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    Something so right -chapter 25

    Story written on February 22, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Tina talks to Helena and then Bette and Tina go to the gym

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

     

    Chapter 25

    Tina had been working all day in her office – she was beginning to think about whether she should take some work home when her phone rang – the long ring-tone told her that it was an internal call.

    “Hello “

     

    “Tina – Helena’s here “

     

    “Oh great -tell her to come through “

     

    Tina threw her pen down and stretched her limbs -she really needed to go to the gym but she‘d left her sports bag fully packed at home by accident . She was stiff from sitting at her desk all day while she caught up on all the paperwork and rescheduled meetings that had piled up while she had been away. With luck Helena would either want to go to the gym or for a cocktail -Tina really didn’t mind which at that moment.

     

    The door opened and Tina looked at her best friend -as always the British brunette looked like she had stepped off a fashion shoot. Today she was wearing white trousers, high black boots and a very expensive looking light blue blouse.

     

    “Darling – I am sorry that we missed lunch but I have been busy”

    “Oh yeah – what’s her name ?”

     

    “Tina – no woman would keep me from my best friend “

    “That’s very sweet of you to say Helena “

     

     

    Tina got up and hugged Helena -Helena looked at the blonde- oh yes – there was something very different about Tina. They sat down and Tina poured Helena a vodka- she grabbed a bottle of orange juice and sat facing her friend

     

    “I believe that the ranks of lesbians got another convert “

     

    Tina laughed at Helena’s phrase

     

    “Yes – I got my membership pack and everything “

     

    “So how was Hawaii – all you told me on the phone was that you had pulled off the deal of the century and were the golden girl “

     

    “I did and I am “

     

    “I knew that you could do it -well done Tina “

    “Thank you “

     

    “But I really came to ask you about how you are doing as a fledgling lesbian ?”

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    5. Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.

    11. Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!

    14. HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    18. Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC

    19. Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS

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