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In the kitchen Tina heard movement from the couch and then saw a bright light flood the space as a lamp suddenly clicked on, but she didnt really pay much attention to it. Pulling out a couple of glasses from the small kitchen cabinet Tina used the counter top to conveniently face away from the living room and fix the drinks. With her mind spinning from images of the potential disaster that almost transpired a while ago and everything else in between, it wasnt until she finished pouring the drinks into the chilled containers when she felt a pair of eyes steadily looking from behind her.
Unsure of all her actions now, and not daring to turn back around and face her, Tina got one of the drinks and started gulping it down right then and there by the shiny kitchen counter.
A kiss she thought
That’s where all her problems were stemming from at the moment, but perhaps in this one it is the lack of which that sparked it all. Not one peck, nor slight brush of the lip, not even a short pause or slow intake of breath, in fact there was nothing and still she was on the verge of breaking down.
Finishing one glassful of soda, and still too nervous to turn around, Tina fixed herself another. After the third one though she realized that she was going to have to turn around sometime. Leaving the empty glass by the sink, she turned around praying that Bette had stopped watching her and fallen back into immersing herself with the script. But no such luck for there Bette was standing beside her just waiting for a chance to tell Tina something to her face.
Tina, Bettes voice probed with uncertainty, Are you” she paused for a second, trying to find the right words to say, Do you find yourself feeling uncomfortable when youre around me?
A little taken aback with Bettes question, Tina took a deep breath, wondering if she had really heard her right or had simply imagined it out of exhaustion.
No I she shyly began, I like being around you. She smiled as she watched the expression on Bettes face soften. Now it was Bettes turn to be speechless.
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fuck it’s about time!!, sorry had to let that out. I’m so glad to see you have came back to us, damm a month I though you had moved on to bigger and better things. Well just don’t leave us hanging to long now you hear
yay!! sooooo excited to see you’d updated! ty! i love this story, so pleeeeeeeease update again sooooooooon :)
Good chapter. Damn this is so hot and crazy, love it. Who the hell is at the door. Please post soon, can’t wait to see what is Bette and Tina doing next. Thanks!
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So glad to see another chapter of this story. Like the others, I was wondering if you’d forgotten about it! Lovely tension built up, and very sexy kisses, but who is that annoying person interrupting! Bet it’s Alice… :) Keep on writing please.
“I Love You” those words mean so much.. i know cause i feel something everytime i say them… or i hear them from “That” special person!.;).. This was a great chapter baby… i loved it so much… mmm sexy kisses hehe.. Got to love them… You know i love everything you do.. no matter if you think its dorky…. my BW is not a dork.. but the best writer i know… MWAH… GREAT, WONDERFUL, AMAZING, SEXY, LOVING, PASSIONATE… ohh and the new update was Great too hehe.. see babes.. getting caught up talking about you…fav part, when bette came up to tina.. and took control.. cant wait til the next one…
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i just re read all ur stories last nite and was wondering when u wud update…. keep it coming now!! thanks
Hello Craze: Excellent chapter. i enjoyed this one very much. keep up the good work. I’ll catch the next one.
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Glad you are back. Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
soooo very worth the wait…..thanks so much for the post. Great chapter…more pleeeze!
Hey, tell Alice to go away and get back to the action! GLAD YOU’RE BACK!!
Great story, another notch on your writing belt….but pls don’t make us wait so long between chapters…that is totally not fair…pls more !!!!
you better not take another month to post the next chapter crazy, even though this was worth waitng for. loved it. now on to the next and hurry up. please! thankyou. God i’m polite, so you have to post now just for that. lol.
aw i loved that. the tension was thick!
Hello! Callmecazy WHOA! I love it Thank you Another Beautiful Awesome Story again I can’t wait come on Please LOL posted this again ASAP! LOL HAVE A GREAT 4TH JULY and Thanks for coming back.
Megga- THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN! My eyes TOTALLY teared up during the “I love you” stuff (what can I say, you know I’m dramatic), and your descriptions were beautiful, everything seemed so real and the stakes were so high for both of them. (Megga claps for crazy) Please. . .PLEASE don’t wait another month to post! (Or I’m gonna have to whip out my bossy pants!)
Welcome back CMC – you have been missed. Wonderful update as always. Your story here is super..love the way you make us wait. Post soon….we want more CMC.
What the hell took you so long what the **** have you been doing had to get that off my chest Fanstic chapter Please don’t make us wait long the next chapter post real Soon
Smokie, I loved it! I am sorry I have not been a better friend and kept up reading but I am trying. You are so talented. Only you can make a kiss such a sensual, loving act that takes everyone’s breath away. Not just Tina’s. I hope you have someone you can give a special kiss to soon. She is one lucky gal. :-)