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    So it begins

    Story written on August 16, 2014 by Ellie R.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=86429
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    Thoughts of single people in large house, however. Left Tina’s mind along with all other rational thoughts though as the woman straightened finally to her full and intimidating height. Her feet rooted themselves to the spot watching as the stunning brunette retrieved her bags from the boot and stood then on the path as she

    Thoughts of single people in large house, however. Left Tina’s mind along with all other rational thoughts though as the woman straightened finally to her full and intimidating height. Her feet rooted themselves to the spot watching as the stunning brunette retrieved her bags from the boot and stood then on the path as she looked up at her new home. The cab did a three-point turn and headed back out to collet its next fair and still Tina could not move. The breath had left her body and her heart pounded wildly, drowning out all other noise. Hidden in the shadows between the light cast by two street lamps her presence went unnoticed. She wanted to move, to say hello, to introduce herself and welcome the beautiful stranger. She longed to go over and make her presence know but she couldn’t, her body would not allow it, her brain would not give the instruction to make it do so.

    She felt her cheeks flush as the brunette turned to gather her bags getting ready to head in, she was furious with herself as she watched, totally inactive and missing the opportunity she saw for a perfect uninterrupted first meeting.

    Then it all changed, as the brunette straightened once again having collected her belongings she glanced around looking everywhere in a jerky fashion, and as she did Tina saw into her eyes and had to cover her mouth to stifle the gasp that threatened to escape. The woman’s eyes showed Tina so much, more than she wanted to know. The woman was scared and wounded and on the edge. The pain in those eyes called to Tina, pulled at every string of her heart and still she couldn’t move. She had no idea what had caused the things he had seen in the strangers eyes or how in fact she had been able to see so much, but she had and she knew that to help was now a part of her, she needed to heal that pain, to see the beauty whole and happy. Tina had never felt anything this strong and instant for another human being in her entire life.

    Unsure how long she had stood there after the woman had disappeared behind a closed front door she finally let herself into her house, destined for the a restless night and the beginning of a year long vigil over the woman she would come to think of as her wounded angel in lace of a name she would take some time to learn.

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    1. Well hopefully it begins…I mean if Bette continues to let Tina talk to a door and not open it and introduce herself I dont see anything happening lol….nice start but they way well written and detailed, got my attention!

    2. I enjoyed this introduction from both Bette and Tina.

      I believe Tina is able to pull Bette outside her own house and start living a real life again.

      Please continue.

    5. Very interesting beginning to your story. By the end I had so many questions that I’m sure you’ll answer all in good time. I liked the way you developed the characters just enough to cause curiosity to want to know more about them, Interesting that they both chose England to land and call home. But as life goes, all things happen for a reason.
      Yes, I could feel destiny at work here with an uncontrollable urges that both felt in recognizing the other, whether through the view of each others’ body or in the eyes, windows to their souls. Tina, being the doctor, looks into others’ eyes all the time and can see so much about the person. Bette’s daily routine has been interrupted by this other woman’s energy and it has opened up her world to be able to see again.
      Excited to see where you are heading with this. Thank you!

    7. OK you have my interest.
      A good start for a promising storyline with so many questions raised.
      Please post again asap to start giving some answers, or more questions!

    8. A new and different beginning and very interesting too. Enjoyed this first chapter just waiting for many more. .And I agree with els73 asking for the continuation of Trouble in Designer Suits, have liked that story from the beginning and always wished for more for a very long time. Saw your recent posting but did not have the time to comment. Please continue with the story. Thanks for posting.

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