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Suddenly Tina felt Bette’s chest press lightly against hers as Bettes deep brown eyes slowly looked up and down her face, seemingly taking her in as if to remember every single feature she possessed.
Again Tina felt her heart pounding she knew that Bette could feel it too, especially now that they were so close to one another. Slowly pressing against her, Tina also took note of how her body’s reaction only seemed to add to confident grin Bette was already displaying at the moment, as she lowered her lips unhurriedly onto her neck.
Tina gasped softly, as she felt a second kiss slightly graze higher across her skin. Bette went on planting light kisses right onto her soft skin as the nervous felt her own arms tremble as she kept them locked at her sides, unable to move.
As time progressed, Tina sensed the heat rise from Bette’s body, as a similar wave of heat, which coursed through her own veins, something that was immediately followed by a nervous cold. Bette withdrew from her neck slowly and returned to the opposite side, kissing her trembling skin a third time.
Tina felt Bettes hair gently brush against the surface of her cheek and the soft whisper of her breath blowing near her ear. For the longest time she held her eyes shut tight, still in shock over all the sensations her body was experiencing over such a small act mostly because of the great effect Bette had on her
Just as the blonde thought she was about to fall over, Bette raised her head back up and took a step backwards, still maintaining a close proximity.
Bette shook her head as she saw Tina blush
Still in the confines of the softly lit kitchen Bette drew her face closer to Tinas once more, pressing her nose against hers softly for a second before she let their lips meet with another light kiss A kiss, which only lasted for a moment before she slowly, withdrew quickly following suit with a second, and a third, each time shifting her head slightly as Tina stood there paralyzed and weak.
It was something Tina had never experienced before being kissed the way she would have kissed another person, herself. The feeling was surprisingly refreshing new exciting.
Lost in the moment she felt the hair on the back of her neck stand on end as she just stood there almost motionless while letting Bette kiss her, slowly and softly with each meeting of their lips. Tinas arms trembled at her sides, as she raised them up and let them rest on Bette’s hips, while all the while letting Bette do the same.
Little by little the fair skinned blonde began to lose track of how long they remained in that embrace, until Bette finally stepped back and took a long, deep breath.
Every ounce of tension and uneasiness had come down to this one very important moment and they were in the middle of having it when suddenly the door began resounding with a series of loud knocks.
To be continued….
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fuck it’s about time!!, sorry had to let that out. I’m so glad to see you have came back to us, damm a month I though you had moved on to bigger and better things. Well just don’t leave us hanging to long now you hear
yay!! sooooo excited to see you’d updated! ty! i love this story, so pleeeeeeeease update again sooooooooon :)
Good chapter. Damn this is so hot and crazy, love it. Who the hell is at the door. Please post soon, can’t wait to see what is Bette and Tina doing next. Thanks!
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So glad to see another chapter of this story. Like the others, I was wondering if you’d forgotten about it! Lovely tension built up, and very sexy kisses, but who is that annoying person interrupting! Bet it’s Alice… :) Keep on writing please.
“I Love You” those words mean so much.. i know cause i feel something everytime i say them… or i hear them from “That” special person!.;).. This was a great chapter baby… i loved it so much… mmm sexy kisses hehe.. Got to love them… You know i love everything you do.. no matter if you think its dorky…. my BW is not a dork.. but the best writer i know… MWAH… GREAT, WONDERFUL, AMAZING, SEXY, LOVING, PASSIONATE… ohh and the new update was Great too hehe.. see babes.. getting caught up talking about you…fav part, when bette came up to tina.. and took control.. cant wait til the next one…
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i just re read all ur stories last nite and was wondering when u wud update…. keep it coming now!! thanks
Hello Craze: Excellent chapter. i enjoyed this one very much. keep up the good work. I’ll catch the next one.
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Glad you are back. Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
soooo very worth the wait…..thanks so much for the post. Great chapter…more pleeeze!
Hey, tell Alice to go away and get back to the action! GLAD YOU’RE BACK!!
Great story, another notch on your writing belt….but pls don’t make us wait so long between chapters…that is totally not fair…pls more !!!!
you better not take another month to post the next chapter crazy, even though this was worth waitng for. loved it. now on to the next and hurry up. please! thankyou. God i’m polite, so you have to post now just for that. lol.
aw i loved that. the tension was thick!
Hello! Callmecazy WHOA! I love it Thank you Another Beautiful Awesome Story again I can’t wait come on Please LOL posted this again ASAP! LOL HAVE A GREAT 4TH JULY and Thanks for coming back.
Megga- THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN! My eyes TOTALLY teared up during the “I love you” stuff (what can I say, you know I’m dramatic), and your descriptions were beautiful, everything seemed so real and the stakes were so high for both of them. (Megga claps for crazy) Please. . .PLEASE don’t wait another month to post! (Or I’m gonna have to whip out my bossy pants!)
Welcome back CMC – you have been missed. Wonderful update as always. Your story here is super..love the way you make us wait. Post soon….we want more CMC.
What the hell took you so long what the **** have you been doing had to get that off my chest Fanstic chapter Please don’t make us wait long the next chapter post real Soon
Smokie, I loved it! I am sorry I have not been a better friend and kept up reading but I am trying. You are so talented. Only you can make a kiss such a sensual, loving act that takes everyone’s breath away. Not just Tina’s. I hope you have someone you can give a special kiss to soon. She is one lucky gal. :-)