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    Something so right – chapter 110

    Story written on June 16, 2010 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette and her mom

     

    “Its hard when you have to take sides between your parents “ Elizabeth said pointedly. Bette picked up

    on the double meaning

     

    “I took a decision of my own while we were away “ Bette explained “ Tina weighed in with her father and it got bloody. He accused her of being spoilt and selfish and other things. She tried to ring him last week and he was still not in a forgiving mood which has made her mood worse because of how much she idolises him. I have been trying to talk her into writing a letter to him – explaining how she feels openly and not leaving any room for misunderstandings and confusion. So while she did that at the weekend I was trying to write to Melvin “

     

    “Did you send it ?”

     

    Bette laughed “ I pride myself on what a good communicator I am. I am good with people but when it comes to writing I always think that its my true medium. That I can really express myself with the written word. I sat down to try and write to my father – to ask him why he had lied to me and how hurt I was . I simply couldn’t do it. Beside me Tina was writing pages and pages to her father about how she was feeling and everything. I was just sitting there putting words down that had no meaning or reason. In the end I shredded the paper into hundreds of little bits and threw them over Tina and joked that they were confetti “

     

    “So what did you decide – did decide ?”

     

    “I have tied myself in knots all my life to make Melvin love me – for the slightest fraction of praise from

    him. I can’t totally blame him for all of my problems but I am sure that a shrink would say that trying to get approval from a distant father is a major influence in my life. “

    “And having a mom who abandoned you “

    Bette shook her head “ You left for a reason – you left to save yourself. I do understand that. I would like to think that as much as Tina is the beginning, middle and end of my world. I would like to think that if I knew that by walking away she would be happier I would hope that I had the courage that you had”

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    1. Hey AllyE, Was Art reflecting Fiction there as Bette described here connection to her father?This was a marvellous mix of Mother and daugther accepting each other and sharing a beautiful moment.I could sense Elizabeth’s love and pride taht Bette had found the woman of her dreams and was taking this final step in completing their relationship legally. It is just the cherry on the top of the cake.I can’t wait to read more of your brilliant story telling.Thank you so much for this amazing adventure.Your Loyal Fan.

    2. You are really on a roll today AllyE. This chapter was really wonderful in that it showed Elizabeth just how much Bette cares for her and how she has grown since them finding each other again. Bette has also taken into account her feelings for Melvin and the person that he is and has found peach within herself without having him in her life. That is a major accomplishment and is a testament to the level of maturity she has gained since being with Tina and experiencing all they have together. It was written beautifully, thank you so much for writing this particular chapter, it means a lot. Your words always have an element of faith and the ability to make a person think things thru before approaching a subject. Thanks for posting.

    5. I’m so glad Bette is enjoying her mother and the idea of being part of a family. I’m also glad she’s aware that Tina might have asked her to marry her because of all of the recent changes in her family. It is very gracious of her to allow her an out but I’m sure Tina won’t need it.

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