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Showtime: Chapter 4
Tina grabbed her forehead, feeling a bit of a headache coming on.
“I think I need to sit down.” While Tina made her way over to a nearby couch, Alice quickly followed suit and walked right behind her, slumping down onto an adjacent chair at the exact same time Tina did. Alice held her hands in her lap and looked back and forth across the space with a near manic energy, until she finally felt like it was time to speak.
“So do you like it here, Tina?” she asked rather inquisitively, sinking more comfortably into the plush cushions of the sofa, while all the while looking at her intently.
Tina didn’t answer at first, as she waited for another three or four sentences to quickly follow within Alice’s single breath, but when no words followed she finally looked up and smiled.
“Well, it’s only been about a few hours, but it’s definitely been…”
“Good. So are you seeing someone?
What? Tina responded, sounding very confused, No I
“Oh thats okay Alice cut in, Bette hasnt been out with anyone for a while either.”
“Really?” Tina asked, surprised.
“Oh yeah, comes with the territory I guess. I mean its kind of hard for her to maintain relationships, considering who she is and all People are just intimidated you know?” Alice asked but she didn’t wait for Tina’s reply, “Not to mention I totally thought the last commitment she was in was a complete disaster, god the person she was seeing was a total jerk! she sighed, I just think before you commit yourself to anything its really important to have someone who understands the pressures that come along with doing your job, don’t you think?”
Tina shook her head. She wanted to respond, truly she did… but respond to what exactly?
“I’m sorry… did you just ask me a question?”
At this Alice simply grinned and tried to speak again but before she could start up another speech, Bette stepped into the living room, dressed in a simple white top, and comfortable looking jeans her dark locks loosely tied up in a twist as she looked over at Alice, and then back to Tina.
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Ooh I can’t wait for that kiss. Heh. Woo. Nice going Craze, must continue you must. A little Yoda there, even tho I didn’t see the movie:P Aloha!
Just a wonderful chapter. I’m so waiting for the next chapter. Excellent job.
Oh craze…this was brilliant! I’m looking forward to that kiss! Don’t keep us waiting too long….please!
Just a great chapter. I’m so waiting for the next. Awesome job.
CMC…nice update and yes we are looking forward to the “kiss”. Just amazing girl. 5 stars from me. Post soon
What are you doing to me Smoke? How you gonna leave it like this? All on the suspenseful tip. Can’t wait for the next scene. Please post soon. =)
Hey Smokie!
I just spent the last few minutes catching up on your story. Woo! Very good woman. I am so into it now. I hate that I will have to wait to read the next installment when I return from vacation. I would like to thank whoever inspired you. I hope I post this soon so I can be under Tee. Hee Hee
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are having fun and can’t wait to see what happen next. Post soon, thanks!
I absolutely love this B & T beginning. Great Chapter!
Great Chapter Babes!! *shouts Wooo hoo hahaha… I cant wait for the kiss… thats going to be NICE hehe.. So B&T sharing a trailer.. hmm intresting heheh.. i wonder where this is going to take us.. i know somewhere good hehehe… 5 STARS !!
Can’t wait to see how they practice that scene. Good Job.
oh and were going to have a kiss this is getting good.
CMC,
Thanks for taking the time to reply in person.
I am totally addicted to this version of events.
That is due to you and your story telling gift. The honesty and realism with which you write is takes my breath away. The nervousness and edginess of both Bette and Tina are palpable. Alice’s unique charms just reverberate off the screen. Can’t wait to see how the other characters will appear in this adventure.
I am equally entertained and stunned with your cliff-hangers. Such pleasure tinged with such pain.
Am ready from the next chapter so pls make it soon.
Your loyal fan.
Great! Looking forward to more.
Why do writers have so much fun in leaving the readers hanging like this?!?!?!?! I can’t wait until the kiss, please post soon!
hmmmmmm wander how that kissing scene is gonna pan out????? hope its YUMMY!!!! sorry i havent commented in a while..life has been crazy..:) but the ketchup is on the table..and the dairy queen…is open for business…LOL great post..woman..glad to be back reading them! 5 million stars
excellent chapter..waiting for the next!
Rating disabled Freak?!?! LMAO… hey i just caught up on all your chapters no. Phew… hehe i loved them… see i told u i’ll catch up and i have. I just havent been on the site long enough to read any posts. So you will post soon right freaky? Hehehe…. See ya
yr fren, Freaky :P
I just got caught up your killing me here post soon