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So Totally Off Plan: Chapter 3: 9:49am and 52 seconds
9:49am and 52 seconds.
Bette was already sitting at a table in The Planet, she had just ordered some green tea and was looking around, trying to calm her nerves, ‘Only ten more minutes to wait’, she thought. She would have been even earlier if she hadn’t purposely made herself sit down, and flip through a magazine for a half an hour before leaving the house. Tina was the first thing she thought of when she woke up that morning. She got out of bed, swam fifty laps, showered, dressed, made herself a cup of coffee and some breakfast and was ready to go by 8:30am.
Sitting at the table, Bette went over what she should say and not say. She wanted to make sure that nothing ruined this afternoon, sometimes her hot head had a way of getting *in* the way. ‘Not today, just listen and think before you speak’, Bette thought.
9:54am.
Bette looked at her watch again. Her tummy did a little flip knowing Tina would be there any minute. This was really the first time they would spend time together alone in quite awhile.
Bette looked up just in time to see a pregnant belly coming into view.
“Hi!” Tina said with a cheery look on her face.
“Hi,” Bette replied. She stood up and gave Tina a hug. “Here, let me get the chair for you…”
“It’s okay Bette, you don’t have to…” Bette had already pulled the chair out and grabbed Tina’s purse to set it in the empty chair on her other side.
“I want to.” Bette said.
“Well, thank you… it is a little harder getting up and down lately.” Both women settled into their seats, Bette scooted her chair a little closer to Tina’s and sat forward.
“So, how are you feeling this morning? Are you hungry?” Bette asked.
Tina laughed, “Yeah, the question is when am I not hungry?”
Bette smiled at her, “Well, I know I probably say it too much now… but you look beautiful.” Bette scooted her chair a bit closer to Tina.
“I will never get tired of hearing that,” Tina noticed that Bette had moved a little closer, “do you want to touch her?” She looked down at her belly.
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(51 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
I’ve been waiting for that chapter for a while now….and it was totally worth the wait. Please don’t make us wait so long next time. Great chapter, hope to see more soon.
Please, don’t wait two months to post the next. Your story is so good.
i’m with pan. Great.
I love your take on how they discuss the affair, and your take on how Tina got pregnant the second time, that makes so much sense story-wise. Thumbs way way up! please update soon!
Why can’t it be just like this?
Yay! No Helena!!!!
Thanks for coming back and continuing this very satisfying story!
I’m so glad your’e back youv’e been missed. This was just beautiful and I won’t say well worth the wait cos I don’t want you to take so long next time. Please post soon.
that was so cool love it thanks more soon tho
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN???!! I have craved your story for ages!!! Im sooo glad your back!! Please post the next chapter soon..I love your take on B&T..x
Great.
I was desperatly waiting for you, thank you for this update, it’s beautiful. Please don’t let me wait so long next time, post soon.
It’s sad the reason why Bette had sex with Tina that led to the conseption of their daughter. It’s nice how they’re talking though. Hope to see the next chapter in the near future.
Nice to have them talking, and the backstory was sad but good.
Why am I thinking when they get alone, what the baby’s going to be hearing is a lot of moaning and supplications to various dieties using various adjectives.
Well, I just have to say, you take as long as your little heart desires between chapters. Sure, my butt gets sore sitting on the edge of my seat for so long…. But who can complain when we get something like THIS in the end? I’ll take one of your stories anytime you care to post it. (Pausing to add you to my “favorite authors” list!)
BRAVO!
Hey, I was so happy to see your story. It was well worth the wait. Great story about when and how Tina got pregnant. Please post again soon. We all are really enjoying it. Thanks!
OMG..i´m so glad you back…great chapter really great..we all can see how much Bette is trying to get Tina back and be a better wife for her..please dont do this to us and post very soon :-)
So glad to see an update on this wonderful story. It has been missed. It’s so great to have these two talking. Thanks!!!
hooray………the story came back, I love it