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Si me ves, o no
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Bette must have loved the poem. And the stains on the page, Tina ventured, were tears. She wondered if the brunette thought about her when she read the poem. She liked to think that it was the case, but at the same time, she felt selfish, and guilty, for having avoided Bette’s love all that time, for not giving her the chance she deserved. And now it was too late. Both of them were too far gone… what they had become.
Just as she was about to finish the whole poem collection, she heard some stumping in the hallway and the bedroom door was busted open with a loud noise. In came the brunette woman, panting, very nervously. She threw what looked like a medical kit for Jodi onto the chair and started pacing around the room.
She put the book back to the shelf and looked at Bette with worried eyes. “You’re back.”
“You’ve been out this room? I told you not to!” Clearly the brunette was serious and she didn’t look happy at all.
“I didn’t say anything, ok? I went down to the kitchen and Jorge was there, the whole time.” Tina backed off from the worked up woman. “Why was he there? I thought he was going out today.”
“I knew it!” Bette held her head with one hand and had her other hand on her hip. “I knew it I knew it I knew it.”
“What? What is it?” It really upset her to see the brunette pacing around like an ant on a hot plate.
Bette took in a deep breath, and stepped closer, looking her directly into the eyes. “You didn’t say anything to anyone, right?”
“No, I swear, Bette, what’s wrong?” The panicking and fear in those big doe eyes were just too much to ignore. Tina came up to the woman, and wrapped her arms around her waist. She could hear the rapid heartbeat when she put her ear against her neck, but it was slowing down as she gently drew small circles on the woman’s back. “Calm down, Bette, just calm down first, can you do that for me?”
Bette was exhausted, she accepted the embrace and rested her head on the blonde’s shoulder. “I’m sorry.”
“Shh… let’s go back to bed.” Thinking of the dedication Bette had given to her, she thought it was her turn to take care of the woman.
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First thing first, SO to the lovely ladies reading and commenting!
Simonem, yep I changed quite a few things here and there, hope you find my pace comfortable.
doc, bibi, lipitora, SG, wkm, thanks for stopping by, ladies. I do my best to not disappoint!
lakeeskin Awww thanks so much for stepping up as a rep of the silent readers. Lots of love to you!
TN1, you know how much I love you… too much to be spoken, so I gift you my story instead :)
doris, mscully, Lishalove, thanks guys! Stop by anytime and lots of love to you as well!
Ahh I know you expect longer chapters. But this just seems like a right place to stop. I’ll let you guys imagine what happens to that bastard Henry for a while.
As for the poem in the chapter, I did the translation, my apologies in advance to any Spanish speaking readers, I know very little about poems or Spanish for that matter…
But the original version, in Chinese mind if I add, was absolutely breathtaking and heartbreaking. It’s the sixth Dalai Lama’s love poem “To see or not to see”, also changed it a bit coz I can’t remember the exact words.
Ok, now back to work, hopefully I’ll post another very soon.
Peace :)
Really liked the poem. So Henry is going to trap himself. Hope Bette and Tina are smarter than Jorge. Loved it, thanks
This chapter is the falling in love chapter. We. Know Bette loves Tina… She always has. Tina cares deeply for Bette and she is trying to understand why. This chapter had all of the elements of two people falling… The push, the pull, give and take, desire and will to protect and support. That’s the story but the way YOU wrote it is just as harmonious for us. We fall in love too… with the characters, the story, and the author. You are doing to us what Bette and Tina are doing to each other… A little give, a little mystery, wanting, hoping, etc. I love that you ended this chapter at this point. As any new lover I want to wonder about “what’s next” and I want to be comforted in my knowledge that I will be taken care of. Still loving this story.
Nice, sweet, and entertaining chapter. I loved it!
Wonderful update, keeps you interested.
Jorge is a very smart man and Henry seems to meet his destination.
Pps.
I really liked this chapter.
You’re very talented, but I have repeatedly told you. :)
I really enjoy the way you weave in mysterious fibers in this story. I liked it in the end you’re left temporarily in our imagination, what will happen.
I’m so glad that Tina was so smart to find a suspicious situation. and Bette and her, so no one was hurt in the end.
I hope they will eventually figure out how to go beyond Jorge brains.
It was a great chapter. I’m looking forward to the next one!
yeah,I like what you have done,but next time please mark it with NC-17,I want to be well prepared,you know what I mean!
The poem was beautiful just like this progressing story. Thankful for your imagination and talent to put it in writing!!
Different and interesting story. I worry though about them all the while I’m reading!
Love every chapter! Can’t wait too see how things go between Bette, Tina and the mob. Oh, and no need to solve this quickly, the longer the story, the better for us! ;)
Hmmm now i am worried about Tina cause if Henry is going to die he may give up info about her Then what would Tibette do !!!
Loved the chapter, I hope Bette is smart enough to get out of this situation by giving up evidence and helping Tina get the bad guys. PPS
Beautiful and wonderful poem, I love poems.
Bette lovely dedicated so much love Tina,
and I’m still concerned about the fact
Bette really be a criminal.
10 Stars.
go to the next chapter.