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Something so right – chapter 102&103
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Tina laughed
“Bette’s girl – I like that – that’s funny . Bette’s girl – that has a certain ring to it “
“I’ll get you a tee-shirt with it on “
“Please do – I would wear it with pride “
“So – go on – you were saying about how you felt about them cheating. You seem to be able to deal with his infidelity easier than hers “
　
Tina shook her head “I don’t know Bette – you are right in that when she does it I go crazy and when he does it I kind of turn a blind eye. I don’t know why – I am sure a shrink would make a lot of it “
“Its nothing to do with a shrink and its not proof that you are different or weird or anything like that. Maybe this is as hard as it clearly is for you because its him breaking the rules. From where I am standing no one seems to be saying that it’s a vastly huge problem that your folks have spilt up but its not only how its happened but also which one made the break”
“I think my head will explode trying to make sense of it all “
“It’s a lot to take in – I think it might be easier for you when you get back to LA “
“I am looking forward to getting on the plane and somehow leaving it behind”
“I got James to check – there is a direct flight every Friday around lunchtime – we could come here every couple of weeks or so “
Tina shook her head “I think mom would hate to be molly coddled. I was talking to her last night and she doesn’t want us to keep coming out here – she told me to get on with my life “
“She would say that though wouldn’t she ?”
“I’ll see how it goes “
“Here’s a suggestion – lets get her to LA for a week or so “
Tina looked at Bette
“You sure about that ?”
“From what she has said to me she isn’t going to sit and mourn him for too long. Your mom is a don’t get mad – get even gal. She might cry about him in private and I am sure that when we go and she gets together with her mates the air will be pretty blue – but Gloria Gaynor could have written “I will survive “ about your mom “
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Quite intense. Thanks for the two chapters. PPVS
i just cant cant stand neil!!!!! he is a fucking asshole!!! i hope the 3 kennards will get the farm and i dont trust gemma on bit”I’ll make sure mom gets a good lawyer and kicks your ass ” go tina kick his ass if he wants to be with gemma and that sera will do all the work..what a creep
Wow, you blow me away Ally! You portray the complexities of your characters so very well. I love the English humor that comes shining through! The line about Willow cracked me up with perfect timing! Thank you! SK/C
Isn’t that rich that Niall wants to allow Sarah to work the farm without his input but he wants his half of the take. No work and plenty of money to play with! I want that deal. :) Thanks for the extra long update!
I agree with sunkissed, this is a remarkable well written chapter, but since I have long been a fan of your writting, I am NOT surprised. “You have it, like that.” I just wish Niall’s had grown some balls before this child was born. I fully understand that people fall out of love or grow apart, but as Nialls said he knew that this was different with G and she also loved him. It was then he should have come to his family and filled for a divorace, or even after he found out that she was pregnant. It was VERY disrespectful of his family for him to have unprotected sex with G before ending his marriage. For all he knew Sarah may have been in love with David or any of the other guys she sleep with, but apparently she had protected sex, and didn’t bring a child or worst into their marriage. I just feel that it was an extra knife in Sarah’s back for him to have already started a new family after their failed plans to have another child. It also wrong of him to expect his children to immediately accept Adam after how he handled this situation. His parents or someone needs to just slap Nialls upside the head and tell him to get a clue. He is acting like a teenager. “Ï love all my children and Adam is such a joy.” But as a “grown behind man,” I didn’t handle myself and business properly, but as my children that I have raised respectfully, you should step up and welcome Adam into our family like adults. If he doesn’t step up he may find out that Adam may loose respect for him after he grows up. He maybe in first class health, but what if he is hit by a car and Gemma has to change his diaper as well as Adams. How deep will her love be then. She may stand by him, but it can not excape that this is a change of life relationship, and he can not reasonable expect to be around to grow old with Gemma because he is already there.
so because I have been a good girl I will reward you with a double commenting!! I’m really enjoying your stories, I have a favorite of course but I won’t tell. It’s good to have you back and writing on the site. Thank you for posting, and thank you for posting.
Wow, what a chapter AllyE. I’m truly surprised that Tina did not slug him one, and she should have. He is acting like a lovestruck kid, not a fifty year old man. When he realized that he was in love with that girl, he should have told Sarah that he wanted a divorce. His actions were all wrong. And to expect profits from Sarahs work is stupid. I hope Sarah gets an attorney that will ream him a new one. Thanks for posting.
Wow. Niall didn’t hold back when he told Tina what he thought of her behavior. Maybe when she has some time to cool down she’ll think it over and realize he has some merit to what he said. I think it will take a while for her to get to that point though.
FUCK!.. I don’t know who I’ll take the side?…’caused they both have… a good reason?….Tina’s Dad all he wants is his share for his son..And Tina’s Mom…is afraid that Gemma will brainwashed Nial to sell the farm? so does Tina’s fear!….I think Nial and Sarah should set aside their differences for a while and talk about what they want to do to the farm?..I KNOW IT’S TOO SOON?…BUT IT’S THE ONLY LOGICAL WAY TO DO IT?….TALK…. ABOUT IT!
Quite brilliant and wonderful. PPS.
Thank you for 2 chapters. So emtionally intense these chapters were. Thank you again.
I LOVE the idea of Sarah going to LA to spend some time with her children and relax. Maybe it will allow Tina and her siblings to see her in a different light and get a new found respect for their mom.