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She gets me
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“Why haven’t you turned around?” asked Tina.
Bette closed her eyes, breathed deeply and slowly put her hand down on the counter.
“I’m afraid,” said Bette.
“Of what?”
“That I won’t be able to contain myself if I look at you,” said Bette.
“What if I told you that I want you to touch me?” asked Tina.
Bette closed her eyes again and tightened her grip on the counter. She took a quick deep breath. She thought, “Why is my heart pounding? I should be seducing her. What is my problem? She’s the new one at this. She should be trembling.” Bette took a large breath and straightened. She placed two large glasses on the counter and slowly poured the wine. She put one to her lips and took a large gulp of wine. She turned and faced Tina, leaning back on the counter she held the glass to her lips, playing with the stem in her fingers. She watched Tina in the doorway who looked uncertain but Bette saw her desire in her eyes.
“What do you want Tina?” asked Bette.
“You.”
Bette’s eyes widened but she smiled and leaned back, “Then unbutton your shirt.”
Tina breathed in quickly. She slowly undid each small plastic button from the slits in her shirt. She leaned on the frame of the door and rolled each button between her fingertips. Bette licked her lips. Tina felt the throbbing increasing. As she pushed her shirt open, Tina’s nipples hardened and she gasped. She felt her underwear go damp and clenched her muscles. She reached back to unhook her bra.
“No. Stop,” Bette leaned forward. “Don’t” She was breathing heavily. Tina stopped.
Bette smiled, “I want to do that.” Tina smiled back.
“Just reach under and touch them slowly,” said Bette. Tina stared at her.
“Please?” whispered Bette.
Tina’s smile grew as she reached under her cotton bra and slowly crept her fingers up to her nipples. She pulled the bra up so Bette could see portions of her *****. Tina grinned and rubbed the very tip of her nipples between her thumbs and fingers occasionally letting them pop out of her grasp.
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OMG! Keep going with this story. Good job.
That was so cool and so very hot pleasr continue its really well written and we all love a Bette and Tina beginning thanks really enjoyed it
Well that was excellent!! I hope you plan to continue writing you are good.. Really good. Please post again.
I love the natural talent that come through here, you have inspired me thank you! I love the story, and I hope to read more from you.
wow! amazing..you have to post again soon!!!
Great writting, realy hot hope you post some more.
And now I have to go to sleep, yeah thats gonna be real easy. Bette nervous, loved that. Can’t wait for your next update.
well, if this is your first time, you most definitely hit the ball out of the park. Wonderfully and seductively written – love your story. looking forward to the next chapter.
WOW! That was a great start. Are you sure your are a fanfic virgin? I love the fact that Bette was nervous at first. And Tina is kind of aggressive in bed. I hope you post soon!
A very nice T and B beginning……..
So sexy and sweet………………..
very nice…you write like a pro!
Woo! That was one of the most sexy, heart-fluttering, wonderfully natural scenes I’ve ever read. I am just saying! You are incredibly talented. Your ablitiy to capture those feelings and all-encompassing emotions of love just floored me! I loved this and hope you continue to write more…thanks!
K
Excellent! Great start. Very hot. Can’t wait for more.
Damn this is awesome and hot and sweet, lvoe it. Post soon pleae, thanks!
Awesome story. I agree with shutterbug, you definitely hit this one out of the park. Please continue and post soon.