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    Showtime: Chapter 8

    Story written on July 31, 2005 by callmecrazy.
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    A twisted B&T beginning: On location in Miami…

     

    Sighing, she looked up from the table, watching as the waves made their gentle approach to the shores in the distance; free from the noise and bustle of the hotel, and peaceful under the glimmering light of the beautiful afternoon sky.

     

    After a quick breath of fervent air, Alice stood from the table and made her way past the poolside area towards the white sands of the beach. Once there, she began to walk along the shore, through ankle deep waters and the rhythmic movement of the tide as it passed between her legs. 

     

    A calm smile filled her expression as she stared out across the horizon, at peace for the first time in a very long while.  Closing her eyes, she lifted her nose towards the sky, taking in the soft scent of the ocean as it hung in the tempered air. Then, with another deep sigh ready to escape Alice’s lips, her exhalation quickly became a surprised yelp as her feet struck a small obstruction in her path.

     

     “Ouch!” came a soft voice.

     

    Hitting the sand with a thud and a small splash, Alice’s eyes darted away from the ocean sky and towards the cause of her fall, which happened to be a living person.  Quickly, she brought herself up to her knees and turned towards the figure, her face flushed with a red hue.

     

    “I’m so sorry, I didn’t see you there, and…”

     

    “It’s okay,” came the reply, as she began wiping the sand from her clothes.  “I guess I underestimated my ability to blend in with the sand a little bit.”

     

    Fumbling for words- a rare instance for Alice Pieszecki She was left speechless and groping for the right things to say but unfortunately nothing in particular came.

     

    Finally she just looked up from the beach to see a bright smile and a cheerful expression looking back at her.  Alice let out a sigh of relief just as their eyes made contact for the first time. At first, she just gazed and gazed, although gawked sounded more like it. She kept doing so somewhat blankly, searching for some kind of motive or intention behind the stranger’s inherent kindness. 

     

    Alice felt anxious, and even a little afraid, but the more she stared, the more she became lost in the pristine beauty of the woman’s simple, innocent expression.  She easily had the most beautiful eyes Alice had ever seen. Blue, and clear.

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    4. WEEE!!! Another chapter ALREADY CRAZY? I LOVE this story. . .I nearly bust a gut laughing when bette said “women. . .”Hahah, do you feel the same way? (raises eyebrow) Haha, awww, Tina’s sharing a room with Dana! Hmmm. . .I hope there’s a little “sneaking into eachother’s room” action for Bette and Tina. . .and I hope that Bette was the one that held the door for T. PLEASE post again soon. . .and get better already! Sheesh. . .HAha, catch ya later gator!

    6. Love the update. But I’m a little confused. Are they all there for work and Bette doesn’t know that Tina is there or huge coincidence they’re vacationing in Miami? (maybe I read too fast and missed something)

    8. OOH! Loved it! You’re so good at this! I’m wondering if Dana is the one sharing Tina’s room…hmmm…Alice was so cute and the exchange between her and Dana was so adorable! THanks!

    9. CMC,
      This chapter is marvelously evocative of Miami as the heat and humidity of the city are emitted from the screen. Your ponderous and redolent pace makes this story a true delight. The devil is in the details and yep, you give us them in excess. The simplest of items warrants a full description. This adds such depth to your story.
      Thank you for this continuation of a genuinely unique story.
      The ‘so near but yet so far’ aspect is fascinating and I am yet to discover exactly what Bette and Tina’s relationship is in this version of events.
      It put a big grin on my face the introduction of Alice and Dana. Who knows where you will take this partnership?
      Can’t wait for your next post. Please make it soon.
      Your Loyal Fan.

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