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Shipwrecked!, Ch. 1
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“Cool wasn’t exactly the word I was thinking of,” Shane began, watching Alice from over the rim of her coffee cup.
“It really does sound, uh, fascinating,” Jenny agreed.
Alice pushed her glasses further up her nose. “It’s more than fascinating! Come on, you guys! Pirates! Ghosts! Gold!” She exclaimed, rubbing her hands together at the last word. “I’d love to get to check that place out.”
Shane shook her head vehemently. “Uh uh. No way. Not a chance. I see where this is heading.”
“Where is this heading?” Jenny asked, looking confused.
“The longer you know Al, the quicker you understand her schemes,” Shane explained.
Alice waved her hands in front of her quickly. “Quit that. I’m not scheming or suggesting anything. I just merely commented, was all. That’s it.”
“I bet,” Shane snickered.
“While we’re along that whole island theme though, wouldn’t it be fun to take a little boat trip tomorrow?” Alice asked, setting her laptop aside and avoiding Shane’s eyes.
“Boat trip?” Shane demanded.
Alice shrugged. “A nice little sail or something. You know, get a little group together to go sailing and enjoy a beautiful Saturday afternoon together. Maybe have a picnic.”
“Actually, that does sound fun,” Jenny admitted.
“I know better than that,” Shane answered, sitting up quickly and throwing Alice a sharp look.
“Think of the inspiration,” Alice went on, speaking only to Jenny. “You could bring your laptop.”
“Don’t listen to her, Jenny,” Shane hissed.
Oblivious, Jenny smiled at Alice. “That does sound like fun. I’d love to do that.”
“Sounds great,” Alice said, clapping her hands together, finally looking at Shane. “So, is it a date?”
“Do you purposely not listen to me, or are you going deaf?” Shane demanded. “And I’m not going, because I know you’re somehow going to get us all in trouble.”
“Come on, Shane,” Jenny pouted. “I’ve never been sailing on the ocean before.”
“Aww, look at that,” Alice said, casting a glare at Shane. “You’re going to hurt her feelings. You can’t do that to poor Jenny, can you?”
“I can, and I will,” Shane argued, crossing her arms across her chest. “I’ve been involved in one too many of your little schemes, Al, and this little ‘sailing trip’ you’ve just planned sounds too suspicious.”
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OH SHIT! I cant wait to read more@!!!
This is great! I love action adventure. Please post soon… you left us hanging in suspense.
Land them on the same island as giligan! Alice could go out with Ginger to make Dana jelous.post soon =)
*CLAPS* Very well done, this is the originality I’ve been hoping for. Please, keep going you now have me intrigued
OMG!!! This is really exciting stuff. I love lots of drama and action! Hope they all get out of the water ok! Dana might realise how much Alice means to her now, thinkin that she may have lost her. Lovin it already so keep it up. Thanks.
OMG…no, you can’t stop here? Where will they end up? I need to know if the’re all going to be ok? Alice? Shane? I loved the way you portray the interactions between the gang. It brought me back to the feeling I had watching S1.
Very cool. I have missed your stories! This is super exciting! Glad to see you back. Post again soon :)
I’ve really missed your stories, so I am REALLY glad that you started a new one. Excellent start, and I can’t wait to see where you take us with it. You’re such a talented writer, and you really do bring back the good, fun season 1 feel to the girls! :-) (But I would love you even more if Danish worked it out!!)
Haha! Fox, you’re back too! How wonderful to ‘see’ you. As always, I expect the expected from your stories, one of the many reasons why it’s always such a thrill to read them. So who’s gonna die? :D No more hooky eh
About time you showed yourself back on here! It has been waaay too long. I’m loving The Lost Word, but since they’re on an island, having them run Baywatch-style wouldn’t hurt the next time someone drowns… Just a suggestion. Glad to see you back and writing again!
Wow… just, WOW!!!! That is such an awesome story! Actually, more than awesome!! I`m already addicted to it, loved it!!! Please continue soon!
holy crap! Something different and I enjoyed it. Hope you continue.
Awesome, keep going
hopefull u’re not gonna kill anyone, and we’re gonna get loads of B & T sex on the beach….shane & carmen too, BOT MORE B & T…..lol
Interesting and exciting new take on our girls from WeHo. Please continue
Just sit right back and you’ll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip.That started from this tropic port,aboard this tiny ship… Sorry wrong show. =) Very good story, I can’t wait to read what happens next.
Dang! Now there’s some drama for you on a Saturday morning!! Welcome back…sorry to hear you are going through some not so fun parts of life. Just try to remember…everything is temporary. Thanks!
Great start! but why Shane had to get hurt?? awww she is my favorite so please let her be ok :P I cant wait for next chapter :)
You came back with a big bang. hope all tthe girls are alright. The should have taken Helena ship. Alice thing want get her desposit back. thanks
I was totally amazed when I saw that you were back and so very excited! Your comeback has me hanging on the edge.. what a fantastic story line. You better not leave again… I’ll beg if I have to but it wouldn’t be pretty, lol. Please post again soon! Yay, Forefire’s back and is amazing as ever!
Wow, what an awesome story. Nothing like a little blood to attract the sharks.
Just read your fic again today. I know, I already left a comment, but this one is so beyond well-written! I love it so much and please … as a “Shipwrecked addict”, I need more!!! *smile*
Hey FF, Fabulous to have you back on the site and post such an unique and inticing story. A cross between Lost and Pirates of the Carribean comes to mind and nowt wrong with that in my book. Absolutely hysterical from Kit’s cell phnoe home run pitch to losing her hat. Alice replacing the lifeboat with a cooler. Too few lifejackets… Brilliant and I can’t wait to see what Chapter 2 brings. Thank you so much for coming back and adding this hilarity to my life. Your gratiful and Loyal Fan.
Loving the start of this, can’t wait to see where it goes so update soon please!!. little bit off topic but any chance of some more danish PWP?