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Shoulda – S3.1
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Their home
Tina came walking tentatively out of the bathroom wearing a robe. Bette stood up and took off her robe, revealing her gorgeous body.
“Bette, you are so beautiful. If I imagined the perfect woman, it would be you.”
Tina took a deep breath and took off her robe and looked at Bette. She was not disappointed by what she saw on her lover’s face. You’re always beautiful if that’s what your lover’s eyes say.
Bette’s face immediately broke into a gentle, pleased smile. She looked Tina up and down with grateful wonder. When her gaze came back to Tina’s face, she smiled and bit her lip.
She and Tina walked toward each other and when they embraced, Bette felt the wetness from Tina’s nipples. So did Tina and she pulled away.
“Dammit!” she said, her voice quivering.
Bette took her hands which were reaching up to wipe her nipples.
“I’ll take care of it,” Bette said and looked at Tina. Tina smiled her approval and put her hands on Bette’s temples to guide her down.
Tina closed her eyes in pleasure as she felt Bette’s soft, warm mouth cover her nipples. With each, she gently sucked away the moisture. When she was finished, she led Tina to the bed and began to make love to her.
Bette was overwhelmed by the size of Tina’s nursing breasts, but she was very gentle with them. This still managed to stimulate Tina effectively. When Tina was really aroused, her mouth always opened a certain way and her eyes always opened with a certain expression. This was Bette’s signal to begin to move down her body.
Bette caressed her lover’s stomach, paying careful attention to the scar that Tina hated. She didn’t run a finger across the scar because she thought it was probably still sensitive. She had actually read up on this situation so she would know how to touch Tina when she had the opportunity. Instead she gently put her warm palm on the scar, lifting her hand to cover another area until she had touched it all.
Then she slowly slid her hands down into her pubic area, smiling when she saw that Tina was very wet. After stimulating her there for a while, she carefully went inside her. With each thrust she watched Tina’s face to make sure that it was hurting in only the way it should. It hadn’t been a vaginal delivery, but Bette still wanted to be careful
As Tina showed no reaction except the proper one, Bette began to thrust more forcefully until she thought she would come before Tina did. Then Tina exploded into a shuddering orgasm and Bette let herself go.
“I love you so much, Bette. I’ve missed you.”
“I love you, baby. I’ve missed us.”
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As Kit worked quietly in her office at The Planet, Angelica slept the sleep of the contented baby. And her mamas, wrapped in each other’s arms, were sleeping the sleep of contented lovers.
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would been nice had this been what we’d seen, but i guess it ain’t gonna happen the way we want, huh? thanks for this.
I loved your “shoulda” – Somebody “shoulda told IC not f-up our couple” It appears the only B&T action we will get is via writers of fan fiction.
Yep, that’s a lot more like it. I would’ve walked out the second I saw the clown nose. Was the therapist wearing big flappy shoes as well, did she get to work in a vehicle smaller than Alice’s Mini? I would have liked her better if she a least threw in a little juggling. Pancha, are you sure you don’t have the makings of an analyst? I think you do.
From your lips to Ilene’s ears! I like this story a lot better than the last one…LOL! You just about killed my hopes with that one! LOL
Now were talking. What the heck is wrong with IC. That scene was like the one when Tina said she wanted to come home. These are the times when action needs to occur, and IC always drops the ball. Thankfully we can count on you and the other writers here to fill the void.
I would have loved this to have happened on the show. LOL at Kit having a crib.
thanks you for make it up with my heart..lol..i really needed this..post more soon thanks
You are absolutely right with this one pancha. It most certainly should have happened this way. Thank you for keeping “our girls” together.
This is a shoulda coulda,woulda. Boy if they knew that Angie was in a crib.they wouldn’t been still in bed . My kids like to be helt but not all the time. they would throw a fit to be let down. thanks for this
Didnt expect to see more writting from you so soon except the question thingie!!! which im lookingf forward to!Loved this Shouda!!! i have to wait a few months to see the new series but when i do ill keep this in mind by all accounts its the better story line…Thanks enjoyed it
great!!!!!!!!!!!
absolutely!!! Maybe we should start a letter writing campaign to IC and her writers…if we get anther season with JB it should be done our way!!!
