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Something so right – Chapter 101
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“Afternoon “
Sarah looked up “Your girlfriend is a very good business woman as well as being a great person “
Bette looked up and smiled
“How’s the books looking ?”
“Very impressed “ Bette said “There are some bills not paid but they don’t add up to a huge drain on the incomings. The business is owed more than it owes – we have written a couple of letters to send to people with outstanding bills”
Tina knew that Bette loved this sort of thing
“Do things look better than you thought mom ?”
Sarah nodded “It looks like we can afford more staff – we’ve kept a level of capital that we haven’t touched. But Bette’s telling me that its too much and we should be making the money work for us “
“It’s a bit soon to be making plans isn’t it ?”
“I am not going to work 20 hours a day while HE is a kept man “ Sarah snapped back.
“I am not saying that you should but I am worried that it’s not been a week, he told you about the baby only 24 hours ago “
“You think I am going to waste another 24 minutes on that man ?”
“Mom – that’s my dad “
“Well he’s your father but he’s nothing to me – I was talking to Carrie on the phone last night “
“Hence this attitude ?” Tina said
“No – I am looking out for myself – just like he looked out for himself when he found a mistress and got her pregnant. “
Bette could see that this conversation was going badly. She had heard much worse about Niall in the last hour and hoped she wouldn’t repeat any of what she had said to Tina. Tina was looking upset and Sarah defiant and that was one bad mix.
“Your mom brought me some pie “ Bette said “She’s been baking “
“We saw the small mountain of pies and cakes”
“Let me guess – you and Finn have been eating those scones that are still warm ?”
Tina smiled “Well yes “
Bette laughed “She’s got you there “
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“Tina might have been daddy’s girl once but she is Bette’s girl now ” I love this line:)great chapter. PPS
Hey AllyE, It is a happy Thursday now that you have posted more of this great story.This chappie was amazing.Tina and Finn sorting through their thoughts and feelings was so loving and tender. They really do look after each other. The cake stealing was precious.Then Tina speaking to Sarah and Bette was interesting especially when Bette stepped in to light the atmosphere and stop Tina and Sarah arguing over Niall’s behavior and actions.Bette and Sarah’s heart-to-heart was brilliant. Given Sarah’s initial reaction to Bette, thsi shown how many she has changed. Sarah sees that Bette is perfect for Tina. She will protect and defend her daugther constantly. Bette will challenge and comfort Tina at every turn.It is great to read such an honest expose of a mother to her daughter’s girlfriend chat. This is all about the acceptance.More please as I feel Niall and Sarah have much to sort out.Ally, as ever you blow me away with your talent.Thank you is so inadequate yet it is heartfelt and truthful,Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
Wondrful Chapter!!! Tina needs to stop sticking up for her dad. I am glad Sarah and Bette are talking and get on so well. Thank you PPS
Yes, she is indeed Bette’s girl now and what a girl. Hope Sarah will heed Bette’s advice, she does need an attorney and quickly for her own sake or she will be blindsided again. That girl will make Niall do somethings against Sarah just to have her own way and he is too ignorant to see what will be happening. Good that Tina dn Finn could talk about the farm and what their father is doing. Would love to have shared those scones with them. Love scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam. Delish !!!!!!. Thanks for posting.
Yes, she is indeed Bette’s girl now and what a girl. Hope Sarah will heed Bette’s advice, she does need an attorney and quickly for her own sake or she will be blindsided again. That girl will make Niall do somethings against Sarah just to have her own way and he is too ignorant to see what will be happening. Good that Tina dn Finn could talk about the farm and what their father is doing. Would love to have shared those scones with them. Love scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam. Delish !!!!!!. Thanks for posting.
Bette is really brave. Normally you just can’t win in such a situation. It doesn’t take much to stand in the cross fire.
“She´s Bette´s girl now” – perfect line. Seems young Gemma might cause a lot of problems – maybe even some for Niall. Thanks for posting.
GREAT chappie Ally. I also hope that Sarah takes Bette’s advice and get a good lawyer, maybe Bette or her mother could recomend someone. I hope that Bette can help open Tina’s eyes to a true picture of her father. Not only was it cowardous how he waited until after he had a child to leave his family, but it is also LOW how he had let Sarah bear the brunt of the children’s rage about their open marriage which he more than willing participated in. As I said before, Sarah deserves credit for at least being honest and open with her children and I hope that it does not take too long for Tina, Finn and Willow to realize this. PPS :o).
Thanks for the update. I’m glad we got to hear Sarah’s perspective of her relationship with her husband. It always seemed unfair to me that Tina placed more of the blame for the open marriage arrangement on her mother. Maybe now she’ll be able to see if more clearly and start building a better relationship with her.
Loved the last line. Excellent update. Thank you.
Thanks for the great update.
Looks as if there is going to be a shift here……with tina and her mom…and Sarah’s role
So Sarah is not really what Niel’s painted of her?…she’s not the “one” who has a bad behavior?…WHICH ONE WHO’S TELLING THE TRUTH?