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Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part20
“What’s up sweetness?” Shane said tiredly, her words coming out mumbled as her cheek lazy crushed against the pillow.
Carmen reached a delicate hand down and stroked Shane’s short locks.
“Come on.”
“Hmm?”
“Come to bed okay? I heard you fall. I know your not sleeping here, we can handle being in the same bed together and not attacking each other, I think,” Carmen said sarcastically. Though deep down she desperately wanted to ***** Shane up. Especially after today’s performance got her all hot. But, for the bet, she would keep her hands to herself.
“I don’t know-”
“Please baby? I can’t sleep without your arms around me,” Carmen whispered softly, her finger tips lingering over Shane’s ***** as she knelt down to her level.
“I can’t sleep without your body against mine either, I miss you,” Shane said, her voice sounding more awake then it had the whole day. Her words made Carmen shiver and she had to close her eyes and think about how lucky she was.
“Good. Then it’s settled.”
Carmen grabbed Shane’s hand and lead the half sleeping girl back to her room. She pushed her onto the bed lightly and went back to turn off the light as she heard Shane shuffling to get under the covers. Carmen slid under the now cool, cotton sheets and sighed contently. She moved as close to Shane as she could possibly get her body half on top of the other girl.
“I love you Shaney.”
“I love you to Car. More than anything,” Shane said softly as she nestled her cheek against Carmen’s soft, fruity smelling hair. Carmen almost let a tear slide down her cheek in the dark, but instead smiled and pressed a feather light kiss to the inside of Shane’s nearest forearm.
“Goodnight.”
“Goodnight.”
Chapter 50
The burning between her thighs was almost to much to bare. She moaned out to the darkness.
“Carmen.”
The voice echoed, resounding in her head, her brain her ears? Shane blinked, suddenly aware she had called out Carmen’s name while she had been sleeping. She looked down at the mocha skinned goddess in her arms. It was now morning and she had the first good sleep in days.
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(45 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
loved this chapter!!! nice update. already cant wait for the next one.
The freak
Love your story. I just love carmen and shane. Update soon please lol.
I love your story, it always makes my day when I see that you’ve posted so please, please, please, post soon.
okay, that was just HOT!!
so so good. cant wait for the next update!
please post this is my faouvorite sharmen!!!
hi bum! i read ur comment! :p and you’re right. sucha funny and sweet story.. wonder why it’s been at that.. sighh..
dude pleaze finish this fic…wanna kno who stole shanes journal not to mention the hotness that is sharmen…pleeeeeeeeze come back!!!!
I reeeally freakin love this story, they’re so cute when they’re trying to resist each other. My favorite part of this story .. when shane says “i know… bitches.” It made me laugh b/c I say that all the time, I’m like “Somebody drank all the apple juice. bitches.” And I’m sure you don’t care … but um, I love the story either way, keep the fab updates coming!
Loccccccccccccccve Shane and Carmen together they are so cute together/ thanks
Such a sweet laugh…after all the “hotness” that was and should’ve/ could’ve been…Thanks
I love this story… I want more more… This Shane and Carmen you have in mind is just so cute and so adorable. And Happy.
Damm too cute shane & carmen are too cute!!please update soon this a greate fic ..and I think the one that stolld shanes book was sherry or another crazy …
yay
lol i love the i walked in on shane and carmen getting dirrrty club!
Damn those interruptions! That was funny as hell, especially how everyone was picking on them. It was great, post soon.
That was great. I love your story. Can’t wait for the next update.
love your writing! (^0^)/ keep the updates coming in!!
loved this update, as usual. seriously love this fic. and yeh i was also a huge fan of the dirrrty club. hah ohh i so cannot wait for the next bit.
-kb
I usually don’t leave any comments, but I have to tell you something about this story… it’s ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! :P
can’t wait to read the next update…
AH! I’m going through withdrawls, I’ve reread this soo many times, I hope an update comes soon! I know you’re busy, but I can’t wait!
thats some very graphic writing…. muy kudos***loving it keep it upUpUP!!!
Okay so I decided to try and read all the Chapter’s before commenting, but since right now this is the last one you posted I’ll comment now, I can’t wait for more, This is probably the best fic I’ve read and besides I love “Sharmen” :D Pleaase Post Again Soon, or whenever you can. I know I’ll be waiting… and kinda dying at the same time.. haha.. if ya know what I mean. lol, jk… kinda.
I doubt anyone will read this, but three years later and I still love this story. Fuckin amazing.