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Something so right – chapter 22
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Bette arrived at Tina’s door hoping that her girlfriend wouldn’t mind her sudden arrival. She tapped on the door and it opened. Bette stepped inside and the door slammed shut behind her. Bette ogled at the sight that greeted her. Tina was standing naked with her long blonde hair loose around her shoulders and a big smile on her face. She held a small object in her hand – with a flourish she presented it to Bette. It was a toothbrush still in its plastic wrapper.
“What am I going to do with you ?” Tina asked grinning
“I missed you – I missed everything about you – I especially missed the sight I am now looking at”
“And that would be my breasts would it ?”
“It would – and your smile and your beautiful face “
“I have said this once and I will say it again — you are so freaking smooth Porter “
“Only for you” Bette replied “ I hope its okay that I rang you “
Tina dropped the latch on the door and moved closer to Bette
“Its fine “ she whispered wrapping her arms round Bette’s neck and kissing her lover on the mouth. Bette let out a moan as the kiss deepened and they slowly sank into one another’s arms.
“I love you “ Tina muttered as she kissed Bette again and again
“I love you “ Bette replied “ You are so fantastic “
“I know – now come and see my bedroom “
Bette held onto Tina and looked down at her
“Bit different from the first time I was here “
“I know – who would have thought that all these short weeks later we would be here and in love and we would both be naked “
“I’m not naked “ Bette said inadvertently walking straight into Tina’s trap
“You soon will be “
Tina took Bette’s car keys from her hand and dropped them on a small table beside the door along with Bette‘s new toothbrush. She kissed Bette on the lips and began to un button her light blue cotton blouse. When Tina eased the blouse away from Bette’s body she smiled . The brunette wasn’t wearing a bra. Tina lent forward and taking one of Bette’s breasts in her mouth she sucked at it appreciatively. Bette tasted as good in LA as she had in Hawaii – that was good to know. Bette held onto Tina’s hair as the blonde brought her nipple to its fullest peak and then switched so she could do the same for the other breast.
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Love this Bette,so sweet, shy,and very much in love. thanks
Hiya Ally, I was so excited to see another post for this amazing tale. I love and adore it. Great to see how smitten Bette is. I think that Tina handled it all perfectly especially her choice of outfits to welcome Bette into her home. I do get the sense that their will be a U-Hal=ul in their future soon. Mind Tina is playing safe so may manage to restrain Bette’s ardor. I’ll be here ready to read the next chapter. Many thanks for sharing this delightful beginning of the great romance that is Bette and Tina. Your Loyal Fan.
everytime i think i have read every kind of coupling you have ever written you seem to pull another something special out of the hidden reservoir of talent you seem to have an abundence of, really, really great job with this chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Well said and done Ally, I loved how Vulnerable Bette is and how in control and sure Tina is, can’t wait for the next one dear, have a great day.
There are so full of love, adoration and respect and desire its contagious. This is timely with Valentines day where you’re from, isn’t it?
Ally, great one and you continue to show them as everyday people that just happened to fall in love with each other. You continue to show them in love and dealing with the strife and struggles of being in a unique love. Absolutely beautiful and so fitting tha this chapters comes out today, the universal day for lovers. PPS
Sweetest love story of the day.
Perfect Valentine’s treat… delectable as chocolate without the calories! So happy to have you back, Ally.
So beautiful Ally. Happy Valentine’s day to you!
the exchange of trinkets. how lesbian??!!! thx
wonderful…
May you never run out of stories to write. May your enthusiasm to share your talent never wane. May the love and joy in your heart never run dry. Thanks for this chapter and Happy Hearts’ Day, Ally! :)
Hey Ally great story. I love the feeling of completeness that you are giving us. The list of firsts for each of them is extensive. The fact that they both realize it is amazing. They are definately vibrating on the same wavelength. Thanks for sharing.
Simply beautiful and perfect! I especially love how Bette was pining for Tina merely a few hours after seeing her. Thank you Ally. I’ve just read all your three posts. I’m so happy that L&P is back. Please post the updates soon. Thanks again for taking the time to share.
So cute that tina got bette to say she wanted to stay with her… bette is like a love sick puppy.. :)
This was the perfect Valentine’s present. I love that Bette went to Tina when she was missing her and even more that Tina coaxed her into saying she wanted to stay with her. They are just too damn cute!
Aaawwwww…what a sweet love chapter for Valentine’s Day. Thanks Ally. Happy Valentine’s Day to you!
Aww, this story is like having Valentines Day every time you post it. That is probably why its so awesome. I hope they navigate being back in LA well. Bette with her friends and.. admirers. Tina with coming out at work. PPS.
That was beautiful!