Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
Shipwrecked!, Ch. 1
Login to add story to favorites
(51 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Reacting without thinking, Dana also immediately turned back after witnessing Alice’s fall. She easily passed Shane, who was struggling against the swell of water. Reaching the spot where the remains of the boat floated about, she glanced around frantically, splashing the water around her, feeling for something. Catching sight of a flash of blonde, she turned quickly and dove beneath the water, salt stinging her eyes as she pushed with all the energy she had, her chest nearly bursting as she forced herself still deeper underwater.
Shane was still swimming toward them, wanting to be there in case Dana needed help. She was so intent on her goal that she didn’t see the large piece of the ship that was lifted above her by a surge of water. It came down on her head with a sharp crack, and then everything went dark.
***************************************************************************
“Shane!” Carmen screamed, watching in horror as a piece of the ship smacked Shane on the head, forcing the thin woman underwater momentarily. When she resurfaced, she was floating facedown in the water, not moving, as the water around her slowly began to turn crimson.
“She’s hurt!” Jenny shouted, grabbing Bette’s shoulder.
Carmen began to try to struggle away from the group. “I have to help her!”
Helena pulled her back. “You have to be careful if you go back. Besides, Dana is already out there, and can probably get to Shane quicker than we can. We have to try to get her attention.”
“Dana is still trying to find Alice,” Carmen argued angrily. “Besides, she doesn’t even know Shane is out there!” She pulled herself free from Helena’s grasp. “I’m going and that’s it. Someone has to do something!”
Suddenly, Jenny pushed away from the group and began to splash towards Shane before anyone else could react.
“Jenny, wait!” she heard Kit call from behind her.
“Shane wouldn’t leave me behind!” Jenny yelled back, kicking her legs as hard as she could. And I sure as hell won’t leave her behind!
“Let me go,” Carmen argued, straining against Bette. “I wanna go, too!”
“There’s enough of us out there,” Tina argued. “The best thing the rest of us can do right now is try to stay together.”
Carmen hung her head in defeat, tears coming to her eyes as she realized how quickly their little group was getting thrown further away from the others despite their struggles to fight the waves. They were floating out further into open ocean, the rain pouring down onto them even harder.
“What do we do?” Kit demanded, her face briefly illuminated by a flash of lightning.
Looking helpless, Bette bit her lip. “I don’t know,” she admitted, eyes downcast.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
OH SHIT! I cant wait to read more@!!!
This is great! I love action adventure. Please post soon… you left us hanging in suspense.
Land them on the same island as giligan! Alice could go out with Ginger to make Dana jelous.post soon =)
*CLAPS* Very well done, this is the originality I’ve been hoping for. Please, keep going you now have me intrigued
OMG!!! This is really exciting stuff. I love lots of drama and action! Hope they all get out of the water ok! Dana might realise how much Alice means to her now, thinkin that she may have lost her. Lovin it already so keep it up. Thanks.
OMG…no, you can’t stop here? Where will they end up? I need to know if the’re all going to be ok? Alice? Shane? I loved the way you portray the interactions between the gang. It brought me back to the feeling I had watching S1.
Very cool. I have missed your stories! This is super exciting! Glad to see you back. Post again soon :)
I’ve really missed your stories, so I am REALLY glad that you started a new one. Excellent start, and I can’t wait to see where you take us with it. You’re such a talented writer, and you really do bring back the good, fun season 1 feel to the girls! :-) (But I would love you even more if Danish worked it out!!)
Haha! Fox, you’re back too! How wonderful to ‘see’ you. As always, I expect the expected from your stories, one of the many reasons why it’s always such a thrill to read them. So who’s gonna die? :D No more hooky eh
About time you showed yourself back on here! It has been waaay too long. I’m loving The Lost Word, but since they’re on an island, having them run Baywatch-style wouldn’t hurt the next time someone drowns… Just a suggestion. Glad to see you back and writing again!
Wow… just, WOW!!!! That is such an awesome story! Actually, more than awesome!! I`m already addicted to it, loved it!!! Please continue soon!
holy crap! Something different and I enjoyed it. Hope you continue.
Awesome, keep going
hopefull u’re not gonna kill anyone, and we’re gonna get loads of B & T sex on the beach….shane & carmen too, BOT MORE B & T…..lol
Interesting and exciting new take on our girls from WeHo. Please continue
Just sit right back and you’ll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip.That started from this tropic port,aboard this tiny ship… Sorry wrong show. =) Very good story, I can’t wait to read what happens next.
Dang! Now there’s some drama for you on a Saturday morning!! Welcome back…sorry to hear you are going through some not so fun parts of life. Just try to remember…everything is temporary. Thanks!
Great start! but why Shane had to get hurt?? awww she is my favorite so please let her be ok :P I cant wait for next chapter :)
You came back with a big bang. hope all tthe girls are alright. The should have taken Helena ship. Alice thing want get her desposit back. thanks
I was totally amazed when I saw that you were back and so very excited! Your comeback has me hanging on the edge.. what a fantastic story line. You better not leave again… I’ll beg if I have to but it wouldn’t be pretty, lol. Please post again soon! Yay, Forefire’s back and is amazing as ever!
Wow, what an awesome story. Nothing like a little blood to attract the sharks.
Just read your fic again today. I know, I already left a comment, but this one is so beyond well-written! I love it so much and please … as a “Shipwrecked addict”, I need more!!! *smile*
Hey FF, Fabulous to have you back on the site and post such an unique and inticing story. A cross between Lost and Pirates of the Carribean comes to mind and nowt wrong with that in my book. Absolutely hysterical from Kit’s cell phnoe home run pitch to losing her hat. Alice replacing the lifeboat with a cooler. Too few lifejackets… Brilliant and I can’t wait to see what Chapter 2 brings. Thank you so much for coming back and adding this hilarity to my life. Your gratiful and Loyal Fan.
Loving the start of this, can’t wait to see where it goes so update soon please!!. little bit off topic but any chance of some more danish PWP?