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    Something so right – chapter 26

    Story written on February 23, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Friday evening

     

    “I thought you said I was good at this when we started”

    “You are getting better “ Bette said smiling at Tina

     

    “And for that right answer you get a special prize “

    Bette spoke before she had time to consider her words

     

    “And what might that be ?”

     

    Tina’s reply was to start kissing and licking Bette’s clit again

     

    “Oh dear God “ Bette managed to say as once again she began to experience for herself just how good Tina was at going down on her. Tina took her time on this occasion – making slower licks and being more gentle as she knew that Bette would be feeling very sensitive. She knew enough about her own skills as a lover to know that it wasn’t going to be that hard to push Bette over the edge again. Bette was stroking Tina’s hair as she continued to gently make love to her. Bette held onto the top of the bed as Tina started to increase the speed at which she licked and sucked at her clit.

     

     

    This time Bette felt her orgasm increasing from a very long way off — every time she expected it to rush over her and take over her whole body it held itself back. Bette only knew that the whole world around her was getting dark as Tina’s skilled tongue pushed her higher and higher. As she gripped the head board tighter she suddenly knew that this orgasm was going to be one that totally wrecked her. She wanted to speak – to let Tina know that she was so close but she wasn’t able to.

     

    When her orgasm hit her it was the release that enabled her to cry out – she cried out Tina’s name as her orgasm began to crash into her again and again. She was fighting for air as very slowly her orgasm began to fade and she returned to her normal state. She became aware that Tina was holding her in her arms

     

    “Its okay babe – I’ve got you “

     

    Bette tried to open her eyes but couldn’t – she relaxed into Tina’s arms until she had regained enough of her facilities for her to open her eyes and look at her blonde lover who had her juices all over her mouth.

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    1. I think Bette’s fears are understandable and I am glad that Tina is finally okay with going. You know, if Bette plays her cards right, Tina could have a blast. Thanks for the post, I love this story…

    2. Wow what a way to reassure her lover, Bette is so lucky I can tell ya, great technique Tina, this chapter was awesome, keep posting darling. thank you have a great day.

    3. Whoo-hoo, Tina got a promotion. Eric is going to just die from all the good invading Tina’s life and he is left behind. HAHAHA! As usual you brought us hot steamy lovin’ and it was picture perfect. I am glad that Tina is standing strong in facing the Liguid crowd and showing off what belongs with her – BETTE & TINA FOREVER! :)

    7. Excellent update!! fantastic how tina take complete control of the situation.. knowing how insecure bette is. yeah for tina and her promotion.. i can see tina being hit on and bette trying to keep cool about it… :)

    9. I want to know what Tina did to mark Bette so that anyone would know she was taken. Damn, I have to wait for the next post…damn you Ally and your cliff hangers!

    11. Tina is as beautiful and sexy ast Bette,but so different. What is going to happen if some one comes on to Tina ???? Will the green eye monster come out in Porter?? thanks

    14. Hello Ally, that was just so perfect… I absolutely loved that ending… no matter how passionate these two are in their love for one another… the fact that Bette asked Tina to promise not to let go of her hand was just so sweet and so personal… the fact that if they lose this connection she will drift away… I love Bette’s vulnerabilities and you show them just so perfectly. You are brilliant my friend… just brilliant. Sincerely, JC

    15. awww… the ending of this chap is so lovely. This is one hot chapter Ally. I cant wait for the Liquid scene to unfold. Bette is too worried abt ppl hitting her that she overlooked the fact that Tina’s gonna get hit real good. Oh it’s so gonna get good. Liquid – Bring it ON! Post soon please.

    17. I have this bad premonition that Bette is going to run…hopefully not far and possibly soon. Her demons are going to haunt her into insecurity…Great story and chapter!!!!

    18. Wonderful and you said you were afraid of not having the skill with the sex scenes. You got it ally, totally. The ending was lovely as well- poor Bette having to deal with her past but she does have Tina and love after all,

    19. 1st reaction? oh u bloody tease!!! Lol…their lovemaking is gorgeous. How did T mark B that she hasn’t realised yet? Apart from knackering her out so she’s not tempted by any of her would be harem???? Love this story so pps.

    20. Very hot and very sweet at the same time. Ally I don’t think bettewill have a problem falling offthe wagon, she’s going to be too busy being jelous of all the women looking at T to turn into the old Bette. Hope she doesn’t end up b***h slapping anyone.

    21. Love, love, loved it. Hopefully Tina isn’t too tied up with her new job. I’m a little worried that Bette is worried about fending off her admirers. I hope she pulls through.. their first big outing at Liquid needs to be solid. PPS.

    22. Hello AllyE, Words fail me in thank you so much for this wondrous story. Just love the love between Bette and Tina. The hot, sticky and sexy loving is awesome but also the quiet, gentle and so telling moments just blow me out of the water. These gals have connected but are also part of a grown up and honest relatiosnhip. Your dialogue conveys the love that they are both a part of. Just adorable. I do hope that your story is foretelling as Episode 5.12 seems to follow your visit to Liquid. Can’t wait to read what happens next. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.

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