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Followed the memory of those fingertips caressing gently across her lips again… effectively filling her mind with visions she wasnt sure she could handle.
But of course with the sudden thrusts of lightning came the expected storm.
What was she to do? It wasnt lost on her that they hadnt spoken in while, in fact they have perfected the art of avoiding each other so well that they haven’t seen each other for over a week, but in her moments of weakness Bette still felt her breath tease her ear when she wasnt concentrating. It was painful. Unbearable. And yet, no matter how hard she tried there was no way she could ever part with any of them not a minute, or a second forgotten She needed them. Craved for them.
Besides memories were all she had now. It wasnt as if Tina was going to talk to her anyway. Not now, not after ignoring her existence for the past few days.
Why did she have to go and push her away? Why? Wasnt this what she wanted? After that kiss after everything? Wasnt Tina important?
Sinking into a nearby chair she sat for the longest time contemplating, it was only then when it occurred to her that she had never acted this way before So reckless, so unsure of herself
Its wasnt as if she had never kissed a person in her life, sure in fact she had more than her fair share but somehow Tina was different.
It didn’t even matter why, it’s just the way she was… Besides if Bette decided to ponder on that, she would take up far more time than the rest of the afternoon… Tina was just a mystery… But something made her stand out… something that set her apart from the rest… and somehow the reason behind that just seemed irrelevant.
The thick Californian air was fitting, mirroring the way she felt inside, as if her heart was about to swell and her mind about to burst with every emotion that overcame her In a way she was paralyzed, uncertain of what to do next, she knew she had to do something and if she did, she needed to go through with it quick.
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Good going Eric, ya big dork!! Give him the whole bag of sugar and kick his big tea drinkin’ ass out now!!! And then quick, back to Bette and Tina in the bedroom! Woo! THis is so, sooo good!!! Thanks
Later….I can hardly wait.
This was a fabulous chapter, the best yet. Keep going this is so so good.
Yay!… I think I got first comment Baby! hehehe.. And if I look back and im not.. ok ok i wont have a BF hehe..Baby… this chapter was great.. I was jsut thinking..Its kinda funny that the chapter contained.. Tea and sugar.. we talked about those things today too LOL.. how funny hehehe.. what a wonderful chapter..and dumb Eric grrr LOL… Its almost Saturday baby! heheh WOOO.. I cant wait.. But i feel the same.. No matter how long we talk.. 3 mins.. or 3 days straight.. hehe.. I’ll take what i can get.. MWAH x Infinity…xoxoxoxoxoxxox <3 U!
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Pls don’t leave us much later!!!!! quick, another chapter PLS……
OMG has it been a month already?? LMAO glad to see a post from you it starting to move along now hurry up with the next post
This chapter is great! What can we do to get you to post more often? Post soon please!
K
Great chapter, can’t wait for later. :)
I really like this story. I guess i’m just gonna wait for “LATER” also.
Damn this is so good, kick Eric’s ass out of there and get back to the Later that what Bette and Tina going to do next. Please post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Another chapter! AND YOU DIDN’T TELL ME? tsk tsk missy, you are in trouble. . .haha. Your writing is getting better and better. I am finding more of you in your writing, does that make sense? I think that’s why I like it so much, it’s so real. The emotions are right there, I felt and experienced them along with the characters. . .hmmm am I being a dweeb again? (scratches head, then shrugs)Sooooo, does this mean that you are going to post more frequently? Is the new job really that boring? HAha, I hope you have been collecting your pennies, I need some more croutons for our salad. . .
haha moonshadow is so rite eric is a big dork!! haha well b and t r gettin hotter!! plz continue
Eric is creepy. I hope Tina shows him the way out instead of getting him the sugar.
Later…you’re killing me here. How much later???? Please don’t keep us hanging too long.
get out the door Eric….NOW!!
Hello Craze: I’m well past late but I do want for you to know just how much I am enjoying this story, and I love your writing. The pace in this is excellent, your words are percise and deliberate. It allows for me to visualize every movement, feel every touch and most importantly connect. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent Job.
Great chapter. I like the uncertainty you’ve made them feel, it is very realistic. Fingers crossed they work it out soon!
Great story, thank you ! Always a pleasure
Tina why don´t you just kick Eric out and just start were you and Bette were interruptet. Post soon CMC….we can´t wait a hole month for an update. Please
Beat it eric be gone post soon