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So it begins
Her giving nature had led her into medicine and her wanderlust had finally led her here to England. Her home here in a small village in the countryside outside of the capital where she had accepted an offer to work at a world famous children’s hospital. When working she had a small 1 bedroom flat where she could lay her head on the occasions that she could not and would not be far from the charges in her care. She was a great and passionate doctor and at 35 was in the ascendency of her career and a specialist pediatric surgeon doing her best to save the lives of all who were bought to her for help.
Her soul would ache with each charge she could not help but it was within her to be strong and carry on, doing all she could each and every day to use her talents and give the gift of life to the children she tended.
Once work was done, however, it was here, to her home in the country that she would come. To relax and recuperate from the wounds of loss and to sleep and celebrate the lives saved and prepare to start again. She came knowing here was her home, her part of the world and a place where she felt most at peace. She did not cling to the past, but here took the time to contemplate and learn what there was to be learnt from each day, processing it and then moving forward safe that she knew better than the day before how to help.
She kept odd hours and in the five years she had owned her house had not been known to have one routine. The hours of her job and her inability to stick to a set routine made her an enigma, known only to her neighbors as the American doctor from the city. On the occasions they had to cross her path, however, it could be seen that a smile would be left on their faces following each encounter.
As such it had been noticed that over the last months Tina seemed to have developed, for the first time in her life, a habit she could not shake. As unusual as it was it had been noticed that on the days that Tina was at home she would walk to the shop to buy a paper at exactly 08:30 she would leave her house and would stroll to the shop before returning to sit on her front porch to read the paper before going inside at 09:45. Every day she was home, without fail or deviation she would observe this ritual, and if the neighbors thought this to be odd it was nothing on the consternation Tina herself felt when she realized she was unable to avoid her daily fix.
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Well hopefully it begins…I mean if Bette continues to let Tina talk to a door and not open it and introduce herself I dont see anything happening lol….nice start but they way well written and detailed, got my attention!
I enjoyed this introduction from both Bette and Tina.
I believe Tina is able to pull Bette outside her own house and start living a real life again.
Please continue.
Great writing. Brilliant! Please continue.
Really enjoyed it. Looking forward to more. Thanks
Very interesting beginning to your story. By the end I had so many questions that I’m sure you’ll answer all in good time. I liked the way you developed the characters just enough to cause curiosity to want to know more about them, Interesting that they both chose England to land and call home. But as life goes, all things happen for a reason.
Yes, I could feel destiny at work here with an uncontrollable urges that both felt in recognizing the other, whether through the view of each others’ body or in the eyes, windows to their souls. Tina, being the doctor, looks into others’ eyes all the time and can see so much about the person. Bette’s daily routine has been interrupted by this other woman’s energy and it has opened up her world to be able to see again.
Excited to see where you are heading with this. Thank you!
Hey Ellie R thx for your story. I like it. But will you please finish Trouble in deigner clother. Pretty please.
OK you have my interest.
A good start for a promising storyline with so many questions raised.
Please post again asap to start giving some answers, or more questions!
A new and different beginning and very interesting too. Enjoyed this first chapter just waiting for many more. .And I agree with els73 asking for the continuation of Trouble in Designer Suits, have liked that story from the beginning and always wished for more for a very long time. Saw your recent posting but did not have the time to comment. Please continue with the story. Thanks for posting.
Well written and intriguing. Please continue.
Thanks! They are both just sad! Love will win!! PPS
Please, please continue! Looking forward to the next chapter, thank you!
Looking forward to see where this story takes us. Great start.
Intriguing…please continue
Great mysterious start! Please continue!
Another nice story … Very interesting interaction between Bette & Tina. Please continue soon. Thank you
Please continue soon, I’ve been checking everyday as I’m already hooked.
Great start, this story has everything to be a success.
Waiting new chapter.
Pretty nice. :)