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    Showtime: Chapter 8

    Story written on July 31, 2005 by callmecrazy.
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    A twisted B&T beginning: On location in Miami…

     



     

    Walking briskly towards room 305 just minutes just after Tina disappeared from view, Bette reached into the back pocket of her jeans for the key, letting her other hand pass through her tangled, dark brown curls.  It was unbelievable how, after only a few hours in humid temperatures, it was clear that her hair was already crying out for a mercy- something, which she knew her half empty bottle of conditioner, was neither willing nor able to provide.

     

    Making her way inside, she watched as the bellboy set her luggage onto the nearest stand and after leaving him a very generous tip, Bette turned towards the window, somewhat captivated by the sparkling waves and deep violet sky.

     

    Realizing how alone she truly was inside her rather spacious hotel room, the lovely tanned beauty suddenly felt restlessness wash over her yet again, taking with it all the exhaustion the day had brought along and making her forget that just a few moments ago she was just about ready to collapse out of fatigue. She needed to clear her mind. Lately things had once again become shady between her and Tina, and Bette felt uncharacteristically powerless…

     

    “Women” Bette mumbled to herself, lost and frustrated in her own contemplation. It seemed to her that all women brought along with them nowadays was complicationin her life at least- that and an incredible amount of confusion in terms of what to do on next her part.

     

    The fact was over the past few days, maybe even a week or so, she and Tina had gotten into shady territory once more. Bette would have taken initiative only it was hard given that Tina had finally moved into her own separate trailer. It was then when Bette realized that if she truly wanted a chance to talk to Tina, to make things up to her, Maimi would be her best shot.

     


     

    Outside, the afternoon air seemed more intense than the winds Alice had felt from her room’s balcony; and without interior air conditioning to combat the heat, the temperature seemed to double instantly.

     

    Out of sheer boredom she stayed near the pool for the first few minutes, sitting alone at a table as a crowd of guests continued to yell and laugh above the splashing sounds of the water.  Alice lowered her head, resting her cheek onto her folded arms as she listened to the voices, hoping to hear the muses of a few cheerful couples and their families.  Instead, she found herself listening to the sounds of the water splashing and the light breeze of the wind against the hotel.

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    4. WEEE!!! Another chapter ALREADY CRAZY? I LOVE this story. . .I nearly bust a gut laughing when bette said “women. . .”Hahah, do you feel the same way? (raises eyebrow) Haha, awww, Tina’s sharing a room with Dana! Hmmm. . .I hope there’s a little “sneaking into eachother’s room” action for Bette and Tina. . .and I hope that Bette was the one that held the door for T. PLEASE post again soon. . .and get better already! Sheesh. . .HAha, catch ya later gator!

    6. Love the update. But I’m a little confused. Are they all there for work and Bette doesn’t know that Tina is there or huge coincidence they’re vacationing in Miami? (maybe I read too fast and missed something)

    8. OOH! Loved it! You’re so good at this! I’m wondering if Dana is the one sharing Tina’s room…hmmm…Alice was so cute and the exchange between her and Dana was so adorable! THanks!

    9. CMC,
      This chapter is marvelously evocative of Miami as the heat and humidity of the city are emitted from the screen. Your ponderous and redolent pace makes this story a true delight. The devil is in the details and yep, you give us them in excess. The simplest of items warrants a full description. This adds such depth to your story.
      Thank you for this continuation of a genuinely unique story.
      The ‘so near but yet so far’ aspect is fascinating and I am yet to discover exactly what Bette and Tina’s relationship is in this version of events.
      It put a big grin on my face the introduction of Alice and Dana. Who knows where you will take this partnership?
      Can’t wait for your next post. Please make it soon.
      Your Loyal Fan.

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