I only wish that’s the way chaiken would of written it … such a bummer … but i loved your take on what shoulda happened!
I can’t believe it’s no use to see a sex therapy. Maybe they need a lot of appointments and then your scene will happen. Give it to us!
Oh, Pancha. You should do a Shoulda after every TLW S3 Ep from now on. I’ve read a couple of recaps here and there, and they’re fun. But alternative plots are definitely better, especially after being left hanging unjustifiably so by that silly S3 premiere ep. You made my day, Pancha. Thanks. Cheers!
Yep, that’s what should have happened.
That would have been a FAR happier outcome…-sigh- Good stuff, Pancha!
I like Bette’s response to Tina’s negative comments about her appearance much better in your story than in the show. Bette was just such a bitch in the show. I’m sure each episode will present you with material for a “shoulda” story. Excellent, you’ve uncovered a brightside for me to look at when the show lets me down. Thanks!
Perhaps I.C. should check in with us before her next faux pas.
Thanks pancha for this shoulda. I agree that you should write one after every episode.
Thank you Jesus!… Thank you Pancha! Amen.
It’s Episode One and the fanfic writers are ALREADY having to rewrite the episodes so that they make sense. What does that say about how clueless Ilene Chaiken is about her characters?…Censor me if you dare. I don’t care.
I’m going to be honest with ya – a few more episodes like that first one and my cable box may be going back to Time Warner – and I am a dyed-in-the-wool Tibetter/L Word fan. I am so disappointed in the continued cluelessness…anyway, Pancha thank you. You never disappoint us with your writing. Go Big Red!!!!!
How many Velvets did thet have to kill. Good One. Yep shoulda.
If someone has met a lesbian (or any woman) in real life that does not LOVE to process (ad infinitum) I would love to hear about it. Proof that B&T have been replaced by Pod People. The writers are Pod People writing about their own kind. Somebody, mix me a Bromo , it’s gonna be a long season. I’m thinking of what piece of computer equipment I could buy instead of paying for the privilege of being lashed each Sunday. Strength! Solidarity! Sanity now!
This was great….more please.
God I loved this. I am so starved for happy and loving B&T. “Shouldas” is an instant favorite.
That is great!
I’m in agreement, that is what should’a happened. It would’ve been the right way to go. Should’a, would’a, but didn’t. IC’s is playing us. LOL.
You should sent this to IC so she can re-do season 3 LOL this was sweet and hot! I’m pretty sure you’re going to have to write more shoulda chapters!
Pancha I am thinking this is going to become a full time job after what I have seen will be IC plan this season. If I was you I would send IC the bill for continually providing happiness to the fans for something she is failing to do. Nice thought and although I enjoyed this is did very little to appease my need to actually see this couple working their issues out on the show. Thanks.
I agree 100% this is what shoulda happened.
Back again already! Love_girl was right, this is what should have happened. Thanks for writing it!
Now THAT’S what I would have liked to see. . .damn IC. . .
this is exactly how i saw it with an addition of chocolate LOL…my favorite line: “She got out a mini-crib that she had hidden in a storage area and gently put the child into it. Angie sighed and went to sleep.” the child needs so little to be happy…i think we’ll have lots of shoulda’s from you since each episode is a disaster for B&T…thanks
I’ll never be able to look at a red velvet cake ever again without wanting to giggle. I thought the therapy scene, while amusing, was kind of off. The dialogue made sense I guess, but a couple of the looks between Bette and Tina seemed to not make much sense. For example, when Bette looked over at Tina and Tina was looking down and biting her lip (which I admit was just fucking cute), it looked like JB and LH slipped out of character and some bad editing was done. ANYWAY back to the story. I like how you had Bette be so attentive. Kit cracked me up. LOL I just hope no one suspects that Angelica was in a crib. :O
You’re right!! This is what ‘shoulda’ happened!! Thnx!