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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…

    Story written on June 19, 2005 by CasperFanFirst.
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    This is a Shane and Carmen fic. Have a good idea of where this is going, so plan on some twists and turns… but other then that, just enjoy!

    Aw! Thats so cute! Bette sighed, sitting down across from them. Shane lifted her head and almost avoided a blush. Carmen laughed and took the opportunity to push her off of her. Thank you! You saved me! Carmen gasped, clutching her chest. Anytime! Bette smiled and sipped her coffee.

    Chapter 6

    Oh Dios!. Vamos, estar bien mi pequea neurtica preocupada, Carmen babbled in Spanish as she pulled Shane from the truck, both feet planted firmly on the ground, huffing and puffing as she tugged on her arm. Shane snatched her arm away and gave Carmen an alarmingly warning look, Dont- do that, she raised a finger and wagged it in her face, panting as if from emotional exhaustion. What? Carmen asked innocently, batting her lashes and stroking Shanes thigh. You know what. Dont speak Spanish, god not now! You know what the does to me! Shane said, literally worried. She blushed under her aviators and brushed Carmens hand away.

    Alright, alright. I admit, Im guilty. I knew what I was doing at the time when I used said Spanish on you. But I was just trying to loosen you up- Oh you loosened me up alright. God, Carmen! Ok. Jesus I said Im sorry. And if it makes you feel better all I said was Oh God. Come on, itll be fine my little neurotic worrier! see not so ***** in English! Carmen ventured. Shane smiled, then her face went serious again. C, Im really worried. I dont know I think Im going to blow it with your mother. Plus you just got me turned on before we go in there, and Im supposed to act straight and I dont think I can do that and did you know that not a lot of people invite me over to their mothers house and oh my god are you siblings going to be there oh my god is this some kind of family fiesta! Shane rushed the words together, forgetting to breath, Carmen laughed and tried to calm her down.

    Shane breathed rhythmically and looked pleadingly at her. Do we hav- Yes! We have to. Its ok, my mother doesnt suspect anything, plus Ive slept at home every night this week so she thinks. And youll do fine, they will love you! They? Ya well, its not like extended family, just two of my nin- sorry- sisters, and one brother and my mother. Itll be find, and theyll be a great distraction if anything happens, Carmen said suggestively.

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    6. Corrections of your Spanish (I’m guessing that you used a translator and didn’t even take the time investigating):

      ‘Oh God. Come on, it’ll be fine my little neurotic worrier!’ in Spanish will be: “Oh Dios!. Vamos, estará bien mi pequeña neurótica preocupada”.

      Second, in this line: “Gall me Mercedes! Gome in, gome in!” is so wrong in so many levels… Spanish people tend to remark the “C”

      “This is Shane, hermanos… Yo! Atención, opinión hola usted fuckers!”
      I don’t know what you were trying to say here.

      “¿Su amigo atractivo tiene un novio?” in Spanish will be: “Tu amiga es atractiva, tiene novio?”

      “¡Infierno ningún usted!” (No idea what you were trying to say)
      “Ella está de límites” right way: “Ella esta fuera de limites”.

      “You’re my niño now!”
      Niño= boy
      Niña= girl

      “Carmella!” Names are the same in Spanish and Eglish, to say more, Carmen is a Spanish name. “What about that Paublo” Pablo will be the right way.

      For my Spanish credentials (so that you don’t think that I don’t know nothing), I was born and raised in Argentina and I’m a Spanish Literature professor (also an English Literature professor). If you ever need help just write, I’ll be glad to offer a hand and stop people from mangling my language.

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