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Something so right – Chapter 101
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The look on Bette’s face gave truth to Sarah’s comments – the older woman laughed mirthlessly
“I can see that he’s tried that line on you “
Bette nodded
“He’s a swine “ Sarah said “I know Tina thinks this is too soon but I am no pushover. I have brought Tina and Willow up to be strong positive women. If I know one thing about my daughters is that they will always stand up for themselves. You might think that I am being hard, I am sure as hell that Tina thinks that but I am trying to ensure that I don’t end up in a tiny apartment in town on my own having to work in any job I can”
“We wouldn’t let that happen “ Bette said
“I am sure that’s not his intention but do you think it hasn’t crossed that bimbo’s mind that she’s just had a son who is now entitled to a share of a very profitable piece of land ?”
Bette was taken aback – she had been thinking of worst case scenarios but even she hadn’t gone as far as Sarah. Bette looked back at the spreadsheet in front of her
“This farm is a very valuable going concern “
“And I don’t object to him having a fair share of it – but not all of it and I want my piece of security. “
“At the moment its impossible but in time maybe the two of you can sit down and negotiate some sort of agreement “
“He’s got a law firm behind him “
“There is only one law firm in this one horse town ?” Bette said smiling
“Carrie knows her mother “ Sarah said going off on a tangent “ She’s someone whose got an eye for the main chance “
Bette sighed and looked at Tina’s mother
“Well can I suggest that you stop wasting your time baking cakes and pies and find a better law firm in a bigger town. I take it that you wouldn’t take him back ?”
“What do you think ?”
Bette lent back and threw her pen down “My father cheated on my mother right from the start of their marriage apparently “
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“Tina might have been daddy’s girl once but she is Bette’s girl now ” I love this line:)great chapter. PPS
Hey AllyE, It is a happy Thursday now that you have posted more of this great story.This chappie was amazing.Tina and Finn sorting through their thoughts and feelings was so loving and tender. They really do look after each other. The cake stealing was precious.Then Tina speaking to Sarah and Bette was interesting especially when Bette stepped in to light the atmosphere and stop Tina and Sarah arguing over Niall’s behavior and actions.Bette and Sarah’s heart-to-heart was brilliant. Given Sarah’s initial reaction to Bette, thsi shown how many she has changed. Sarah sees that Bette is perfect for Tina. She will protect and defend her daugther constantly. Bette will challenge and comfort Tina at every turn.It is great to read such an honest expose of a mother to her daughter’s girlfriend chat. This is all about the acceptance.More please as I feel Niall and Sarah have much to sort out.Ally, as ever you blow me away with your talent.Thank you is so inadequate yet it is heartfelt and truthful,Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
Wondrful Chapter!!! Tina needs to stop sticking up for her dad. I am glad Sarah and Bette are talking and get on so well. Thank you PPS
Yes, she is indeed Bette’s girl now and what a girl. Hope Sarah will heed Bette’s advice, she does need an attorney and quickly for her own sake or she will be blindsided again. That girl will make Niall do somethings against Sarah just to have her own way and he is too ignorant to see what will be happening. Good that Tina dn Finn could talk about the farm and what their father is doing. Would love to have shared those scones with them. Love scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam. Delish !!!!!!. Thanks for posting.
Yes, she is indeed Bette’s girl now and what a girl. Hope Sarah will heed Bette’s advice, she does need an attorney and quickly for her own sake or she will be blindsided again. That girl will make Niall do somethings against Sarah just to have her own way and he is too ignorant to see what will be happening. Good that Tina dn Finn could talk about the farm and what their father is doing. Would love to have shared those scones with them. Love scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam. Delish !!!!!!. Thanks for posting.
Bette is really brave. Normally you just can’t win in such a situation. It doesn’t take much to stand in the cross fire.
“She´s Bette´s girl now” – perfect line. Seems young Gemma might cause a lot of problems – maybe even some for Niall. Thanks for posting.
GREAT chappie Ally. I also hope that Sarah takes Bette’s advice and get a good lawyer, maybe Bette or her mother could recomend someone. I hope that Bette can help open Tina’s eyes to a true picture of her father. Not only was it cowardous how he waited until after he had a child to leave his family, but it is also LOW how he had let Sarah bear the brunt of the children’s rage about their open marriage which he more than willing participated in. As I said before, Sarah deserves credit for at least being honest and open with her children and I hope that it does not take too long for Tina, Finn and Willow to realize this. PPS :o).
Thanks for the update. I’m glad we got to hear Sarah’s perspective of her relationship with her husband. It always seemed unfair to me that Tina placed more of the blame for the open marriage arrangement on her mother. Maybe now she’ll be able to see if more clearly and start building a better relationship with her.
Loved the last line. Excellent update. Thank you.
Thanks for the great update.
Looks as if there is going to be a shift here……with tina and her mom…and Sarah’s role
So Sarah is not really what Niel’s painted of her?…she’s not the “one” who has a bad behavior?…WHICH ONE WHO’S TELLING THE TRUTH?