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Something so right – chapter 134
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“Tomorrow morning at 10am it will be sitting on our drive “ Bette said
“Minus the ribbon “James added
“Yeah “
Tina walked towards the car – it was a car she had always aspired to. Aston Martin – that was James Bond’s car for heavens sake. She now drove an Aston Martin !! She reached out and took hold of Bette’s hand
“That ribbon is something else “
“Do you like it ?”
“Yes – I love you “
“I love you more “ “Bette kissed Tina on the cheeks.
For the next 20 minutes they stood talking to the people they both felt closest to. Finally the others drifted inside leaving them alone.
“You are cold honey – you want to go inside ?” Bette asked
“I want to look at my new car “
“Its not going anywhere”
“What’s the security like ?”
“”What you expect in a car that expensive “
“How expensive was it Bette ?”
Bette laughed “There is no way I am telling you that – I can afford it and my future wife is worth every single dime it cost me “
Tina snuggled up to Bette as they held each other. She looked at her car
“How about you take us out for a drive down the coast over the weekend “ Bette suggested
“Oh that would be terrific “
“It would be – its lovely “
Bette stroked Tina’s hair and placed a soft kiss on her brow “And so are you -come on – lets go inside and enjoy your party “
“Bette “
“Yeah ?”
“Why is this not a engagement and birthday party ?”
“Because I arranged it and I wanted it to mainly be about my future wife. Trust me – our wedding will be about both of us “
“The wedding “
“Yeah ?”
“Can we make it happen this year ?”
Bette raised her eyebrows at Tina “Really ?”
“Yeah – lets get on with our plans for the rest of our lives – lets get married before Christmas – better yet “
Tina’s eyes were gleaming with excitement “I have a better idea “
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I love this story! Thank you for posting!
Yer great story and a Aston Martin, well one heck of a gift. AllyE great story and your make words just simply leap of the page with such life. Thanks for sharing your talent with us all.
Another great chapter! Thanks Ally.
It’s great to have the AM but Bette is the real prize. Great story
Fantastic chapter AllyE, as always. For those of you interested there is an interview of Jennifer B in the Dec/Jan issue of MORE magazine and she is the cover photo as well, just stunning. Thanks for posting AllyE. Merry Christmas to, Cheryl and your Mom if you don’t post again before then.
Merry Christmas AllyE! I always love to see and read your stories!!!
You´re such an amazing writer. What Sarah said to Tina was spot on. Looking forward to their wedding. Thanks for a great story. Merry Xmas.
wonderful, when will Tina announce the date of the wedding? I wonder what Al’s next move will be? PPS
Raleigh! Hey! Come see us sometime!
Merry Xmas and thank you for all of your great stories.
Thank you for posting. One of my favourite stories on this site.
Hey AllyE, Many thanks for continuing this great adventure. It was so sweet to have Bette declare her love for Tina with this expensive luxury car. Tina’s response was so loving and honest. Then Tina and Sarah had some great mother-daugther discussions about Finn, Shane, Alice and Bette. I do agree with Sarah that Alice’s dislike of Tina comes from Tina taking so much of Bette’s time that Alice feels left out and so has been mean about it. I do hope this helps Tina deal with the situation. I would like Tina and Alice to build their own friendship. More please as this aleways makes me smile. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.