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So Totally Off Plan: Chapter 4: A Change In Motivation
As Bette pulled into the driveway of her house she peered into her rear view mirror, Tina was only a few yards behind her, following her to the home they once shared. Bette turned off the car and got out, waiting for Tina to do the same. After Tina carefully hoisted herself out of her own car, she walked over to meet Bette, quietly following her up the side steps to the front porch.
“You feel okay?” Bette asked.
“Yeah, I’m fine, I’m just kind of cumbersome these days.” Tina laughed.
“You’re beautiful,” Bette reached over and gave Tina’s belly a small pat.
Bette unlocked the door and they both walked into the house. She wondered if it was strange for Tina to be back here, she hadn’t stepped foot in their home since she stayed for a few days four months ago.
“You want anything to drink?” Bette asked, “I might have some orange juice.”
“Bette, if you have any orange juice in that refrigerator, I probably bought it and I am sure it has expired by now.” Tina replied.
Bette looked towards the kitchen, “Yeah, you’re probably right. How about some water? That doesn’t go bad.”
Tina laughed, “No, no I’m good for now.”
“Okay…” Bette just stood in their living room, unsure of what to do next.
“Come here,” Tina reached for Bette’s hand, “Sit down with me.” Tina pulled Bette towards the couch. They sat down on the couch–leaving little room between them. “You know, the last time I was here I really thought I would be staying…” Tina spoke first.
“I hoped you would… but I kind of messed that up.”
“No, no you didn’t. It was the right thing for us at the time. We weren’t ready, I wasn’t ready. I knew in my heart that we shouldn’t get back together, but I was just so lost and still so deeply in love with you that I was willing to risk it just to feel normal again.”
“You feel different now?” Bette asked. “Yeah, I do… we needed this time apart, Bette. I needed to know that getting back together with you had more to do with how we feel about each other and less to do with what was easier. But one feeling hasn’t changed.”
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(46 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Very nice…in very many ways. Looking forward to the next (hopefully not long of a wait) installment.
great conversation and sweet connecting between these 3. More please
i´m so glad you back..i´m very happy that Bette and Tina are trying to work things out and i hope for good..amazing chapter as always and please dont take so long post real soon i cant wait for more..thanks
Very, very nice done. So sweet and tender.
K
Very sweet chapter. Just love this.
Loved this! It was so touching!
Wonderful job. What an enjoyable read. Hope the silence b/w this and the next chapter won’t be too extended! Thanks!
more please!!!
Hey V , that’s me skylar3 , btw . hahaahaha . ;))
Amazing story !! Beautifully written !!
Hey V !! I love ur story . its so beautiful . :D i have been waitin so long for this story update :D thanx so much . pls keep up the gr8 work and pls post soooon . pretty pls :)) can’t wait to see what happens next . TiBette interaction was sooo sweet :))
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyyy !!! :D
thanx for writing this amazing story .
Really sweet tori. I look forward to more
Beautiful history,excellent writing. Thanks
this was sooooo awesomely sweet……”let me get my pen and pater so i can write that one down”…..i love that…..lol……….that sounds like somethin my girl would say….lol……i love this please continue soon…….
I looovvveee this, it was so beautiful. All of these one offs are well written and amazing