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Si me ves, o no
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Like an obedient child, Bette changed out of her suit and scooted into the covers. As soon as Tina sat next to her, she threw her arms around her torso and hugged her like a koala bear on a eucalyptus. “It feels like that last time he… ‘cleaned the house’.”
It captured Tina’s attention. Again the phrase “house cleaning”. She wondered what they meant by that. She combed her hand in the thick brown curls to soothe Bette, while waiting patiently for her to continue.
“I was driving away today and I took a glance into the first mustang. It was just one guy in it. I didn’t know him. So I pulled up in an alley, and walked back to the lot. I wasn’t supposed to, but I went to see what’s going on anyway. And there were only a couple of Irish men reloading the cocaine to their vehicles.” Bette took great comfort in the blonde’s little touch. It was unusual for her to lose it, but this morning, she was reminded of a horrible scene she had seen. “About four years ago, Jorge did something, not exactly the same but similar. He divided up his men into groups, and gave them basically the same instructions but at different locations. You know what he told them?”
Tina remained silent, trusting Bette would continue anyway.
“He told them they were baits for a large deal he will personally lead the rest of the men go negotiate for. Sounds familiar, doesn’t it.”
Yeah, it sounded exactly like the mission he gave her today. And Tina could already guess the following. “He didn’t show up.”
“No, he didn’t. But if he did, it’d be a perfect chance to make an arrest.” Bette sat up against the headboard, shaking her head. “He’s a mad genius, that man. He’s trolling, for the leak in his house. He tells them to leave the scene early,”
“So whoever leaks the information to the cops will not be put in danger of a potential gun fight. It’s a very tempting opportunity for an undercover.”
Bette nodded, and flashed a brief smile. Tina was smart, like she thought, too smart for her own good probably. “Yes, and the person will most likely come back home, so he can personally clear them out.”
“What happened last time?”
“Last time I was too high to even care. But that night almost a dozen people died. Two locations got busted, turned out one was just a coincidence because of a high profiled guy from the other party.” She had a pained look on her face. Bette shut her eyes tightly, the image of blood, screams, cries for mercy was still vivid. Even though she had been intoxicated, she still had some idea how brutal it had been. “He’s getting better at this, one person at a place so he doesn’t lose too much. And, get this, the Irish mob belongs to Jacob, Jodi’s brother. There’s never a division problem with his in-law. He was just doing Jorge a favor to keep his house clean.”
Now everything made sense.
Bette sighed heavily. “My point is, he is a coldblooded man. He will do whatever necessary to save himself. Killing, ruthlessly, isn’t an issue for him.” She was afraid of dying, she admitted, but again she had signed up for the possibility of losing her life long ago. What scared her more, was that if she died, what was going to happen to Tina. Just the thought of that induced a cold sweat on her back. Bette shuddered, exposing her most vulnerable moment to the woman she loved. It could be dangerous, she knew, but she also knew that Tina was the only reason she was sane right in this moment.
The trust Bette gave her completely blew her away. Tina closed her eyes, and put her hand in the brunette’s. “Siempre mis manos estarán en tus manos (my hand is always in yours).” She recited the line from the little poem under her breath. It was almost lost in the quiet air.
“Hmm?” Bette looked down at their hands, and traced her thumb along Tina’s fingers.
“Nothing, nothing. Don’t worry.” Tina kissed the brunette at her temple. “You’re alright. We’re alright.”
Meanwhile, Henry was driving on the other side of the town, smirking as he saw the line of police cars rushing pass him in the opposite direction, sirens screaming all the way.
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First thing first, SO to the lovely ladies reading and commenting!
Simonem, yep I changed quite a few things here and there, hope you find my pace comfortable.
doc, bibi, lipitora, SG, wkm, thanks for stopping by, ladies. I do my best to not disappoint!
lakeeskin Awww thanks so much for stepping up as a rep of the silent readers. Lots of love to you!
TN1, you know how much I love you… too much to be spoken, so I gift you my story instead :)
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Ahh I know you expect longer chapters. But this just seems like a right place to stop. I’ll let you guys imagine what happens to that bastard Henry for a while.
As for the poem in the chapter, I did the translation, my apologies in advance to any Spanish speaking readers, I know very little about poems or Spanish for that matter…
But the original version, in Chinese mind if I add, was absolutely breathtaking and heartbreaking. It’s the sixth Dalai Lama’s love poem “To see or not to see”, also changed it a bit coz I can’t remember the exact words.
Ok, now back to work, hopefully I’ll post another very soon.
Peace :)
Really liked the poem. So Henry is going to trap himself. Hope Bette and Tina are smarter than Jorge. Loved it, thanks
This chapter is the falling in love chapter. We. Know Bette loves Tina… She always has. Tina cares deeply for Bette and she is trying to understand why. This chapter had all of the elements of two people falling… The push, the pull, give and take, desire and will to protect and support. That’s the story but the way YOU wrote it is just as harmonious for us. We fall in love too… with the characters, the story, and the author. You are doing to us what Bette and Tina are doing to each other… A little give, a little mystery, wanting, hoping, etc. I love that you ended this chapter at this point. As any new lover I want to wonder about “what’s next” and I want to be comforted in my knowledge that I will be taken care of. Still loving this story.
Nice, sweet, and entertaining chapter. I loved it!
Wonderful update, keeps you interested.
Jorge is a very smart man and Henry seems to meet his destination.
Pps.
I really liked this chapter.
You’re very talented, but I have repeatedly told you. :)
I really enjoy the way you weave in mysterious fibers in this story. I liked it in the end you’re left temporarily in our imagination, what will happen.
I’m so glad that Tina was so smart to find a suspicious situation. and Bette and her, so no one was hurt in the end.
I hope they will eventually figure out how to go beyond Jorge brains.
It was a great chapter. I’m looking forward to the next one!
yeah,I like what you have done,but next time please mark it with NC-17,I want to be well prepared,you know what I mean!
The poem was beautiful just like this progressing story. Thankful for your imagination and talent to put it in writing!!
Different and interesting story. I worry though about them all the while I’m reading!
Love every chapter! Can’t wait too see how things go between Bette, Tina and the mob. Oh, and no need to solve this quickly, the longer the story, the better for us! ;)
Hmmm now i am worried about Tina cause if Henry is going to die he may give up info about her Then what would Tibette do !!!
Loved the chapter, I hope Bette is smart enough to get out of this situation by giving up evidence and helping Tina get the bad guys. PPS
Beautiful and wonderful poem, I love poems.
Bette lovely dedicated so much love Tina,
and I’m still concerned about the fact
Bette really be a criminal.
10 Stars.
go to the next chapter.