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Something so right – Chapter 104
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“Are you aware of what an unmitigated annoying, self obsessed pain in the ass you are being ? “ Bette asked lightly
“What ?”
“Are you aware of what an unmitigated annoying, self obsessed pain the ass you are being?”
Bette repeated.
There was a silence which Bette could only describe as hostile before Tina cursed and leapt out of bed and stormed out of the room.
Bette sighed and sat up – she straightened the pillows and the duvet before settling down again. She rolled onto her side and closed her eyes. She didn’t think for a minute that Tina was going to sleep in the spare room or on the sofa – it would be a matter of time before she came back.
Bette hoped to God she was asleep by then – this was beginning to seriously become irritating. She was nicely relaxed when she heard Tina padding back and stopping beside the bed. Bette threw the duvet back and patted the mattress invitingly. Tina climbed into bed – Bette moved close enough to pull Tina into her arms.
“What are you ?” Bette asked opening her eyes and raising one quizzical eyebrow at Tina
“I am an unmitigated annoying, self obsessed pain the ass “
“Yeah – but you are MY unmitigated, annoying, self obsessed pain the ass and I happen to love you. Is there any chance of you talking to me or did I miss you declaring war on the rest of the world ?”
Tina sighed and moved closer to Bette who stroked her side and rested her hand on her waist.
“I just want to be there for you – have I not shown several times that I am on your side and I want to make things easy for you ? Maybe if you talk about things you might feel more settled. This is not a fight that you should be right slap in the middle of. And it is obviously really getting at you”
Tina sighed “I really made him angry “
“You were pretty wound up “
“I still am – but now I am just wound up by the accusations that he started to throw at me “
“Such as ?”
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Amazing as always.Thank you.
Great update! I don’t think Tina should apoligize, to me she did nothing wrong. Niall deserve whatever they said to him.
i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps
Oh that is just perfect. Bette is doing everything in her power to give Tina room to figure this out on her own but also be there to help her around all the corners. Nicely done Ally.
im with amanda and rbabe”i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps “
Maybe Bette will get more sleep tonight. LOL
I love your story progression, but I am not with the “Sarah beat down”. Having been a Daddy’s girl, I know that you can over idolize you dad to the detriment of your mom. I agree with Amanda, Niall knew what he was getting into when he and Sarah made their arrangement and agreement about their marriage. As I have said before, I hate the things he said about Sarah when she was involved with David and how he let the children just pile on Sarah. Yes he is her father, but it certainly was NOT easy for Sarah doing all of the heavy lifting in referancde to raising their children. Tina needs to let things calm down, but sending them a welcome to the family basket is going over board and can be seen as offensive to her mother. I don’t think that Tina needs to serve as a go between for Nialls with her sister and brother. It’s time for Nialls to do some heavy lifting. He made his bed, now he can take responsibility and reach out to his children to make amends. Thanlks and PPS :o).
Boy, ally, you’re getting everybody riled up. Niall can’t expect his original family to be accepting of his new arrangement. He might hope for their understanding but can’t expect it. He should have gotten a divorce and then started his new family. Is Sarah upset b/c she didn’t dump Niall first? That she was the dumpee and not the dumper?
Ally, you are my queen of intimate conversation… you nail it every time! Thank you. SK/C
Bette is so good for Tina in this story.
At least Tina come to her senses [Even though i still think her dad is a JERK] That no matter what, her father is always gonna be her FATHER! Thanks Ally..
Tina’s confession about feeling secure is for me the best love declaration I have read for a long time. Queen of intimate converstioan it is!
I wish my girlfriend would hold me like that again. I love this story PPS.
Wow, Tina’s father’s words really shook her to her foundation. A parent has the power to do that. She is struggling with still seeing her father as she did as a child and seeing him as a fellow adult. The tables are turned and he needs her support now. It seems that with Bette’s help she will be able to do that for him.
Wonderful update. Just brilliant. Thank you.