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Sensory Overload
“Up next a smooth classic from Brian Adams on 102.9 the Rock.”
”Have You Ever Really Loved A Woman”
To really love a woman
To understand her –you gotta know her deep inside
Hear every thought – see every dream
N’ give her wings – when she wants to fly
Then when you find yourself lyin’ helpless in her arms
Ya know ya really love a woman
When you love a woman you tell her that she’s really wanted
When you love a woman you tell her that she’s the one
Cuz she needs somebody to tell her that it’s gonna last forever
So tell me have you ever really – really really ever loved a woman?
To really love a woman
Let her hold you – til ya know how she needs to be touched
You’ve gotta breathe her – really taste her
Til you can feel her in your blood
N’ when you can see your unborn children in her eyes
Ya know ya really love a woman
When you love a woman you tell her that she’s really wanted
When you love a woman you tell her that she’s the one
Cuz she needs somebody to tell her that you’ll always be together
So tell me have you ever really – really really ever loved a woman?
You got to give her some faith – hold her tight
A little tenderness – gotta treat her right
She will be there for you, takin’ good care of you
Ya really gotta love your woman…
As the song played I found myself getting lost in the lyrics. I sat frozen, just taking it all in and then, like a bitch slap to the face…BAM!
Fuck me! I’m in love with her. I’m in LOVE with HER?
This has never happened to me before. I’ve never allowed myself to get too close! What have I done? Honestly, I don’t think I had any choice in the matter!
The mighty Bette Porter has fallen!
TKO’d Yes, Tina Kennard Obsessed.
I cannot help the smile that has taken up residence on my face. I don’t think it will be leaving any time soon either. This is what love feels like huh? Ok, I can deal with this. Wow, who would have thought, Bette Porter, in love?
I spent the rest of the evening contemplating this new discovery and passed out around 9:00pm out of shear exhaustion. I slept through the night blissfully entertained with dreams of my T. Yes, my T. That beautiful angel who has stolen my heart. Perfection.
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(20 votes, average: 4.85 out of 5)
Absolutely loved it. Had me laughing. Thanks
This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.
You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.
It was very funny.
Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…
Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…
Yes I agree we need another chapter pretty please by the way this was so good pps.
fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
Bette and Tina love.
I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
You’re a great writer.
Congratulations!
anxious for a new chapter…
You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.
Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!
It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)
Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.
Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!
Thanks! I love Bette like this in their relationship. By that I mean unsure of herself! Too cute! PPS
Love it,please continue writing.
I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
I really love the way you write your story.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Brilliant. The “major Tom” bit made me laugh like a maniac for some reason. (and now that song is stuck in my head, lol)
Very enjoyable glad there will be more to come. A fun read for sure.
Great story and funny. Can’t wait for the next post. Maybe some nc17, hint hint. Thanks
Lovely tale! So emotional and yet funny. I wish we could see this story of yours going forward. Thank you!
Loved it!! Thank you
Great story loved it..