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Here I got you some too. Bette said, as she walked back into the living room with two bowls full ice cream in her hands.
What about Alice? Tina inquired thoughtfully.
Oh she can always get her own. Bette answered with a wink, Now where were we?
Tina grabbed her own copy of the script from the foot of the couch, just as Bette got hers from one of the nearby counters. Today they agreed on Tina voicing out the lines of one of the male characters, while Bette recited her own Together they both started reading with such passion and intensity that soon enough it was easy for them to get caught up in all the drama the script brought along with it. One by one they tackled the scenes with ease All things were going along until Alice burst into the trailer once again.
Guys I have to go, she said frantically running around the place and trying to get her things in order. Oh and Bette dont forget, you have that press junket for
Yes Al, I remember, 9 o clock sharp you told me 7 times already!
Ok Alice said smiling as she exited the trailer, Oh and Tina is was nice to meet you.
Oh you too Tina called out as she watched Alice rush past them and through the door. Sighing to herself Tina wondered inwardly if Alice heard what she said… but then before she could give it any more thought, she shyly looked back at Bette, giving her her best smile.
Almost as fast as she stormed through the place Alice was gone, and again Bette and Tina found the place all to themselves. Both women exchanged awkward glances for a moment before decidedly continuing with what they were doing minutes ago Flipping once again through the pages, all things fell into place. Bette was handling everything like a pro… She didn’t even miss a beat, nor was there an awkward moment or pause in between her choices of delivery.
Everything felt so right… so comfortable between them, in fact all the tension broke loose once they began speaking… But as Tina scanned through the rest of the lines, she couldnt help but take a sharp intake of breath as she read the last thing the script was calling for:
Act 5. Scene 2:
The lights slowly dim, and everything falls quiet as both actors lean in and passionately kiss.
To be Continued…
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Ooh I can’t wait for that kiss. Heh. Woo. Nice going Craze, must continue you must. A little Yoda there, even tho I didn’t see the movie:P Aloha!
Just a wonderful chapter. I’m so waiting for the next chapter. Excellent job.
Oh craze…this was brilliant! I’m looking forward to that kiss! Don’t keep us waiting too long….please!
Just a great chapter. I’m so waiting for the next. Awesome job.
CMC…nice update and yes we are looking forward to the “kiss”. Just amazing girl. 5 stars from me. Post soon
What are you doing to me Smoke? How you gonna leave it like this? All on the suspenseful tip. Can’t wait for the next scene. Please post soon. =)
Hey Smokie!
I just spent the last few minutes catching up on your story. Woo! Very good woman. I am so into it now. I hate that I will have to wait to read the next installment when I return from vacation. I would like to thank whoever inspired you. I hope I post this soon so I can be under Tee. Hee Hee
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are having fun and can’t wait to see what happen next. Post soon, thanks!
I absolutely love this B & T beginning. Great Chapter!
Great Chapter Babes!! *shouts Wooo hoo hahaha… I cant wait for the kiss… thats going to be NICE hehe.. So B&T sharing a trailer.. hmm intresting heheh.. i wonder where this is going to take us.. i know somewhere good hehehe… 5 STARS !!
Can’t wait to see how they practice that scene. Good Job.
oh and were going to have a kiss this is getting good.
CMC,
Thanks for taking the time to reply in person.
I am totally addicted to this version of events.
That is due to you and your story telling gift. The honesty and realism with which you write is takes my breath away. The nervousness and edginess of both Bette and Tina are palpable. Alice’s unique charms just reverberate off the screen. Can’t wait to see how the other characters will appear in this adventure.
I am equally entertained and stunned with your cliff-hangers. Such pleasure tinged with such pain.
Am ready from the next chapter so pls make it soon.
Your loyal fan.
Great! Looking forward to more.
Why do writers have so much fun in leaving the readers hanging like this?!?!?!?! I can’t wait until the kiss, please post soon!
hmmmmmm wander how that kissing scene is gonna pan out????? hope its YUMMY!!!! sorry i havent commented in a while..life has been crazy..:) but the ketchup is on the table..and the dairy queen…is open for business…LOL great post..woman..glad to be back reading them! 5 million stars
excellent chapter..waiting for the next!
Rating disabled Freak?!?! LMAO… hey i just caught up on all your chapters no. Phew… hehe i loved them… see i told u i’ll catch up and i have. I just havent been on the site long enough to read any posts. So you will post soon right freaky? Hehehe…. See ya
yr fren, Freaky :P
I just got caught up your killing me here post soon