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“I… I’m Alice,” she stated, lost in a less than subtle stare, “and I have a reservation.”
In a less than a split second Alice quickly slapped herself on the forehead, cursing under her breath and pulling her eyes away momentarily.
“I mean I’m staying at the hotel.”
Her reaction was met with a very soft giggle; one that brought even more color to her already flushed cheeks.
“Well, hello, Alice,” she grinned, happily. “I’m Dana. I have a reservation, too, I guess.”
Looking up from between her fingers, Alice watched as Dana sat peacefully with her hands folded together in her lap, as if completely oblivious to her clumsy remark. Still blushing, the somewhat embarrased blonde slowly let her hands fall back to her sides before flashing a terribly forced smile. Before long she found herself lost in a second endless glance; this one even longer than the first.
Dana’s eyes were a bright shade of blue; the same blue that covered the vast surface of the ocean, and filled with the same elegance and beauty. Alice assumed that they were about the same age, and without much effort it was easy to see that their appearances seemed to contrast each other rather strikingly. Unlike her, Dana beautiful tanned skin making Alice feel paler than she seemed. Dana’s hair was a beautiful dark brown color, and she wore her hair up in a simple ponytail.
“Hhh… hello” she managed to let out, her eyes still locked on Dana’s features.
There was a short pause before Dana tilted her head to one side, instantly causing Alice to tilt as well in a clumsy reflexive manner. Her gaze continued to shift back and forth between Dana’s eyes and forehead as she smiled cheerfully, unfazed by her direct and downright rude staring.
“Do you like it?” Dana asked, softly.
“Do I like it?” Alice repeated, dumbfounded. “Do I like what? I mean… ” Alice watched as Dana looked over ar the hotel then back at her, it was only then when she realized what Dana was talking about.
“Oh, the hotel, of course. You know, apart from the lack of airconditioning It’s beautiful.”
Dana flashed her a smile and watched as Alice fell into a more comfortable state With this the two continued on talking like there was no tomorrow, and effectively losing track of time in the process.
Waking up at 8:30 pm Tina got out of bed and walked out of her hotel room. She needed some fresh air, but decided against walking outside the hotel grounds Instead she just opted to roam around, exploring the different venues the hotel had to offer and perhaps getting a drink later by the bar.
She walked towards the elevator, and hastened her pace as she saw the doors open.
“Stop!” she called out, barely making it inside on time Panting, and trying to catch her breath, Tina didn’t even notice who was holding the elevator doors for her.
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Alice was so cute. Loved the update
very good update cant wait for more i love this story please post soon!!
Good chapter. Damn Bette and Tina living next roon but they don’t know, Alice is so cute and funny, love it. Post soon please, thanks!
WEEE!!! Another chapter ALREADY CRAZY? I LOVE this story. . .I nearly bust a gut laughing when bette said “women. . .”Hahah, do you feel the same way? (raises eyebrow) Haha, awww, Tina’s sharing a room with Dana! Hmmm. . .I hope there’s a little “sneaking into eachother’s room” action for Bette and Tina. . .and I hope that Bette was the one that held the door for T. PLEASE post again soon. . .and get better already! Sheesh. . .HAha, catch ya later gator!
come on!!!!!!!!! post soon
Love the update. But I’m a little confused. Are they all there for work and Bette doesn’t know that Tina is there or huge coincidence they’re vacationing in Miami? (maybe I read too fast and missed something)
Of course there are LOTS of people still reading and waiting for more of this story…pls post again soon…tks
OOH! Loved it! You’re so good at this! I’m wondering if Dana is the one sharing Tina’s room…hmmm…Alice was so cute and the exchange between her and Dana was so adorable! THanks!
CMC,
This chapter is marvelously evocative of Miami as the heat and humidity of the city are emitted from the screen. Your ponderous and redolent pace makes this story a true delight. The devil is in the details and yep, you give us them in excess. The simplest of items warrants a full description. This adds such depth to your story.
Thank you for this continuation of a genuinely unique story.
The ‘so near but yet so far’ aspect is fascinating and I am yet to discover exactly what Bette and Tina’s relationship is in this version of events.
It put a big grin on my face the introduction of Alice and Dana. Who knows where you will take this partnership?
Can’t wait for your next post. Please make it soon.
Your Loyal Fan.
Loving it as always CMC. Now is Tina going to see Bette in the elevator???? Post soon
Callmecrazy – try “sending me crazy”…
Enjoying the story.
Post soon!