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    Something so right – chapter 26

    Story written on February 23, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Friday evening

     

    Bette had been in the shower and was about to turn on the TV when the door sounded and she went to answer it. Tina was standing at the door carrying her over night bag with a big grin on her face

     

    “Well hello there Ms Porter “ Tina said dropping into her broadest Carolina accent

     

    Bette immediately brightened from her dark mood when she saw Tina and her infectious smile

     

    “Hello Ms Kennard — why don’t you come into my humble abode ?”

    “Be glad to “

     

    Tina stepped inside and dropped her bag on the floor and closed the door making sure she dropped the latch at the same time.

     

    “Can I get you anything ?”

     

    “Beer if you’ve got one “ Tina replied

     

    “There’s a pack in the fridge “

     

    “I’ll get it – do you want one ?”

    “Not for me “

     

    Tina raised her eyebrow at Bette

     

    “Not like you “

     

    “Not in the mood – been for a run and I am feeling virtuous “

     

    “Good for you – I might go for a run tomorrow morning – -well it could be tomorrow afternoon by the time we get out of bed “

     

    “Help yourself – you know where everything is “

     

    “I do “ Tina raised a eyebrow at Bette and strolled into the kitchen. Every time Tina stepped into Bette’s kitchen she laughed. Bette had top of the range pans and wok’s and all sorts of great equipment – the funny thing was that she never used them. Tina took a bottle of beer and opened it. She walked to the kitchen door and looked out at Bette who had just flopped onto the sofa with her long bare legs stretched out over.

     

    Tina was in such awe of Bette’s body – they had only been lovers for two weeks but already Tina knew that physically they were very compatible. Tina had been surprised at how tender Bette could be in bed. Somehow she had expected Bette Porter to be demanding and forceful but if either of them could be said to be wild it was Tina herself.

     

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    1. I think Bette’s fears are understandable and I am glad that Tina is finally okay with going. You know, if Bette plays her cards right, Tina could have a blast. Thanks for the post, I love this story…

    2. Wow what a way to reassure her lover, Bette is so lucky I can tell ya, great technique Tina, this chapter was awesome, keep posting darling. thank you have a great day.

    3. Whoo-hoo, Tina got a promotion. Eric is going to just die from all the good invading Tina’s life and he is left behind. HAHAHA! As usual you brought us hot steamy lovin’ and it was picture perfect. I am glad that Tina is standing strong in facing the Liguid crowd and showing off what belongs with her – BETTE & TINA FOREVER! :)

    7. Excellent update!! fantastic how tina take complete control of the situation.. knowing how insecure bette is. yeah for tina and her promotion.. i can see tina being hit on and bette trying to keep cool about it… :)

    9. I want to know what Tina did to mark Bette so that anyone would know she was taken. Damn, I have to wait for the next post…damn you Ally and your cliff hangers!

    11. Tina is as beautiful and sexy ast Bette,but so different. What is going to happen if some one comes on to Tina ???? Will the green eye monster come out in Porter?? thanks

    14. Hello Ally, that was just so perfect… I absolutely loved that ending… no matter how passionate these two are in their love for one another… the fact that Bette asked Tina to promise not to let go of her hand was just so sweet and so personal… the fact that if they lose this connection she will drift away… I love Bette’s vulnerabilities and you show them just so perfectly. You are brilliant my friend… just brilliant. Sincerely, JC

    15. awww… the ending of this chap is so lovely. This is one hot chapter Ally. I cant wait for the Liquid scene to unfold. Bette is too worried abt ppl hitting her that she overlooked the fact that Tina’s gonna get hit real good. Oh it’s so gonna get good. Liquid – Bring it ON! Post soon please.

    17. I have this bad premonition that Bette is going to run…hopefully not far and possibly soon. Her demons are going to haunt her into insecurity…Great story and chapter!!!!

    18. Wonderful and you said you were afraid of not having the skill with the sex scenes. You got it ally, totally. The ending was lovely as well- poor Bette having to deal with her past but she does have Tina and love after all,

    19. 1st reaction? oh u bloody tease!!! Lol…their lovemaking is gorgeous. How did T mark B that she hasn’t realised yet? Apart from knackering her out so she’s not tempted by any of her would be harem???? Love this story so pps.

    20. Very hot and very sweet at the same time. Ally I don’t think bettewill have a problem falling offthe wagon, she’s going to be too busy being jelous of all the women looking at T to turn into the old Bette. Hope she doesn’t end up b***h slapping anyone.

    21. Love, love, loved it. Hopefully Tina isn’t too tied up with her new job. I’m a little worried that Bette is worried about fending off her admirers. I hope she pulls through.. their first big outing at Liquid needs to be solid. PPS.

    22. Hello AllyE, Words fail me in thank you so much for this wondrous story. Just love the love between Bette and Tina. The hot, sticky and sexy loving is awesome but also the quiet, gentle and so telling moments just blow me out of the water. These gals have connected but are also part of a grown up and honest relatiosnhip. Your dialogue conveys the love that they are both a part of. Just adorable. I do hope that your story is foretelling as Episode 5.12 seems to follow your visit to Liquid. Can’t wait to read what happens next. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.

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