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Something so right – Chapter 104
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Tina shook her head
“Look “ Bette tried again “you know that what you said to him was wrong. You have no proof that she is a gold digger – yes she might be but you do not know it. We have all said that your parents don’t have the happiest of marriages – that they are unhappy and that probably in the long run its no bad thing. You were never going to 100% approve of anyone that your parents took up with. Tina – you are a really kind and gentle person. I think you are amazingly sweet – you have to give her the benefit of the doubt. Then if she’s a baddie we crucify her and we make an effigy of her and all that. But what if she is the best thing for him ? “
Tina was silent- Bette could see her dilemma.
“Logically you know that your parents are better off apart –if they can both find happiness with someone new then that’s the best course of action but you are not thinking logically – because they are your mom and dad. Your heart is saying that because they are your parents they should be together forever – your head knows that they are better off apart before they kill each other “
“I am doing really badly at all of this – I really shouldn’t have gone on my own “
“You had every right to see him but strategically it wasn’t the best idea. I love how passionate you are and that you so clearly love your family. Let me ask you something – do you remember how you flipped when your mom was so down on me ? You were furious because she was attacking the woman you were and still are in love with – right ?”
“Yes – I know Bette – that’s what I have been thinking – that I was hurt and angry and everything else when you were being attacked and I was guilty of doing what my mom did – maybe I am more like her than I ever want to admit and if I am I have no chance of keeping you “
Bette knew that Tina was tired – hell she was just as tired but that comment made no sense at all
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Amazing as always.Thank you.
Great update! I don’t think Tina should apoligize, to me she did nothing wrong. Niall deserve whatever they said to him.
i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps
Oh that is just perfect. Bette is doing everything in her power to give Tina room to figure this out on her own but also be there to help her around all the corners. Nicely done Ally.
im with amanda and rbabe”i’m with rbabe2005… tina di nothing wrong… niall knew what kind of a marriage they had… he agreed to it from the start… what if sarah had changed the rules first… i think niall would be pissed… i hope you make gemma a bitch… make nialls life a living hell… lol… what the hell its fan fiction after all.. pps “
Maybe Bette will get more sleep tonight. LOL
I love your story progression, but I am not with the “Sarah beat down”. Having been a Daddy’s girl, I know that you can over idolize you dad to the detriment of your mom. I agree with Amanda, Niall knew what he was getting into when he and Sarah made their arrangement and agreement about their marriage. As I have said before, I hate the things he said about Sarah when she was involved with David and how he let the children just pile on Sarah. Yes he is her father, but it certainly was NOT easy for Sarah doing all of the heavy lifting in referancde to raising their children. Tina needs to let things calm down, but sending them a welcome to the family basket is going over board and can be seen as offensive to her mother. I don’t think that Tina needs to serve as a go between for Nialls with her sister and brother. It’s time for Nialls to do some heavy lifting. He made his bed, now he can take responsibility and reach out to his children to make amends. Thanlks and PPS :o).
Boy, ally, you’re getting everybody riled up. Niall can’t expect his original family to be accepting of his new arrangement. He might hope for their understanding but can’t expect it. He should have gotten a divorce and then started his new family. Is Sarah upset b/c she didn’t dump Niall first? That she was the dumpee and not the dumper?
Ally, you are my queen of intimate conversation… you nail it every time! Thank you. SK/C
Bette is so good for Tina in this story.
At least Tina come to her senses [Even though i still think her dad is a JERK] That no matter what, her father is always gonna be her FATHER! Thanks Ally..
Tina’s confession about feeling secure is for me the best love declaration I have read for a long time. Queen of intimate converstioan it is!
I wish my girlfriend would hold me like that again. I love this story PPS.
Wow, Tina’s father’s words really shook her to her foundation. A parent has the power to do that. She is struggling with still seeing her father as she did as a child and seeing him as a fellow adult. The tables are turned and he needs her support now. It seems that with Bette’s help she will be able to do that for him.
Wonderful update. Just brilliant. Thank you.