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    Sensory Overload

    Story written on July 30, 2014 by RobbieRob.
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    Words: 6880
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=86273
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    With that first touch of tongues my taste buds explode! It’s an exotic flavor. I’ve never tasted anything like it! It’s a mixture of succulent sweetness. How to describe it? Skittles! Oh, I’m tasting the rainbow all right! I could kiss her forever. The sound of the doorbell brings me back to reality. I take

    With that first touch of tongues my taste buds explode! It’s an exotic flavor. I’ve never tasted anything like it! It’s a mixture of succulent sweetness. How to describe it? Skittles! Oh, I’m tasting the rainbow all right! I could kiss her forever.

    The sound of the doorbell brings me back to reality. I take a deep breath, count to 10, and prepare myself for an interrogation session that could rival even the best of military tactics. Alice. If the government only knew of her special “talent” to get people to spill their innermost thoughts and darkest secrets. I’d certainly feel sorry for enemies of the state. Hell, I feel sorry for myself right now!

    I drag my sorry ass to the door and open it slowly with a hand over my face to block out the daylight. I haven’t left my house in 3 days, and I’ve kept all the lights off, so my eyes are sensitive.

    Wait for it…

    “What the fuck happened to you? You look like shit Porter! And, what’s that smell? Jesus, are you leading the resistance against personal hygiene these days?”

    “Hi Al. It’s nice to see you too.”

    “I’m sorry Porter, but seriously! What the fuck is going on?”

    “Come on in. Do you want something to drink?”

    “No, but I think you could use some liquids, like maybe a shower!”

    She comes in slumps down on the couch with her arms across her chest giving me an exasperated look while waiting for an explanation regarding my current state. I close the door and move slowly to sit in the arm chair to the right of the couch.

    “Ok, so spill it!”

    After a few more deep breaths and another 10 count, I accept my fate and begin to explain my current symptoms and self diagnosis. I recount the recent events leading to my disheveled appearance. She just sits quietly and throws in a nod every now and then. I can’t believe she’s not bombarding me with questions, but I’m not complaining either.

    “So, that’s pretty much it in a nut shell. I believe I’m suffering from a severe case of sensory overload.”

    “Fuck”

    “Yeah”

    “What are you gonna do?”

    “I don’t know? I have 2 days until T gets back.” “

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    2. This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.

      You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.

      It was very funny.

    3. Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…

    4. Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…

    6. fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
      Bette and Tina love.
      I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
      You’re a great writer.
      Congratulations!
      anxious for a new chapter…

    7. You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.

    8. Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!

      It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)

      Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.

    9. Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!

    12. I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
      I really love the way you write your story.
      I look forward to the next chapter.

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