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Something so right – chapter 22
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“No going out and picking a woman up ?”
“Only if its you and that would just be a waste of time and effort when I can just come over to your place and help you cook a meal and hold you “
“Alice will tell you that you are going soft”
“Alice can go to hell “ Bette replied
“She’s missed you going to Liquid with her “
“She’s a grown up – well that’s the rumour. Alice can cope without me “
“Seriously Bette I don’t want you to lose touch with your friends “
“I am not going to be able to shake Alice and Shane off don’t worry about that. But they understand that I want to be with you “
“All the same Bette Porter in love is just going to be too rich a seam for Alice to avoid – you know that ?”
“Alice always goes over the top “
“There will be a lot of jokes “
“I know – does it bother you ?”
“No – its obvious that Alice cares for you a great deal “
“I suppose I care for her even though she drives me insane “
“You wouldn’t have her any other way “
“I wouldn’t go that far “ Bette replied dryly
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They arrived at LAX at 6pm and by 8:30pm Bette was in her own apartment. She checked all her answer phone messages and made notes about what calls she needed to return the next day and which ones could wait until next week. She turned her stereo on and selected a couple of CD’s that reflected her mood – very gentle while she loaded her washing machine and sorted her luggage. By 11 she had a pile of clean clothes and everything in her apartment was tidy and organised. She tried to watch TV for a few minutes but failed – she was missing Tina. Somehow the flat wasn’t her haven as usual – it was missing one very important ingredient – one 5ft 6in tall blonde newly out lesbian. She picked up her car keys and headed out.
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Tina was sitting in bed watching the TV. While they had been away they has watched nothing apart from the weather reports – now she was home she was keen to catch up on world affairs.
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Love this Bette,so sweet, shy,and very much in love. thanks
Hiya Ally, I was so excited to see another post for this amazing tale. I love and adore it. Great to see how smitten Bette is. I think that Tina handled it all perfectly especially her choice of outfits to welcome Bette into her home. I do get the sense that their will be a U-Hal=ul in their future soon. Mind Tina is playing safe so may manage to restrain Bette’s ardor. I’ll be here ready to read the next chapter. Many thanks for sharing this delightful beginning of the great romance that is Bette and Tina. Your Loyal Fan.
everytime i think i have read every kind of coupling you have ever written you seem to pull another something special out of the hidden reservoir of talent you seem to have an abundence of, really, really great job with this chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Well said and done Ally, I loved how Vulnerable Bette is and how in control and sure Tina is, can’t wait for the next one dear, have a great day.
There are so full of love, adoration and respect and desire its contagious. This is timely with Valentines day where you’re from, isn’t it?
Ally, great one and you continue to show them as everyday people that just happened to fall in love with each other. You continue to show them in love and dealing with the strife and struggles of being in a unique love. Absolutely beautiful and so fitting tha this chapters comes out today, the universal day for lovers. PPS
Sweetest love story of the day.
Perfect Valentine’s treat… delectable as chocolate without the calories! So happy to have you back, Ally.
So beautiful Ally. Happy Valentine’s day to you!
the exchange of trinkets. how lesbian??!!! thx
wonderful…
May you never run out of stories to write. May your enthusiasm to share your talent never wane. May the love and joy in your heart never run dry. Thanks for this chapter and Happy Hearts’ Day, Ally! :)
Hey Ally great story. I love the feeling of completeness that you are giving us. The list of firsts for each of them is extensive. The fact that they both realize it is amazing. They are definately vibrating on the same wavelength. Thanks for sharing.
Simply beautiful and perfect! I especially love how Bette was pining for Tina merely a few hours after seeing her. Thank you Ally. I’ve just read all your three posts. I’m so happy that L&P is back. Please post the updates soon. Thanks again for taking the time to share.
So cute that tina got bette to say she wanted to stay with her… bette is like a love sick puppy.. :)
This was the perfect Valentine’s present. I love that Bette went to Tina when she was missing her and even more that Tina coaxed her into saying she wanted to stay with her. They are just too damn cute!
Aaawwwww…what a sweet love chapter for Valentine’s Day. Thanks Ally. Happy Valentine’s Day to you!
Aww, this story is like having Valentines Day every time you post it. That is probably why its so awesome. I hope they navigate being back in LA well. Bette with her friends and.. admirers. Tina with coming out at work. PPS.
That was beautiful!