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Something so right – chapter 134
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“Okay “ Bette wondered where Tina was going with this one
Tina grinned “Just say yes “
“What to ?”
“Just say yes – just agree to this one thing that I want “
“Which is ?”
“Please Bette – just yes – just for me “
Tina was well aware of the power she held over her partner – she rarely exploited it like this but this was too good an idea
“For me – for us “
“Do I get a clue ?”
“No – trust me Bette “
“You know I do “
“Well just say yes “
Bette looked at Tina who looked so desirable and also innocent at the same time – always a very dangerous mixture. Oh well – why not
“Yes “
Tina beamed and hugged Bette and kissed her
“Thank you “
“Thank you what for ?”
Tina beamed “You just agreed to marry me on your birthday in November “
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When they went back to the party Bette went to the bathroom while Tina went in search of her mother. She found her buying a drink – Tina walked across and kissed her mom on the cheek.
“Thanks for being here mom
“
“There was no way I was going to miss the chance of seeing my little girl at her 27th birthday party. It seems a long time since you had a birthday party “
“Probably my 16th “ Tina said
“Probably “
“So how are you liking it here ? when did you arrive ?”
“Finn picked me up at the airport yesterday morning . Bette arranged everything “
Tina beamed “Bette is just doing so many things right – its fantastic. I always knew that I was blessed beyond words but this is truly special “
“And its marvellous to see where Finn works “
“It’s a very exclusive club – Dana who is around somewhere and I will introduce you to is a tennis player on the challenger circuit and she practices here and does a little bit of coaching. She got him the interview but the rest of it is very much him – he’s personable and hard working and he will go far “
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I love this story! Thank you for posting!
Yer great story and a Aston Martin, well one heck of a gift. AllyE great story and your make words just simply leap of the page with such life. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.
Another great chapter! Thanks Ally.
It’s great to have the AM but Bette is the real prize. Great story
Fantastic chapter AllyE, as always. For those of you interested there is an interview of Jennifer B in the Dec/Jan issue of MORE magazine and she is the cover photo as well, just stunning. Thanks for posting AllyE. Merry Christmas to, Cheryl and your Mom if you don’t post again before then.
Merry Christmas AllyE! I always love to see and read your stories!!!
You´re such an amazing writer. What Sarah said to Tina was spot on. Looking forward to their wedding. Thanks for a great story. Merry Xmas.
wonderful, when will Tina announce the date of the wedding? I wonder what Al’s next move will be? PPS
Raleigh! Hey! Come see us sometime!
Merry Xmas and thank you for all of your great stories.
Thank you for posting. One of my favourite stories on this site.
Hey AllyE, Many thanks for continuing this great adventure. It was so sweet to have Bette declare her love for Tina with this expensive luxury car. Tina’s response was so loving and honest. Then Tina and Sarah had some great mother-daugther discussions about Finn, Shane, Alice and Bette. I do agree with Sarah that Alice’s dislike of Tina comes from Tina taking so much of Bette’s time that Alice feels left out and so has been mean about it. I do hope this helps Tina deal with the situation. I would like Tina and Alice to build their own friendship. More please as this aleways makes me smile. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.