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Something so right – chapter 18
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“I don’t know – I have never been in a relationship like this before. If I do start being
unreasonable will you slap me into line ?”
“You can bank on it “ Tina smiled “I see that you expect very high standards of yourself and I admire it but I worry that you think our relationship is going to be perfect”
“I know that we are going to argue and get on each other’s nerves – well I am going to get on your nerves “
Tina kissed Bette’s hand
“We don’t know what things are going to be like. But we have to talk to each other. Bette – we have something special – if we stay friends as well as lovers then we have a chance. I love so much about you – little things and huge things. Making a relationship work is all about trust and communication and genuine affection for the other person “
“I can do those things “
“You told me one day that you didn’t trust people “
“That’s true – maybe my heart is just a little more fragile because of not falling in love – I guess that means I don’t always know how to deal with feelings. What we share – what I feel for you – it does blow me away “
“I know that. For me I don’t know whether my feelings are so powerful because you are a woman or because its you “
Bette took a long drink of her beer and reached out a hand and stroked Tina’s face.
“The first time I looked at you – the first time I looked at you. Something happened to me and I cannot describe what it was. I think now – I think that was when I started to fall for you. You were so beautiful and when you spoke I just loved your voice – hell I still do. But when I looked at you – something in me change. It was like someone threw a switch and at that second my life was never going to be the same again. It is the only way I can explain why I reacted the way I did when you said you had never slept with a woman before. “
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First Ally, you never have to thank me for standing beside you and supporting you, it’s an honor. I know you’ve been MIA for a while, considering how often you post to give your readers a story they can sink their teeth into and follow on a regular basis. It is nice to have you back, although I understand the flip side too, as we’ve said privately. Your writing is amazing Ally, that never changes no matter what! *HUGS*
i love it when people act like babies. thx.
Jealousie doent become Bette,love can do crazy thing to the heart and mind. She {Bette} need to feel what Tina feels when women come on to her. Tina has a goal in her life.Let her go there . Bette is doing what she loves so should Tina. Jealous will ruin their life Bette needs to mature a lot thanks
hey great post ally! Of course they would have to come out of their orgasmic bubble at some point. In a way I guess it is better to get their mutual insecurities out of the way in the beginning. they will deal with other people looking at their partner, or as Bette put it ‘leering’ probably every time they go out. Good to see Tina had the good sense to calm Bette down before she left. great post.
Trouble in paradise, but I know u going set it right, right? Love this story and all ur other stories though it has been a while since we had a chapter of L&P:)PPS
Hey Ally… glad to see you back was almost about to send you a PM as I was seriously beginning to worry having not seen any post from you for a while. Missed you like heck…Hope everything is fine with you … excellent update as usally you are the best no matter what the FAN Fiction awards might indicate.Your adoring fan always CG
I’m glad you’re back to writing. Excellent chapter. I was worried about you but didn’t want to intrude.
Bette did’t seem to practice what she preached.But its all new to her, and its scary when you have something to lose. It’s getting more exciting Ally :)
WB!!!!
Welcome back, Ally!! Missed ya! I hope the man at the pool wasn’t the man Tina has to meet with! Bette needs to rein in her jealousy. But, realizing that she’s new at being in a relationship, hopefully she will listen to what Tina’s saying. She needs to work on a serious apology to Tina! Glad you’re back!!!
Of course Mr. Leer is going to be Mr. Huff (?). You are such a great writer that the love and the fear Bette displayed are all so real. And of course dramatic.
Of course Mr. Leer is going to be Mr. Huff (?). You are such a great writer that the love and the fear Bette displayed are all so real. And of course dramatic.
Trouble coming and hope they will talk more!
Excellent update!! love the driection you are going in, this will really make them think and work things out,learn to be trthful and trusty worthy!! :)
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Did Bette just completely go bonkers. I hope that Bette can right herself and see how insecure she is being. Bette needs to learn to trust herself and Tina.
Thank you for a great chapter. It is good to have you back. Take care.
So stupid, yet so typical…really how many of us have acted like that…and on both sides…Pride is not always a beautiful thing!!!
Welcome back Ally! I’m one of your avid readers even though I don’t leave comments a lot! I love all your stories and I hope you would continue to share your wonderful talent to us, your humble readers. I just got a little worried after not seeing you post over a week – it is so not you..LOL. I hope everything is well with your life. Well, I need to stop rambling here and just read this chap, right?LOL..Thanks again for posting!
I’m glad to see you posted.I was wondering where you were.Hope everything is ok.I hope that man was the man Tina had a meeting with.Bette needs to trust Tina.
Oh Bette can’t help it…anyone can make her jealous over Tina. Tina is Bette’s weakness and as we see it starts from day one. I love this story and your update!
i truly adore this story.
Hi Ally, glad to see that you’ve posted. Was wondering why you’ve been silent. I hope all is well. As usual, amazing post.
Do as I say, not as I do.
Bette needs to get on her knees and start apologizing for being a hippocritic ass!!! She can be so irrating sometimes. She better have some big gesture ready when Tina gets home!!