LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 14, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Something so right – chapter 16

    Story written on January 19, 2008 by allyemmerson.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    9 votes, average: 4.56 out of 59 votes, average: 4.56 out of 59 votes, average: 4.56 out of 59 votes, average: 4.56 out of 59 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5 (9 votes, average: 4.56 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): ,
    Number of Comments: 28
    Words: 5122
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68276
    Author Notes:

    “You are fantastic – I swear to you Tina that my polecat days are over. I just want to be with you all the time and to make love and to share everything with you. Suddenly love songs on the radio make sense. “

     

    “You two have very similar senses of humour. I see more ways in which you are alike “

    “Yeah but I have tasted you – she hasn’t “

    “Yuk – the idea of Helena and me just makes me feel ill “

     

    “Pleased to hear it. Because I don’t want anyone touching my woman “

    “I am YOUR woman ?” Tina teased

     

    “You are”

    “Are you mine ?”

     

    “Yes – that goes without saying babe“

    “That might be harder to enforce “

     

    Bette looked at Tina

     

    “Does that bother you ?”

     

    “I see how other women look at you Bette. In fact in absence of a gay-dar I am being to rely on how women look at you when we are together to work out whose gay. You get checked out everywhere Bette – in restaurants, at the beach, when we go running – when we were checking in at the hotel you were getting some very admiring looks “

     

    “Have you seen me checking anyone else out ?”

    “No “

    “There you go. Babe – I know what my reputation is and I also know that its going to be difficult for us for a while. But – I know we can get through it “

     

    Bette stopped and looked at Tina – her whole heart just sang when she looked at the blonde. Bette reached out and touched Tina’s face – she swallowed.

     

    “I don’t want anyone else. I am with you and that is a huge thing for me. You are in my heart and that makes me happier than I have ever been in my whole life “

    Bette felt tears start to fall down her face “ You – I never thought I was capable of the feelings

    that I have for you. Tina – I love you “

     

    Tina had wanted so long for Bette to say those three words and at last Bette had told her. Tina wiped Bette’s tears away

     

    “And I love you Bette “

     

    Tina pulled Bette into her arms – Bette clung onto Tina – never wanting to let her lover go.

     

    “I love you so much Tina”

    Page 6 of 9« First‹ Previous45678Next ›Last »
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    1. This chapter contained so much love it was oozing from the page…The way they fell in love, sealed their love and expressed their love was so beautifully written. You are the best AllyE …words fail me on how excellent you are as a writer.Thanks for a great chapter as per usual.One of your many fans !!!

    2. damn!! Bette is so freaking romantic! great chapter. I look forward to the drama that is sure to come when T is tested by women in Bette’s past. bring it on sister!

    4. Wonderful! So sweet. It will be interesting to see what happens when they get back to the “real world.” But don’t rush them back there, if you know what I mean… ;-D Great story, ally!

    9. Hello Ally, Good thing is every episode is finished and will not be affected by the strike, unfortunately the bad news is even the strike makes it harder for a new season to be approved :(… I absolutely love this story, the back and forth between Tina and Bette is so spot on, I love how open they are with one another about their lives. Just brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Sincerely, JC

    11. Even today, I feel that Bette’s love for Tina is just how you expressed in this story, complete and totally fulfilling. They’ve just gone terribly astray. But, hopefully, soon together. PPS.

    14. Hey AllyE, this chapter was wonderful, they were so open with each other and letting their feeling show, so important. And at last Bette let Tina know how she really felt, she was honest and open with her and that is as it should be. So now that htey have had that ultimate conversation and on the way back to their room, does this mean that the next chapter will be a hot NC-17? Gosh, I hope so. PPS

    18. Oh my, oh my, oh my! What to say!!! You are just brilliant. So, just to recap…they meet, they fall in love but won’t say it, they wait, wait, frustratingly wait, they do it (boy, did they do it!)…Bette admits her love out loud (WOW)…OK…so don’t you think it time for Bette to find out Tina’s real name???

    20. Yep, the more I read of this story the more I think that this was how it was like for these two before things started to go downhill. You write their feelings beautifully Ally. Can’t wait for that next update!

    24. Ally, I already especially loved this tender story of yours, savouring each new chapter like a gift, but this chapter is a pure masterpiece – one of the most beautiful piece of writing you ever did (and I always considered you as one of the finest authors here). One can feel the love – the true one – so much here, so deeply, with all the magical colours a morning sun right after a many-splendored night can bring in eyes of heart and soul. Thank you for such a piece of beauty ! Gratefully yours – A.

    Leave a Reply