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Something so right – chapter 134
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“You seem a very resourceful young man “ Hannah said smiling at James
“I have to be – Bette knows what she wants “
“She might need to come up for air soon “ Shane said grinning – seeing Bette and Tina so happy was a great sight.
When Bette finally eased away from Tina to draw air they received a round of applause. Bette laughed and looked round to see their audience
“You all like the car ?” Bette asked gesturing for the others to join then next to Tina’s new car
“Its lovely “ Shane said reaching them first and grinning at the couple
“I can’t believe it “ Tina said looking at HER car “It’s a celebrity car “
“No “ Bette said “Its your car – you are MY celebrity “
Tina rested her head against Bette’s arm and looked again in wonder at her sleek, new Aston Martin
“What do you think mom ?” Bette asked Elizabeth “
“When you said that you wanted to buy Tina a car I didn’t expect this – but its gorgeous “
“Sarah ?” Bette looked at Tina’s mom who had reached out and touched the car just to confirm that it was real – that was her daughter’s new car
“I have seen some flash cars since I arrived in LA but this is the best – any chance you might take your mom out for a spin Tina ?”
Tina grinned “Yeah – I think that’s something I can do “
“And me ?” Finn put in. He often saw cars like this in the car-park of the club and he aspired to drive his own sports car one day so seeing Tina who he knew had worked hard for her success both personally and professionally was a motivation.
“You are too tall “ Bette replied looking at Tina who still looked slightly dazed
“You want to sit in the car babe ?” Bette asked
“No because I have had too much to drink and if I sit in it I will want to go out in it and I’m too drunk, Will this be here tomorrow Bette – will it be safe ?”
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I love this story! Thank you for posting!
Yer great story and a Aston Martin, well one heck of a gift. AllyE great story and your make words just simply leap of the page with such life. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.
Another great chapter! Thanks Ally.
It’s great to have the AM but Bette is the real prize. Great story
Fantastic chapter AllyE, as always. For those of you interested there is an interview of Jennifer B in the Dec/Jan issue of MORE magazine and she is the cover photo as well, just stunning. Thanks for posting AllyE. Merry Christmas to, Cheryl and your Mom if you don’t post again before then.
Merry Christmas AllyE! I always love to see and read your stories!!!
You´re such an amazing writer. What Sarah said to Tina was spot on. Looking forward to their wedding. Thanks for a great story. Merry Xmas.
wonderful, when will Tina announce the date of the wedding? I wonder what Al’s next move will be? PPS
Raleigh! Hey! Come see us sometime!
Merry Xmas and thank you for all of your great stories.
Thank you for posting. One of my favourite stories on this site.
Hey AllyE, Many thanks for continuing this great adventure. It was so sweet to have Bette declare her love for Tina with this expensive luxury car. Tina’s response was so loving and honest. Then Tina and Sarah had some great mother-daugther discussions about Finn, Shane, Alice and Bette. I do agree with Sarah that Alice’s dislike of Tina comes from Tina taking so much of Bette’s time that Alice feels left out and so has been mean about it. I do hope this helps Tina deal with the situation. I would like Tina and Alice to build their own friendship. More please as this aleways makes me smile. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.