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Something so right – chapter 14
“I didn’t know that I could feel this way Tina. This is as new for me as it is for you “
“I know that – I know the woman behind the well sculptured mask – and you are something special “
Bette kissed Tina’s lips and looked at the beds
“Pick a bed “
Tina laughed “This one is fine -though we might have to christen the other one later”
Bette loved how confident Tina was – it took away from how nervous she was. This was going to be like losing your virginity all over again – new for Bette because she was giving Tina her heart when they made love and that was something that had never happened before.
Bette moved round and threw back the thin duvet and sheets and jumped into bed. Tina followed her a few seconds later and quickly Tina had Bette on her back kissing her with great desire. Bette rested her arms around Tina and sunk into the kissing.
The kissing was wonderful – Tina had soft and very full lips plus she enjoyed kissing. For Bette kissing was never just a means to sex – sometimes it was the end in itself. And since she had met Tina she had wanted to kiss her all night long – just losing herself and her worries in the perfect lips of her girlfriend.
Tina eased away “ I am so fucking wet for you “ she told Bette.
“I am wet for you – I have been almost from the first “
Part of Tina wanted Bette to just throw her onto her back and take her but she was also becoming lost in the gloriousness of two naked women kissing and kissing and kissing some more. Bette put an arm around Tina’s waist and slipped her very skilfully onto her back. Tina gasped at the ease at which Bette had made the move – she was a very good mover.
Bette started on Tina’s neck again and worked her way slowly and with great care – lower. This time there was no stop sign from Tina or from herself – she just slipping lower until finally her mouth was level with Tina’s full and fantastic breasts. She opened her mouth and took a full orb into her mouth and began to suck at it. She could hear that Tina was enjoying the experience.
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(10 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
Oi, no time to read right now. Will have to read later. :O
See Tina? It’s like FDR said all those years ago: there’s nothing to fear but fear intself. Now I can understand Tina not being able to find the words for this occasion, but I really hope Bette can find them. Tina has crossed her bridge, Bette should as well.
Nice update this is going a very nice vacation.
Woah. This is going to be a really hot, sweet, adorable vacation. I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is the most captivating story on the site for me recently.
The only word that springs to mind is – lovely. You just dont know how to disappoint either do you Ally? Let the love fest continue:-)
That was beautiful.How does anyone not feel Bette and Tina?
thats what i sound like when i have a delish meal!!! im just kidding ;). that was fun. thx.
Now after that chapter and the last one of “the L wing” I’m SPEECH-LESS…Must be ones of your finest and I know what I’m talking about because I’ve just done a marathon of the L wing and Love and Pride !!Thank you so much.
WOW!!!! ALly, you have left me just in completly in love with the the way you can bring to souls together and passionately. This is by far your best chapter you have writen and I have read them all. Thank you so much for the time and care you put into your stories.
ah….I think I’m gay now too! Thanks Bette…er…or should I say Ally! LOL!
Beautifully written and so gentle Bette has her soul mate. Tina will do Bette the next favor. Poor Bette will have a small heart attach. thanks
Wow that was filled with so much passion and love. I think it is time for Bette to utter those three little words to Tina. I know she feels it but it’s always nice to hear it especially after some sweet sweet loving. Ally I love everything you write and I hope you continue to favor us with your talent for a long time to come. PPS
Wow, Ally — amazing chapter. Both very hot and very beautifully written. And did I mention hot? Thanks so much for the new chapter!
Oh God!!! That was so worth waiting for. Bette’s turn next, right?
Thank you for responding to your fans requests. OMFG.
OMG!!! I LOVE THIS STORY! I love all your stories!! PPS! You have such a way with these two. :)
WOW!
very nice ally… i love it when they both take there time… and their true love shows…
Whoa Ally, that was magnificent! Beautifully written. Hawaii should be memorable for both of them. Hope we get the next chapter soon…the wait is hard.
Finally read it! lol At work of course. LMFAO But it’s the end of the day so weeeeeeeee! Good job. :D
Okay you are just the best… you never disapoint me, you just keep rockin !! thanks for sharing your talent for writing with us
Now that was beautiful!
Awesome – the respect Bette had given Tina has been beautiful.
That was beautiful and hot, can’t wait to see Bette turn. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Ally E, Wow Wee Alli EEE! That was awsoem. There was so much tenderness and passion during this first intimate encounter. You cpatured the difference bewteen fucking and making love perfectly. It was the emotional connection between Bette and Tina that heightened their love making. Now I can’t to see how Tina replies to this great gift from Bette. I don’t think it should should be perfect but full of love and learning. Ally, you always astound me with your wonderful writing. This chapter was so moving. Thank you for all that you create on this most excellent site. Your Loyal Fan.
Beautifully written lovestory. Bette’s patience is so fundamental to the story — I couldn’t help but go “Ahhhh” and melt between the paragraphs.
at last,,,,very sweet and loving, thx, pps
Fabulous chapter! So sweet and passionate. I love all the feeling you put into your writing.
nope no words for how good that chapter was… *thud*
Think I’m gay now, too!!! Thanks Bette!!! LOL
Oh my, oh my, oh my!!! That was simply heaven, although I can think of 3 little words that Bette couple have come up with…but I am a patient woman and I know they will soon be forthcoming…I can’t wait until the next post!!! Thanks for your time and effort with this story. It is truely enjoyed by all!!!
Hello ally, this story is just so passionate, the way you had Bette waiting for the moment that Tina was ready. That in itself is an incredible act of love and trust on her part. She was always considered this woman who is completely insatiable but the moment she encountered Tina her soul was turned on… she encountered her future in that one brief moment and in this she was able to create such a pure and perfect moment in the consummation of their passions and desires… not sure that made any sense… but just thought you should know… you are absolutely Brilliant… absolutely Brilliant. Sincerely, JC