is like a slap on the face A way of saying thanks but no thanks because I really don’t want to have anything to do with you. A way of saying that we just can’t be
OUCH!
” Ok, it’s like you want You decide ” I say as my eyes are getting full of water.
So she leaves the backyard and goes into the house A little while after I go into the house as well And then I see her taking the turn into the corridor where is the bathroom. I look at the people And I really don’t want to be here anymore I search for Marina but she had already left the building So I search for my initial friend, and she is very, very busy with a chick I see Alice and walk towards her
” Thank you for the party Alice And I’ll see you around! We have to talk! You have so many things to say to me!”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



i love the story but im have a hard time understanding who the other person is , is it jenny or carmen or someone eles well i still love ur storys there so kool bye allison
I started out totally psyched; the suspense of not knowing who the character was. But now, 5 chapters later, and still not knowing the mystery woman, is pushing me to the tired-of-waiting point.
I dont know how to say it in a nice way, but I am starting to get bored with the story.
MMMMM.. SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!! (a finger on the nose)
LOVE THE NEW CHARACTER!!!!!!!!!!
I wouldn’t be Carmen, Could be Jenny. Everyone loves a mystery. I do. Loving this. Thanks
I’m enjoying your story, can’t wait until the next installment. I already like this character, should be interesting to see the dynamics between she & Shane.
Hey, guys.. Did you really read previous post? This mysterious woman said “You knew it was me because Jenny told you…”….. Mel! It’s your story! you can do anything to your creature and make any past between she and Shane. Your fic is just my pleasure~