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Neither of them said anything. Tina looked out the window, pleased that cool, confident Bette was slightly nervous. She knew Bette didn’t want to rush her and that their level of intimacy was up to Tina.
As they drove, Bette looked at her, “Umso how do I get to your house?”
Tina looked at her and paused, she said, “What ifWhat if we went to your house?”
Bette’s eyes opened slightly more, “Sure.” She clicked the left turn signal and turned instead of going straight. “UmTinaI’d love to have you over but are you sure?”
“Yeah. I’m very sure”
“Okay.”
They drove for awhile just enjoying the silence and lights around them. They had talked for a week and Tina had never felt more comfortable. Parts of her were throbbing for the first time in years.
* * *
Tina sat on the couch. There were all kinds of paintings around. It was a very nice, clean apartment with dark mahogany furniture and large white orchids. Normally, she’d be fascinated with walking around and looking at who Bette was. “Especially the bookshelf, it’s like walking into someone’s mind,” she thought but her insides were throbbing painfully deep inside her.
“I must be heady from all the honey wine,” she thought.
Bette was in the kitchen coming back with white wine and strawberries. Tina got up and walked there. She couldn’t take it anymore. Bette was looking in a cabinet with her back turned. Tina stared at her soft brown curls and sweeping back. Her jacket was off and her sleeveless shirt came down in a v. She had thin arms with defined muscles. She was leaning over slightly and her jeans were hugging the curves on her *****. Tina felt herself clench and the throbbing increased. Bette froze as she reached for a glass sensing Tina behind her. Tina licked her lips and didn’t know what to do.
“How’s the view?” asked Bette, her hand still on the glass.
“Really nice,” answered Tina.
(Pause.)
Bette laughs, “You sure you haven’t done this before?”
“No Bette, I haven’t.” said Tina softly. Bette stopped laughing.
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OMG! Keep going with this story. Good job.
That was so cool and so very hot pleasr continue its really well written and we all love a Bette and Tina beginning thanks really enjoyed it
Well that was excellent!! I hope you plan to continue writing you are good.. Really good. Please post again.
I love the natural talent that come through here, you have inspired me thank you! I love the story, and I hope to read more from you.
wow! amazing..you have to post again soon!!!
Great writting, realy hot hope you post some more.
And now I have to go to sleep, yeah thats gonna be real easy. Bette nervous, loved that. Can’t wait for your next update.
well, if this is your first time, you most definitely hit the ball out of the park. Wonderfully and seductively written – love your story. looking forward to the next chapter.
WOW! That was a great start. Are you sure your are a fanfic virgin? I love the fact that Bette was nervous at first. And Tina is kind of aggressive in bed. I hope you post soon!
A very nice T and B beginning……..
So sexy and sweet………………..
very nice…you write like a pro!
Woo! That was one of the most sexy, heart-fluttering, wonderfully natural scenes I’ve ever read. I am just saying! You are incredibly talented. Your ablitiy to capture those feelings and all-encompassing emotions of love just floored me! I loved this and hope you continue to write more…thanks!
K
Excellent! Great start. Very hot. Can’t wait for more.
Damn this is awesome and hot and sweet, lvoe it. Post soon pleae, thanks!
Awesome story. I agree with shutterbug, you definitely hit this one out of the park. Please continue and post soon.