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Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part20
“Shane,” She whispered in a hushed voice. But Shane was to quick and her right hand darted back up her body and grazed her nipple, the stayed there to tease it. She took a few more much need breaths and kissed Carmen again, with lots and lots of tenderness, and attention to detail. When Carmen didn’t stop her, Shane thought ‘***** it’, and withdrew her knee. Carmen groaned at the loss, but the sucked in her complaint as Shane replaced her knee with her self. She pressed her own groin against Carmen’s throbbing, wet centre. Carmen moved her hips upward, gasping at all the teasing Shane was doing. She threw her ***** against Shane, marvelling at the sound Shane made as she did.
She kissed her again, this time rawer, faster, harder and with more passion. Carmen grabbed Shane’s right hand and held in around the wrist. She placed it between their bodies and pushed it downwards slowly.
“Shane, I thought you slept on the couch- oh my god, sorry,” Moira said as she rush out of the room.
Shane groaned as she let her body collapse, defeated, onto Carmen’s. Carmen bit her lower lip as her hand fluttered to her forehead. The want and need between her legs was now to great.
“*****.”
“Yeah.”
“We can’t anyway.”
“I know, I just-”
“Don’t even tell me about ‘you just’. I’m the one that started it. I just can’t look at you in the morning without needing to kiss and touch you and hold you and be with you. You just look, like like-”
“An angel?” Carmen asked with a knowing smile.
“Yeah- how’d you know?”
“That’s what you look like in the mornings too.” They both blushed and realized they had some damage control to do, seeing as how it was Moira’s first time and all. Walking in on them that is.
Chapter 51
“So you caught them doing it?” Dana asked in disbelief.
“We were not doing it,” Carmen said, already annoyed with this conversation.
“Yeah!” Shane said defensively. “We were just about to.” She added with a smiled. For which she received a shot in the arm from Carmen.
“Ow.”
“Well, about to isn’t the same as actually doing it,” Alice sighed. “I guess your off the hook.. This time. But this just convinced me that you guys are so not going to make it,” she ended happily.
“On another note, Moira, I’d like to welcome you to the ‘I walked in on Shane and Carmen getting dirrrty’ club. All previous members, please raise your right hand,” Drew said seriously. All of them smiled as 4 hands crept up. That’s five people if you include Moira. Carmen was in disbelief.
“Okay Jenny, yes a few times actually that reminds me, you need to knock girl. And Drew, yeah one time, but Bette and Alice? Wouldn’t we remember if you had?”
“I saw you through a window as I was walking across the path between our houses I didn’t want to say anything,” Bette said, sounding timid for one of the first times in her life. Carmen looked at her astonished, then nodded understandingly.
“Alice?”
“One time you were going at in the bathroom stall at Milk, technically I didn’t see any goods, but I was in the same room as you. Well for a second, then I got the ***** outta there,” Alice said shaking her head as Dana comforted her fianc.
Shane and Carmen sat with their mouths open as everyone laughed. They rolled their eyes and crossed their arms almost in sync.
“It’s not even funny.” Carmen said.
“I know *****.” Shane mumbled.
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(45 votes, average: 3.64 out of 5)
loved this chapter!!! nice update. already cant wait for the next one.
The freak
Love your story. I just love carmen and shane. Update soon please lol.
I love your story, it always makes my day when I see that you’ve posted so please, please, please, post soon.
okay, that was just HOT!!
so so good. cant wait for the next update!
please post this is my faouvorite sharmen!!!
hi bum! i read ur comment! :p and you’re right. sucha funny and sweet story.. wonder why it’s been at that.. sighh..
dude pleaze finish this fic…wanna kno who stole shanes journal not to mention the hotness that is sharmen…pleeeeeeeeze come back!!!!
I reeeally freakin love this story, they’re so cute when they’re trying to resist each other. My favorite part of this story .. when shane says “i know… bitches.” It made me laugh b/c I say that all the time, I’m like “Somebody drank all the apple juice. bitches.” And I’m sure you don’t care … but um, I love the story either way, keep the fab updates coming!
Loccccccccccccccve Shane and Carmen together they are so cute together/ thanks
Such a sweet laugh…after all the “hotness” that was and should’ve/ could’ve been…Thanks
I love this story… I want more more… This Shane and Carmen you have in mind is just so cute and so adorable. And Happy.
Damm too cute shane & carmen are too cute!!please update soon this a greate fic ..and I think the one that stolld shanes book was sherry or another crazy …
yay
lol i love the i walked in on shane and carmen getting dirrrty club!
Damn those interruptions! That was funny as hell, especially how everyone was picking on them. It was great, post soon.
That was great. I love your story. Can’t wait for the next update.
love your writing! (^0^)/ keep the updates coming in!!
loved this update, as usual. seriously love this fic. and yeh i was also a huge fan of the dirrrty club. hah ohh i so cannot wait for the next bit.
-kb
I usually don’t leave any comments, but I have to tell you something about this story… it’s ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! :P
can’t wait to read the next update…
AH! I’m going through withdrawls, I’ve reread this soo many times, I hope an update comes soon! I know you’re busy, but I can’t wait!
thats some very graphic writing…. muy kudos***loving it keep it upUpUP!!!
Okay so I decided to try and read all the Chapter’s before commenting, but since right now this is the last one you posted I’ll comment now, I can’t wait for more, This is probably the best fic I’ve read and besides I love “Sharmen” :D Pleaase Post Again Soon, or whenever you can. I know I’ll be waiting… and kinda dying at the same time.. haha.. if ya know what I mean. lol, jk… kinda.
I doubt anyone will read this, but three years later and I still love this story. Fuckin amazing.