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It was approximately one in the afternoon and she hadnt even managed to get herself out of bed. Not that she would have bothered to on a day like this. Everything just seemed so slow and lazy, that indeed it felt like it was a good day to just sit back and stay in since it was way too hot to do anything outside anyway.
Still clad in last nights pajamas Bette sluggishly climbed out of bed, stretched her arms and curled her toes. Outside the sun was steadily beating down… quite persistently in fact, like it had been doing all week… and the week before that. Peeking through a window, it pained her to think that in just a few minutes she would be out there driving in the same condition.
She passed by her dresser door and hastily swept her hair up in a messy twist, letting a few curls fall down to her face. She scanned the contents of her ever-growing closet and settled for what she usually wore in this kind weather, a sheer cotton blouse, over a pair of classic, well tailored pants, she had been sent recently.
It was now or never, she thought and after countless hours of convincing and conditioning herself to do what she what she was about to next.
It all boiled down to one thing
“You must be quite the cook.”
“It’s just tea”” Tina’s cheeks suddenly felt warm. “Anyone can make tea.” she shyly stated as she floated a tea bag in a mug of cold water and put it in the microwave for 5 minutes.
“It’s not just the tea…” Eric clarified, “It’s the way you move around the kitchen.” he smoothly explained as he leaned against the light oak cupboards, close to where Tina was standing. Perhaps just a little too close.
“I can tell that you feel comfortable cooking.”
The faint thump of footsteps went unnoticed outside the huge studio trailer as Tina tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear. She tried her best not to notice the way Eric was looking at her at the moment, or the way his eyes would never leave focus on her own.
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Good going Eric, ya big dork!! Give him the whole bag of sugar and kick his big tea drinkin’ ass out now!!! And then quick, back to Bette and Tina in the bedroom! Woo! THis is so, sooo good!!! Thanks
Later….I can hardly wait.
This was a fabulous chapter, the best yet. Keep going this is so so good.
Yay!… I think I got first comment Baby! hehehe.. And if I look back and im not.. ok ok i wont have a BF hehe..Baby… this chapter was great.. I was jsut thinking..Its kinda funny that the chapter contained.. Tea and sugar.. we talked about those things today too LOL.. how funny hehehe.. what a wonderful chapter..and dumb Eric grrr LOL… Its almost Saturday baby! heheh WOOO.. I cant wait.. But i feel the same.. No matter how long we talk.. 3 mins.. or 3 days straight.. hehe.. I’ll take what i can get.. MWAH x Infinity…xoxoxoxoxoxxox <3 U!
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Pls don’t leave us much later!!!!! quick, another chapter PLS……
OMG has it been a month already?? LMAO glad to see a post from you it starting to move along now hurry up with the next post
This chapter is great! What can we do to get you to post more often? Post soon please!
K
Great chapter, can’t wait for later. :)
I really like this story. I guess i’m just gonna wait for “LATER” also.
Damn this is so good, kick Eric’s ass out of there and get back to the Later that what Bette and Tina going to do next. Please post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Another chapter! AND YOU DIDN’T TELL ME? tsk tsk missy, you are in trouble. . .haha. Your writing is getting better and better. I am finding more of you in your writing, does that make sense? I think that’s why I like it so much, it’s so real. The emotions are right there, I felt and experienced them along with the characters. . .hmmm am I being a dweeb again? (scratches head, then shrugs)Sooooo, does this mean that you are going to post more frequently? Is the new job really that boring? HAha, I hope you have been collecting your pennies, I need some more croutons for our salad. . .
haha moonshadow is so rite eric is a big dork!! haha well b and t r gettin hotter!! plz continue
Eric is creepy. I hope Tina shows him the way out instead of getting him the sugar.
Later…you’re killing me here. How much later???? Please don’t keep us hanging too long.
get out the door Eric….NOW!!
Hello Craze: I’m well past late but I do want for you to know just how much I am enjoying this story, and I love your writing. The pace in this is excellent, your words are percise and deliberate. It allows for me to visualize every movement, feel every touch and most importantly connect. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent Job.
Great chapter. I like the uncertainty you’ve made them feel, it is very realistic. Fingers crossed they work it out soon!
Great story, thank you ! Always a pleasure
Tina why don´t you just kick Eric out and just start were you and Bette were interruptet. Post soon CMC….we can´t wait a hole month for an update. Please
Beat it eric be gone post soon