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Sensory Overload
Well, one thing’s for sure. If you don’t shower and get some sleep, I don’t think you’re going to have to worry about staying away from her. She’s not going to want to come within 50 feet of this place!”
“Ok Al, I get it. I’ll shower. Jesus! Thanks for being so understanding.”
“I’m sorry Bette, but come on. You have to admit, you’ve let it go a little too far.”
“I know and I said I’ll take care of it.”
“Great! Well, I’m gonna go. I think you need some more time to figure this out. I’ll call you tomorrow to check on you. Do you need anything?” “
No, I think maybe I’ll go for a swim and just sit outside for a while. Maybe some of that California sunshine will do me some good. I’ll make myself a sandwich too. I do feel a little better just talking about it, so maybe I can sleep tonight.”
“Ok, well, I’ll talk to you later. Good luck.”
“Thanks Al.”
I can’t believe that was it! It must be worse than I thought if Alice Pieszecki, the mouth of WeHo, doesn’t press the issue. Ok, I should definitely shower.
She leaves and I wander into the kitchen to make that sandwich. I haven’t been able to keep anything down in days, so this will be a light meal to test the waters. I made my sandwich and went into the bedroom to put on a swimsuit then took the food out back to sit by the pool. After eating and letting my body have some time to digest, I started to feel a little stronger and decided a swim would feel good to my tired and aching muscles. No laps today, just a nice soak. After about 30 minutes in the pool, I think I’m ready for that much needed shower, so I make my way back into the house. After my shower I took some time to clean up the house a bit as I have neglected it all week. Then, I sat on the couch with my laptop to see if I could get a little work done regarding my upcoming show. I decided a little background music might be nice while I’m working so I turned on the radio to my favorite local rock station. They play a lot of Aerosmith, so I tend to keep the tuner locked in there.
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(20 votes, average: 4.85 out of 5)
Absolutely loved it. Had me laughing. Thanks
This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.
You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.
It was very funny.
Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…
Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…
Yes I agree we need another chapter pretty please by the way this was so good pps.
fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
Bette and Tina love.
I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
You’re a great writer.
Congratulations!
anxious for a new chapter…
You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.
Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!
It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)
Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.
Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!
Thanks! I love Bette like this in their relationship. By that I mean unsure of herself! Too cute! PPS
Love it,please continue writing.
I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
I really love the way you write your story.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Brilliant. The “major Tom” bit made me laugh like a maniac for some reason. (and now that song is stuck in my head, lol)
Very enjoyable glad there will be more to come. A fun read for sure.
Great story and funny. Can’t wait for the next post. Maybe some nc17, hint hint. Thanks
Lovely tale! So emotional and yet funny. I wish we could see this story of yours going forward. Thank you!
Loved it!! Thank you
Great story loved it..