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Something so right – chapter 26
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“Hey “ Tina said smiling
“Hello “
“You okay ?”
“I’m not sure – can you nip my thigh cos I cannot feel my legs “
Tina chuckled “ So full of shit “ she said
“Are you trying to kill me ?”
“What good would that be ?”
“Just checking “ Bette said touching Tina face – Tina lent forward and kissed Bette
“I love you “ Tina said brushing several of Bette’s dark hairs away from her face.
“I love you “ Bette replied “Thank you “
Tina smiled “I could be talked into repeating that when we get back “
“Do you want to stay home – I could happily lie here for the whole evening “
“No – we’re meeting the others “
“What time is it ?”
Tina looked at her watch “Time we were in the shower “
Bette kissed Tina on the lips
“I think you might have to wheel me into Liquid in a wheelchair “
“No one ever died of too many orgasms “ Tina replied
“I think you might be trying “
Tina smiled – she stroked Bette’s face
“I just love tasting you and making you come “
“You seem to enjoy your work “
Tina eased away “ I’ll be in the shower – we better get a move on – we’re going to be late as it is “
Bette nodded “I’ll follow you in “
Tina got up “Okay – see you soon “
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It was almost 8pm when Bette parked her car in front of Liquid. She looked across at Tina – she was wearing tight black jeans and a gorgeous white shirt and Bette could see her grandmother’s ring on a silver chain around Tina’s neck. The whiteness of the shirt showed off Tina’s suntan. Tina’s outfit was finished off by a pair of sexy black leather boots that added 3 inches to her height.
Tina looked across at Bette
“You okay ?”
Bette nodded “I really could have stayed in “
“We have to do it babe “
“I know – but I don’t think I want to “
“Why ?”
“Its my past Tina – I don’t want to be reminded of what I was “
“Bette “ Tina took hold of her hand “We just have to get it out of the way “
“If this gets too bad I am going to get us out of there “
“It will be okay “
“I hope so “
Tina lent across and kissed her lover “I promise you “
Bette looked at Tina – she had never seen the blonde looking more beautiful or assured. At times like she felt so unworthy of Tina who stroked Bette’s face
“I promise you that its going to be okay and when we get back to your place we can resume where I left off “
Bette took hold of Tina’s hand
“I am so lucky “
“We both are “
“Lets get this show on the road “ Tina said easing away from Bette and getting out of the car. She waited for Bette to get out of the car and smiled at her. Bette was wearing black trousers and a black shirt – Tina waited until Bette joined her – Tina flattened down Bette’s collar and touched the necklace that she had given her lover.
“I think the worst thing is going to be how much grief Alice is going to be giving you “
Bette smiled – she hoped that was the worst thing she would have to deal with.
Bette took hold of Tina’s hand and gently kissed her on the lips
“Well we are here now – we might as well go inside “ Tina was trying to keep Bette’s mood light
They reached the door of the club and Bette pulled it open. She looked at Tina
“Just promise you won’t let go of my hand “
“I promise “
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I think Bette’s fears are understandable and I am glad that Tina is finally okay with going. You know, if Bette plays her cards right, Tina could have a blast. Thanks for the post, I love this story…
Wow what a way to reassure her lover, Bette is so lucky I can tell ya, great technique Tina, this chapter was awesome, keep posting darling. thank you have a great day.
Whoo-hoo, Tina got a promotion. Eric is going to just die from all the good invading Tina’s life and he is left behind. HAHAHA! As usual you brought us hot steamy lovin’ and it was picture perfect. I am glad that Tina is standing strong in facing the Liguid crowd and showing off what belongs with her – BETTE & TINA FOREVER! :)
This was awesome Ally. I can’t wait for the next chapter at Liquid. Am wondering if the drama queen will be coming out???? Please post soon.
This was awesome Ally. I can’t wait for the next chapter at Liquid. Am wondering if the drama queen will be coming out???? Please post soon.
we keep chattin bout Bette fendin off, but what about a one Miss TK!, Jeez, a Jealous Bette, does amuse me lol!, Lovely, Hot! chapter!, pps.
Excellent update!! fantastic how tina take complete control of the situation.. knowing how insecure bette is. yeah for tina and her promotion.. i can see tina being hit on and bette trying to keep cool about it… :)
I want more…more…more…the night is young…
I want to know what Tina did to mark Bette so that anyone would know she was taken. Damn, I have to wait for the next post…damn you Ally and your cliff hangers!
ohhhhhh that was good!! i’m waiting to see what happens in the club….please post soon
Tina is as beautiful and sexy ast Bette,but so different. What is going to happen if some one comes on to Tina ???? Will the green eye monster come out in Porter?? thanks
that was great. um….could you please post the next chapter soon because i’m dying to see what’s going to happen at liquid. thanks
thx for the sun afternoon delight.
Hello Ally, that was just so perfect… I absolutely loved that ending… no matter how passionate these two are in their love for one another… the fact that Bette asked Tina to promise not to let go of her hand was just so sweet and so personal… the fact that if they lose this connection she will drift away… I love Bette’s vulnerabilities and you show them just so perfectly. You are brilliant my friend… just brilliant. Sincerely, JC
awww… the ending of this chap is so lovely. This is one hot chapter Ally. I cant wait for the Liquid scene to unfold. Bette is too worried abt ppl hitting her that she overlooked the fact that Tina’s gonna get hit real good. Oh it’s so gonna get good. Liquid – Bring it ON! Post soon please.
that was a sweet ending. I love how vulnerable Bette can be.
I have this bad premonition that Bette is going to run…hopefully not far and possibly soon. Her demons are going to haunt her into insecurity…Great story and chapter!!!!
Wonderful and you said you were afraid of not having the skill with the sex scenes. You got it ally, totally. The ending was lovely as well- poor Bette having to deal with her past but she does have Tina and love after all,
1st reaction? oh u bloody tease!!! Lol…their lovemaking is gorgeous. How did T mark B that she hasn’t realised yet? Apart from knackering her out so she’s not tempted by any of her would be harem???? Love this story so pps.
Very hot and very sweet at the same time. Ally I don’t think bettewill have a problem falling offthe wagon, she’s going to be too busy being jelous of all the women looking at T to turn into the old Bette. Hope she doesn’t end up b***h slapping anyone.
Love, love, loved it. Hopefully Tina isn’t too tied up with her new job. I’m a little worried that Bette is worried about fending off her admirers. I hope she pulls through.. their first big outing at Liquid needs to be solid. PPS.
Hello AllyE, Words fail me in thank you so much for this wondrous story. Just love the love between Bette and Tina. The hot, sticky and sexy loving is awesome but also the quiet, gentle and so telling moments just blow me out of the water. These gals have connected but are also part of a grown up and honest relatiosnhip. Your dialogue conveys the love that they are both a part of. Just adorable. I do hope that your story is foretelling as Episode 5.12 seems to follow your visit to Liquid. Can’t wait to read what happens next. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
Damn they are hot and awesome, love them!