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“I’m not a great cook, but I can make a pretty good soup,” she mumbled, looking away, practically lying through her teeth. Being modest she of course opted not to mention that she was indeed handy in the kitchen, also keeping in mind of course that if she blurted out anything… there was no telling what Eric would do.
Id love to try it sometime. Eric said although from the sound of his voice, soup was the last thing on his mind. He waited for Tinas response but when he heard none, he repositioned himself slightly so that his body brushed perilously against hers, smiling quite smugly as he did so in the process.
Again Eric took another lingering glance, prompting Tina to turn her back on him and stop the microwave, not caring if the tea was ready or not
Youll have to settle for tea, I guess. she sharply answered; although she didnt mean to sound as harsh as she did at the time suddenly she felt the uneasiness that came with Erics piercing stare a feeling that somewhat caused her to turn self-conscious.
Ill take whatever I can get.
Tina carefully maneuvered herself from the ever-narrowing gap between her and Eric, Ill be back in just a second, she said with a breathless, nervous laugh, but before she could complete her sentence she saw the front door swing open. What she saw next brought a surge of relief and enthusiasm throughout her whole system.
“Bette, you’re back!” Tinas voice instantly brought a smile to the weary brunette’s face as she opened the trailer door, though it was just as quickly erased as she spotted Eric standing close by.
“Hey…” Bette said trying her best not to look too disappointed not even realizing that this was the first time she had said a word to her in a little over a week. With that said she just walked over the remainder of the room while closely paying attention to them, and in a manner of seconds Tina felt the need to explain herself.
“Eric and I were just”” she began uncertainly, but the right words evaded her for some reason.
“Tina was just making me some tea.” Eric supplied, but Bette didn’t seem to be listening all that much.
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Good going Eric, ya big dork!! Give him the whole bag of sugar and kick his big tea drinkin’ ass out now!!! And then quick, back to Bette and Tina in the bedroom! Woo! THis is so, sooo good!!! Thanks
Later….I can hardly wait.
This was a fabulous chapter, the best yet. Keep going this is so so good.
Yay!… I think I got first comment Baby! hehehe.. And if I look back and im not.. ok ok i wont have a BF hehe..Baby… this chapter was great.. I was jsut thinking..Its kinda funny that the chapter contained.. Tea and sugar.. we talked about those things today too LOL.. how funny hehehe.. what a wonderful chapter..and dumb Eric grrr LOL… Its almost Saturday baby! heheh WOOO.. I cant wait.. But i feel the same.. No matter how long we talk.. 3 mins.. or 3 days straight.. hehe.. I’ll take what i can get.. MWAH x Infinity…xoxoxoxoxoxxox <3 U!
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Pls don’t leave us much later!!!!! quick, another chapter PLS……
OMG has it been a month already?? LMAO glad to see a post from you it starting to move along now hurry up with the next post
This chapter is great! What can we do to get you to post more often? Post soon please!
K
Great chapter, can’t wait for later. :)
I really like this story. I guess i’m just gonna wait for “LATER” also.
Damn this is so good, kick Eric’s ass out of there and get back to the Later that what Bette and Tina going to do next. Please post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Another chapter! AND YOU DIDN’T TELL ME? tsk tsk missy, you are in trouble. . .haha. Your writing is getting better and better. I am finding more of you in your writing, does that make sense? I think that’s why I like it so much, it’s so real. The emotions are right there, I felt and experienced them along with the characters. . .hmmm am I being a dweeb again? (scratches head, then shrugs)Sooooo, does this mean that you are going to post more frequently? Is the new job really that boring? HAha, I hope you have been collecting your pennies, I need some more croutons for our salad. . .
haha moonshadow is so rite eric is a big dork!! haha well b and t r gettin hotter!! plz continue
Eric is creepy. I hope Tina shows him the way out instead of getting him the sugar.
Later…you’re killing me here. How much later???? Please don’t keep us hanging too long.
get out the door Eric….NOW!!
Hello Craze: I’m well past late but I do want for you to know just how much I am enjoying this story, and I love your writing. The pace in this is excellent, your words are percise and deliberate. It allows for me to visualize every movement, feel every touch and most importantly connect. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent Job.
Great chapter. I like the uncertainty you’ve made them feel, it is very realistic. Fingers crossed they work it out soon!
Great story, thank you ! Always a pleasure
Tina why don´t you just kick Eric out and just start were you and Bette were interruptet. Post soon CMC….we can´t wait a hole month for an update. Please
Beat it eric be gone post soon