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Something so right – chapter 102&103
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“So you never fell for any of the others ?”
“I fell for one or two but it was never mutual. Gemma just blew me away – she is so fresh and so different “
“Different in that she’s closer to my age than yours ?”
He smiled “Let me ask you something Tina – was Bette the first woman you were attracted to ?”
“No”
“But she was the first woman who you acted on your feelings for ?”
“Yes – Bette swept me off my feet – it was a mutual attraction “
“There you are – you had been with other men but when you met Bette you knew that it was different. As soon as I met Gemma I knew it was different. I fell for her “
“How old is she ?”
“She’s the same age as you – there’s about 6 weeks between her birthday and yours “
Tina just couldn’t see how her father couldn’t see how bad this was. She tried a different tactic
“So what are you going to do with the rest of your life – you can’t go back to the farm “
“I don’t want to – after thirty years it gets a bit boring “
“So what is mom supposed to do ?”
“I assume that she’ll get some men in and she can take her pick as to which of them she wants to fuck “
“Charming – so you have walked away from farming – but you will want your share of the profits ?”
“I have put a lot into that place – I deserve my share – but as far as I am concerned it’s something that I want to pass onto my four children “
“And how do you think mom is going to feel about that ?”
“She can leave her half to the three of you – I’m leaving my half to my four children and I hope that the three of you can accept that “
“Hell dad – you seem so damn indifferent to all of this – this has devastated all of us. How much have you thought any of this through – that farm is the Kennards – that woman is not getting her grubby paws on it “
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Quite intense. Thanks for the two chapters. PPVS
i just cant cant stand neil!!!!! he is a fucking asshole!!! i hope the 3 kennards will get the farm and i dont trust gemma on bit”I’ll make sure mom gets a good lawyer and kicks your ass ” go tina kick his ass if he wants to be with gemma and that sera will do all the work..what a creep
Wow, you blow me away Ally! You portray the complexities of your characters so very well. I love the English humor that comes shining through! The line about Willow cracked me up with perfect timing! Thank you! SK/C
Isn’t that rich that Niall wants to allow Sarah to work the farm without his input but he wants his half of the take. No work and plenty of money to play with! I want that deal. :) Thanks for the extra long update!
I agree with sunkissed, this is a remarkable well written chapter, but since I have long been a fan of your writting, I am NOT surprised. “You have it, like that.” I just wish Niall’s had grown some balls before this child was born. I fully understand that people fall out of love or grow apart, but as Nialls said he knew that this was different with G and she also loved him. It was then he should have come to his family and filled for a divorace, or even after he found out that she was pregnant. It was VERY disrespectful of his family for him to have unprotected sex with G before ending his marriage. For all he knew Sarah may have been in love with David or any of the other guys she sleep with, but apparently she had protected sex, and didn’t bring a child or worst into their marriage. I just feel that it was an extra knife in Sarah’s back for him to have already started a new family after their failed plans to have another child. It also wrong of him to expect his children to immediately accept Adam after how he handled this situation. His parents or someone needs to just slap Nialls upside the head and tell him to get a clue. He is acting like a teenager. “Ï love all my children and Adam is such a joy.” But as a “grown behind man,” I didn’t handle myself and business properly, but as my children that I have raised respectfully, you should step up and welcome Adam into our family like adults. If he doesn’t step up he may find out that Adam may loose respect for him after he grows up. He maybe in first class health, but what if he is hit by a car and Gemma has to change his diaper as well as Adams. How deep will her love be then. She may stand by him, but it can not excape that this is a change of life relationship, and he can not reasonable expect to be around to grow old with Gemma because he is already there.
so because I have been a good girl I will reward you with a double commenting!! I’m really enjoying your stories, I have a favorite of course but I won’t tell. It’s good to have you back and writing on the site. Thank you for posting, and thank you for posting.
Wow, what a chapter AllyE. I’m truly surprised that Tina did not slug him one, and she should have. He is acting like a lovestruck kid, not a fifty year old man. When he realized that he was in love with that girl, he should have told Sarah that he wanted a divorce. His actions were all wrong. And to expect profits from Sarahs work is stupid. I hope Sarah gets an attorney that will ream him a new one. Thanks for posting.
Wow. Niall didn’t hold back when he told Tina what he thought of her behavior. Maybe when she has some time to cool down she’ll think it over and realize he has some merit to what he said. I think it will take a while for her to get to that point though.
FUCK!.. I don’t know who I’ll take the side?…’caused they both have… a good reason?….Tina’s Dad all he wants is his share for his son..And Tina’s Mom…is afraid that Gemma will brainwashed Nial to sell the farm? so does Tina’s fear!….I think Nial and Sarah should set aside their differences for a while and talk about what they want to do to the farm?..I KNOW IT’S TOO SOON?…BUT IT’S THE ONLY LOGICAL WAY TO DO IT?….TALK…. ABOUT IT!
Quite brilliant and wonderful. PPS.
Thank you for 2 chapters. So emtionally intense these chapters were. Thank you again.
I LOVE the idea of Sarah going to LA to spend some time with her children and relax. Maybe it will allow Tina and her siblings to see her in a different light and get a new found respect for their mom.