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Something In Common
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Tonya looked away. “Everybody gets lonely. Including me. Just because I’m shrewd doesn’t mean I don’t have a heart. I just want someone to be there with me.”
“I’m here with you,” Alice replied without thinking. She smacked herself on the forehead. “I mean – I meant – damn. You know what I mean. I’m here listening right now. That’s all.”
Smiling, Tonya said, “I know what you meant.”
Somehow, hearing this very humanlike confession from Tonya made Alice look at her in a slightly different light. It made her more likeable and even moreattractive, God forbid. Staring into Tonya’s blue eyes, Alice found her eyes drifting down to stare at Tonya’s lips.
*****, Alice! Snap out of it! Why are you looking at Tonya that way? And why is she looking at me that way? What the ***** is going on here? I should have just stayed in bed.
Biting her lip gently, Tonya’s eyes stared beseechingly into Alice’s brown orbs. The pair both felt themselves drawn to one another, a force pulling them together like a magnet.
As Alice felt her face drifting closer to Tonya’s, her mind began to scream at her: No, Alice, no! Stop this! Turn away! Think of something else. Anything else. Think unsexy thoughts. Janet Reno in a bathing suityuck, that was too unsexy. Now I feel slightly sick. Or is it just because I’m about to kiss Tonya? Alice knew she should feel that this was wrong, but she didn’t. Strangely enough, she felt cared for right now with Tonya, and she liked that feeling. Alice knew that when it all came down to it, she was looking for someone who could take care of her, and she knew from watching Dana that Tonya was good at making people feel that way.
Their lips met gently, their eyes wide and staring at each other as their lips pressed together impassively a moment before they both slowly came to life. Tonya blinked once, then twice, before applying more pressure with her lips and slipping her tongue out to trace Alice’s bottom lip.
Her eyes half-closed, Alice let herself submit to the feeling, one hand coming up to caress the side of Tonya’s face, her fingers tracing along Tonya’s cheekbone. As Tonya’s tongue slipped past her bottom lip, she opened her mouth to accept it inside.
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hmmmm…interesting, plotting those two together. I liked it!
OMFG!!! That was hilarious…All the nonsense banter and arguing…*shakes head and wipes tears from eyes* Granted, it was TOTALLY ALIEN-STRANGE but really very good too. I need more
Don’t be scared of the Ton-Ton, Alice,” LMAO no one should ever be afraid of the Ton Ton. You did it, you immortalized Tonass! Are you going to pay for Alice’s therapy? brilliant!
wow this is really interesting, i liked it a lot.
The idea of tonass makes me say “ick” in my mind, but you have me intrigued foxfire. I hope you’ll continue. I’d love to see the other girls’ reaction to Tonya and Alice.
Wow, I can’t believe it, but I actually liked this alot. When I read the posts on the Danish thread about Tonass, I thought “no way,” but I actually liked this. You wrote Tonya and Alice very believably and I think I’d like to see more!
i liked it too! i’m amazed that i did. but i did.
that was soooo weird!…yet i liked it. janet reno in a bathing suit – loved that line. ^ – ^ it made me gag and laugh at the same time.
That, was HILARIOUS! Tonass is actually quite cute. Both characters were spot on and loved the constant bickering. Forget paying for Alice’s therapy, pay for mine because I’m still having a hard time believing Alice and Tonya “got jiggy with it”. Laughed my ass off at the Ton-Ton, just great!