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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…

    Story written on June 19, 2005 by CasperFanFirst.
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    This is a Shane and Carmen fic. Have a good idea of where this is going, so plan on some twists and turns… but other then that, just enjoy!

    At some point while they were talking, Carmen had managed to get Shane out of the truck and to the front door, which they were now knocking on. Shanes eyes opened wide as she realized this. Nothing is going to happen, Shane said firmly, they heard rattling on the other side of the door and Carmen jumped up and pecked Shane on the cheek quickly before it opened. She opened her mouth as if to resist but when Mrs. Morales opened the door she instead smile stupidly.

    Hola! Mi beb! Mrs. Morales exclaimed and nearly jumped through the screen to give Carmen a hug. Ma! I saw you last night! I know! I miss you. You mus be Jane? Mrs. Morales said, turning to Shane. Shane smiled self-consciously and nodded. Its nice to meet you Mrs. Morales- Aye, no child. Call me Mercedes! Come in, come in! Carmens mother ushered them in her thick accent making Shane smile. Is it still *****? Carmen asked seductively in Shanes ear as Mercedes took their coats to the next room. Shane cocked an eyebrow, then realized that Carmen meant her mothers accent. She made a sick face and shook her head furiously. Carmen laughed and pulled her to the living room. Raul, Justise, and Mariah, Carmen said, squeezing Shanes hand as she slathered on the accent and pointed to her brother, and both of her sisters, saying their names. Shane gripped Carmens hand so hard her knuckles turned white. They all waved without pulling their eyes off the TV. Shane nodded. This is Shane, hermanos. Yo! Atiende fuckers! Carmen exclaimed. All three finally looked up and plastered smiled on their faces as. They each said hello politely and Carmen shook her head as Shane blushed and laughed.

    Raul looked at Shane seductively and asked Carmen something absentmindedly as his eyes devoured her. Tu amiga es atractiva, tiene novio? El infierno no! Ella esta fuera de limites, Carmen yelled, obviously mad at something. She gripped Shanes hand defensively and she cocked an eyebrow at her girlfriend. Mercedes came in and broke up the fight whatever it was about, and lead the five into the kitchen. Cerdo! Carmen spat the word at her brother as she walked into the kitchen. Shane looked questioningly at her so she bent over and whispered an explanation.

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    6. Corrections of your Spanish (I’m guessing that you used a translator and didn’t even take the time investigating):

      ‘Oh God. Come on, it’ll be fine my little neurotic worrier!’ in Spanish will be: “Oh Dios!. Vamos, estará bien mi pequeña neurótica preocupada”.

      Second, in this line: “Gall me Mercedes! Gome in, gome in!” is so wrong in so many levels… Spanish people tend to remark the “C”

      “This is Shane, hermanos… Yo! Atención, opinión hola usted fuckers!”
      I don’t know what you were trying to say here.

      “¿Su amigo atractivo tiene un novio?” in Spanish will be: “Tu amiga es atractiva, tiene novio?”

      “¡Infierno ningún usted!” (No idea what you were trying to say)
      “Ella está de límites” right way: “Ella esta fuera de limites”.

      “You’re my niño now!”
      Niño= boy
      Niña= girl

      “Carmella!” Names are the same in Spanish and Eglish, to say more, Carmen is a Spanish name. “What about that Paublo” Pablo will be the right way.

      For my Spanish credentials (so that you don’t think that I don’t know nothing), I was born and raised in Argentina and I’m a Spanish Literature professor (also an English Literature professor). If you ever need help just write, I’ll be glad to offer a hand and stop people from mangling my language.

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