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So Totally Off Plan: Chapter 3: 9:49am and 52 seconds
“Yeah, is she moving around?” Bette asked.
“She was a little bit earlier…” Tina reached for Bette’s hand, “here… feel this”, she placed Bette’s hand over her belly and under her right breast, causing Bette to scoot her chair over just a little more, their legs practically touching. “Her little butt is usually right here…” Tina took Bette’s fingers and pressed down into her tummy. At first it just felt like pushing on a yoga ball, firm but a bit squishy, but soon her fingers bumped into something.
“Feel that? The hard little lump?” Tina asked.
Bette stared at her fingers in amazement for a moment, then looked up at Tina with small tears in her eyes. “Is that her? Her little baby butt?”
Tina laughed, “Yeah, isn’t it funny?”
“It’s amazing…” Bette looked back down at her hand on Tina’s belly.
“It is, isn’t it?” Tina replied as Bette looked back up at her.
“Hey Bette, hi Tina… What can I get for you two this morning?” The waitress was standing next to their table.
“Hi Susie… um…” Bette looked down at her menu.
“I’ll just have a blueberry muffin and a banana please,” Tina looked at the tea pot sitting on the table, “Is there enough tea for me?” She asked Bette.
“Of course, we’ll take one more mug for her… and I’ll have the fresh fruit crepes please.” Bette replied.
“Okay girls, sounds good.” Susie said as she finished writing down the order and walked away.
“So…”, Bette turned her attention back to Tina. “What do you have planned for the rest of the day?”
“Bette, can I ask you a question?” Tina asked, ignoring her small talk.
“Um… yeah, of course.”
“Are you upset with me? About how I got pregnant this time?”
Bette sat for a moment, choosing her words carefully. She was upset, and at times furious, but she knew in her heart that Tina hadn’t done it out of spite or anger. She did it because she thought it was what Bette needed–wanted.
“It isn’t important, what’s important is that I am very happy for you now… for us.” Bette said.
“But it is important, Bette. I feel like you are walking on eggshells around me. I want us to be able to talk and work on things and we can’t do that if we aren’t honest with each other. I want an opportunity to tell you why I did this.”
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(51 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
I’ve been waiting for that chapter for a while now….and it was totally worth the wait. Please don’t make us wait so long next time. Great chapter, hope to see more soon.
Please, don’t wait two months to post the next. Your story is so good.
i’m with pan. Great.
I love your take on how they discuss the affair, and your take on how Tina got pregnant the second time, that makes so much sense story-wise. Thumbs way way up! please update soon!
Why can’t it be just like this?
Yay! No Helena!!!!
Thanks for coming back and continuing this very satisfying story!
I’m so glad your’e back youv’e been missed. This was just beautiful and I won’t say well worth the wait cos I don’t want you to take so long next time. Please post soon.
that was so cool love it thanks more soon tho
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN???!! I have craved your story for ages!!! Im sooo glad your back!! Please post the next chapter soon..I love your take on B&T..x
Great.
I was desperatly waiting for you, thank you for this update, it’s beautiful. Please don’t let me wait so long next time, post soon.
It’s sad the reason why Bette had sex with Tina that led to the conseption of their daughter. It’s nice how they’re talking though. Hope to see the next chapter in the near future.
Nice to have them talking, and the backstory was sad but good.
Why am I thinking when they get alone, what the baby’s going to be hearing is a lot of moaning and supplications to various dieties using various adjectives.
Well, I just have to say, you take as long as your little heart desires between chapters. Sure, my butt gets sore sitting on the edge of my seat for so long…. But who can complain when we get something like THIS in the end? I’ll take one of your stories anytime you care to post it. (Pausing to add you to my “favorite authors” list!)
BRAVO!
Hey, I was so happy to see your story. It was well worth the wait. Great story about when and how Tina got pregnant. Please post again soon. We all are really enjoying it. Thanks!
OMG..i´m so glad you back…great chapter really great..we all can see how much Bette is trying to get Tina back and be a better wife for her..please dont do this to us and post very soon :-)
So glad to see an update on this wonderful story. It has been missed. It’s so great to have these two talking. Thanks!!!
hooray………the story came back, I love it